Singing— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 답변이 자연스럽지 않고 문법적 오류가 있습니다. 'exciting' 대신 'excited'를 사용하고, 'leave like'는 의미가 불분명하므로 'love'로 수정해야 합니다. 또한, 문장을 간결하게 하여 중복을 피하고, 5문장 이내로 답변을 구성하세요.

Exemplo: Yes, I like singing because it makes me feel excited. Singing in front of an audience gives me a great sense of joy. Although I am not a professional, I love to sing whenever I have the chance.

Sugestão: 답변이 불완전하고 문법적으로 부정확합니다. 명확한 주제문을 제시하고, 구체적인 경험을 덧붙여야 합니다. 문장을 완성하고, 연결어를 사용하여 논리적으로 답변을 구성하세요.

Exemplo: No, I have never taken singing lessons. However, I enjoy singing in front of people. When I was 16, I performed at a school event, which was a memorable experience for me.

Sugestão: 'see for my mom'은 의미가 불분명하며, 'sing for my mom'으로 수정해야 합니다. 문장을 간결하고 명확하게 만들고, 과거와 현재의 경험을 연결하는 연결어를 사용하세요.

Exemplo: I want to sing for my mom because when I was younger, I used to sing songs for her. Even now, I try to sing for her whenever I can because it makes her happy.

Sugestão: 답변이 단편적이고 문장이 끊어져 있습니다. 완전한 문장으로 구성하고, 이유를 구체적으로 설명하며, 연결어를 사용해 논리적인 흐름을 만들어야 합니다.

Exemplo: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness to people because it allows them to express their emotions. Moreover, singing can create a joyful atmosphere and help people feel more relaxed.

× When I sing a song in front of a lot of audience, it makes me feel so exciting.

✓ When I sing a song in front of a lot of an audience, it makes me feel so excited.

'Audience' is a singular collective noun and requires an article 'an' before it. Also, 'exciting' describes something that causes excitement, but here the feeling is experienced by the speaker, so 'excited' is the correct adjective.

× it makes me feel so exciting.

✓ it makes me feel so excited.

The adjective 'exciting' describes something that causes excitement, while 'excited' describes the feeling of a person. Since the speaker is describing their own feeling, 'excited' is correct.

× So I will leave like singing so much even though I'm not a professional.

✓ So I will live like singing so much even though I'm not a professional.

The word 'leave' is incorrect here; the intended word is 'live'. This is a vocabulary error rather than a grammar problem, but correcting it is necessary for clarity.

× No, I haven't. Learn how to say.

✓ No, I haven't learned how to sing.

The sentence 'Learn how to say' is incomplete and incorrect. The correct phrase is 'learned how to sing' to express the intended meaning.

× But I really like to sing in in front of lot of people.

✓ But I really like to sing in front of a lot of people.

The phrase 'in in front of' contains a repeated preposition 'in'. Also, 'lot of people' requires the article 'a' before 'lot'.

× So when I was 16 years old, I. It was a.

✓ So when I was 16 years old, I started singing.

The original sentence is incomplete and unclear. A complete sentence is needed to convey the intended meaning.

× I want to see for my mom because when I was younger I used to sing a song in front of my mom and I still trying to sing on song at for my mom so I really like to see for my mom.

✓ I want to sing for my mom because when I was younger I used to sing a song in front of my mom and I am still trying to sing a song for my mom so I really like to sing for my mom.

The phrase 'see for my mom' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'sing for my mom'. Also, 'trying to sing on song at for my mom' is incorrect and should be 'trying to sing a song for my mom'. Prepositions and verb forms are corrected accordingly.

× I think singing can bring hapiness, two people alive because.

✓ I think singing can bring happiness to people alive because.

The phrase 'bring hapiness, two people alive' is incorrect. The correct phrase is 'bring happiness to people alive'. Also, 'hapiness' is misspelled; it should be 'happiness'.

× Singing. Makes. People feel. Happy.

✓ Singing makes people feel happy.

The original sentence is fragmented unnecessarily. It should be combined into a single coherent sentence.