Singing— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 你的回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，例如“It's depends”应为“It depends”，“fear”用词不当，且句子结构不完整。建议简化句子结构，使用正确的时态和词汇，使表达更自然流畅。

Exemplo: It depends on the situation. When I am alone, I like to sing because I don't worry about disturbing others or making mistakes. However, I usually avoid singing in public places.

Sugestão: 回答中存在大量语法错误和词汇使用错误，如“see yourself”应为“sing”，“not never”是双重否定，句子结构混乱。建议使用简单句表达，注意时态和词汇的准确性。

Exemplo: No, I have never received professional singing training. However, I have learned some music theory because I have played the violin for more than 10 years.

Sugestão: 回答中语法错误较多，句子不完整且表达不清晰。建议先直接回答问题，然后用简洁的句子说明原因，避免重复和不完整的句子。

Exemplo: I usually prefer to sing for people I know well, like my family or close friends, because I am not confident singing in front of strangers.

Sugestão: 回答表达了观点，但句子结构混乱，词汇使用不当，如“cells”应为“songs”，“transfer fittings to me feeling”表达不清。建议使用更准确的词汇和清晰的句子结构。

Exemplo: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness. For example, sometimes I listen to songs in languages I don't understand, but the emotions in the music still make me feel happy.

× It's depends on different situations.

✓ It depends on different situations.

这里的主语是第三人称单数it，谓语动词depend应使用第三人称单数形式depends，但前面多了助动词is，导致语法错误。正确表达应去掉is，直接用depends。

× If I stay alone, definitely I would like to sing songs 'cause fear there's no problem about disturbing other peoples and they cannot make fun of my incorrect tongues and rhythms.

✓ If I stay alone, definitely I would like to sing songs because there is no problem disturbing other people and they cannot make fun of my incorrect tones and rhythms.

1. 'fear'应为because的口语缩写形式，正式写作应为because。2. 'other peoples'中的peoples是复数形式，表示民族，正确应为people。3. 'incorrect tongues'应为incorrect tones，tongues指语言，tones指音调。4. 'there's no problem about disturbing'中about多余，应直接用no problem disturbing。

× However, when I in a public place, I would definitely say.

✓ However, when I am in a public place, I would definitely say no.

句子缺少动词am，导致结构不完整；另外，句尾的say后应有宾语，推测为否定回答no。

× No, no, I've never known about how to see yourself particularly I'm not never receiving any professional training about seeing, but I do learn something about the professional musical theories 'cause I have learning how to play the violin's for more than 10 years based on that.

✓ No, no, I've never known how to sing. Particularly, I've never received any professional training about singing, but I have learned some professional musical theories because I have been learning how to play the violin for more than 10 years based on that.

1. 'see yourself'应为'sing'。2. 'I'm not never receiving'双重否定，应改为'I have never received'。3. 'do learn'时态不对，应为现在完成时'have learned'。4. 'have learning'应为'have been learning'。5. 'violin's'错误使用所有格，应为'violin'。

× Honestly, I never given that too much thought before.

✓ Honestly, I have never given that too much thought before.

缺少助动词have，完成时态应为have given。

× So if I have to choose which person I like to singing and you must be the people that I am familiar with such as my family members or my best friends because I'm I'm not good at singing.

✓ So if I have to choose which person I like to sing for, it must be the people that I am familiar with, such as my family members or my best friends, because I'm not good at singing.

1. 'like to singing'中动词不定式to后应接动词原形sing。2. 'you must be the people'主语不明，应改为it must be。3. 句子缺少介词for。

× So if I say into strangers that will be.

✓ So if I sing to strangers, that will be difficult.

句子结构不完整，缺少谓语和宾语，且表达不清晰，需补充完整。

× Take me as an example, sometimes there are some songs that different languages that I totally do not understand what the meaning of this sounds.

✓ Take me as an example, sometimes there are some songs in different languages that I totally do not understand the meaning of these songs.

1. 'songs that different languages'缺少介词in。2. 'this sounds'应为复数these songs。

× But the inner concept of these cells can successfully transfer fittings to me feeling.

✓ But the inner concept of these songs can successfully transfer feelings to me.

1. 'cells'应为'songs'。2. 'transfer fittings to me feeling'表达错误，应为'transfer feelings to me'。