Singing— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer needs to be clearer and more natural. Avoid grammatical errors and unclear phrases like "while I thinking then I feel Rex" and "I felt overnight clouds." Try to express your ideas directly and use linking words to connect your points logically. Also, keep your answer concise and avoid redundancy.

Exemplo: Yes, I like singing because it helps me relax and reduce stress. For instance, when I feel sad, I go to my music room and sing, which instantly lifts my mood. Therefore, singing is a great way for me to feel better.

Sugestão: Your answer is understandable but could be improved by using more natural expressions and clearer structure. Instead of saying "bathroom singer," you could say "I usually sing casually at home." Also, use linking words to connect your ideas and avoid vague phrases like "I just know little bit about this."

Exemplo: To be honest, I have never taken formal singing lessons because I am not very interested in it. I usually sing casually at home, like in the bathroom. However, I did read a book about singing in school, which I found quite interesting.

Sugestão: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to express your feelings more clearly and use correct vocabulary. For example, instead of "I want to think for my father," say "I want to sing for my father." Also, explain why you want to sing for him with specific reasons and use linking words to organize your answer.

Exemplo: I would love to sing for my father because he means a lot to me. He is a very important person in my life, and I have a special song in my language that I always dedicate to him.

Sugestão: Your answer is confusing and contains many unclear phrases. Make sure to answer the question directly and use simple, clear sentences. Avoid unrelated or unclear expressions like "overnight cloud" and "to be nest answering am but." Use linking words to connect your ideas logically.

Exemplo: Of course, I believe singing can bring happiness to people. Many enjoy singing because it helps reduce stress and improves their mood. Singing allows people to express their feelings and feel joyful.

× Yes, I like singing because while I thinking then I feel Rex and it is very helpful to reduce stress.

✓ Yes, I like singing because while I am thinking, I feel relaxed and it is very helpful to reduce stress.

The verb 'thinking' requires the auxiliary verb 'am' to form the present continuous tense. Also, 'Rex' seems to be a typo and should be 'relaxed'. The present participle 'thinking' cannot stand alone without 'am' in this context.

× So most of the people tried to sing when they feel stressed.

✓ So most people try to sing when they feel stressed.

The phrase 'most of the people' is better expressed as 'most people' in general statements. Also, 'tried' is past tense but the sentence is general, so 'try' in present tense is appropriate.

× For example, last time I was bit sad and I just go to my music room and I just start singing.

✓ For example, last time I was a bit sad and I just went to my music room and I just started singing.

The verbs 'go' and 'start' should be in the past tense 'went' and 'started' to match the past time reference 'last time' and 'was'. Also, 'bit' needs the article 'a' to be correct.

× That time I felt overnight clouds, so I like it.

✓ At that time, I felt calm and peaceful, so I liked it.

The phrase 'felt overnight clouds' is unclear and likely incorrect. A more appropriate expression is 'felt calm and peaceful'. Also, 'like' should be past tense 'liked' to match the past event.

× To be honest, I'm not interested in this field but I'm just bathroom singer, so I never tried to learn about it.

✓ To be honest, I'm not interested in this field but I'm just a bathroom singer, so I have never tried to learn about it.

The phrase 'bathroom singer' needs the article 'a'. Also, 'never tried' should be 'have never tried' to correctly express experience up to now using present perfect tense.

× But I remembered in my school time I learned one book about it that was very interesting and I just know little bit about this, not that much.

✓ But I remember in my school days I read a book about it that was very interesting and I just know a little bit about this, not that much.

'Remembered' should be 'remember' to express a current memory. 'Learned one book' is incorrect; 'read a book' is correct. 'School time' is better as 'school days'. 'Little bit' needs the article 'a'.

× Definitely I want to think for my father because he might handsome person for me and he's my best part of my life.

✓ Definitely I want to sing for my father because he is a handsome person to me and he's the best part of my life.

'Want to think' should be 'want to sing' to match the context. 'Might handsome person' is incorrect; 'is a handsome person' is correct. 'Best part of my life' needs the definite article 'the'.

× Even I will think for my father and I have one song my father in my language all the time.

✓ I always think of my father and I have a song about my father in my language.

'Think for' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'think of'. 'One song my father' is unclear; it should be 'a song about my father'. 'All the time' is better expressed as 'always'.

× I dedicated that song to my father.

✓ I dedicate that song to my father.

Since the context is general or habitual, present tense 'dedicate' is more appropriate than past tense 'dedicated'. However, if referring to a past event, 'dedicated' is acceptable.

× Of course thinking can bring happiness to people.

✓ Of course singing can bring happiness to people.

The word 'thinking' is incorrect in this context; it should be 'singing' to answer the question about singing.

× Most of the people like singing even it helps to reduce stress and.

✓ Most people like singing because it helps to reduce stress.

'Most of the people' is better as 'Most people' in general statements. The sentence was incomplete and 'and' was unnecessary.

× We can feel overnight cloud while singing to be nest answering am but.

✓ We can feel a sense of calm while singing to be the best answer, I am sure.

The original sentence is unclear and contains nonsensical phrases. A clearer expression is provided to convey the intended meaning.