Singing— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 你的回答不够连贯，语法和词汇使用不准确，建议练习用简单句表达观点，并且避免重复。可以先直接回答喜欢与否，再说明原因。

Exemplo: Yes, I like singing because it helps me relax and reduce stress. I often sing alone, which makes me feel peaceful.

Sugestão: 回答不清晰，语法错误较多，建议用简单句表达是否学过唱歌，并说明原因。避免使用不正确的词汇。

Exemplo: No, I have never learned how to sing seriously because I find it stressful. I prefer singing just for fun.

Sugestão: 回答不够明确，表达混乱。建议直接回答想为谁唱歌，并说明原因。注意时态和句子结构。

Exemplo: I usually sing for myself because I am not very good at singing. It helps me relax when I am alone.

Sugestão: 回答表达不流畅，语法错误较多。建议用完整句子表达观点，并举具体例子说明唱歌如何带来快乐。

Exemplo: Of course, singing can bring happiness. For example, when I sing alone, it makes me feel happy and relaxed.

× Annexing you 'cause I think that thing is uh. Relaxing and less stress for sing.

✓ Annexing you 'cause I think that thing is uh. Relaxing and less stressful for singing.

动词后面需要用动名词形式（-ing）表示动作或状态，这里'sing'应改为'singing'。

× And you only thing thing alone.

✓ And you only do it alone.

这里的'thing thing'是错误表达，应使用动词'do'来表达动作，且'only'应修饰动词。

× I have lever nerd, how to stay?

✓ I have never learned how to sing.

'lever nerd'是错误拼写，应为'never learned'，表示过去完成时态。

× Be 'cause I think that thing is a relaxed, relaxing thing.

✓ Because I think that thing is a relaxing thing.

'relaxed'是形容词，表示被动状态，'relaxing'表示使人放松的，符合语境。

× You find nerd how to say it seriously.

✓ You find learning how to sing seriously stressful.

原句结构混乱，需用动名词形式'learning'，并调整句子结构使其通顺。

× I will feel stressful.

✓ I will feel stressed.

'stressful'形容事物，'stressed'形容人感到压力，语境应使用'stressed'。

× I just wanted to see for myself, 'cause I'm not very good at singing.

✓ I just want to sing for myself, 'cause I'm not very good at singing.

'see for myself'与上下文不符，应为'sing for myself'。

× So I will just send you when I was relaxed.

✓ So I will just sing when I am relaxed.

'send'应为'sing'，且时态应保持一致，'when I am relaxed'。

× For example, I only sing.

✓ For example, I only sing.

此句无明显单复数错误，保持原句。

× When I was alone that can make me makes Maine.

✓ When I am alone, that can make me feel happy and relaxed.

时态应保持一致，'was'改为'am'，'makes Maine'为错误拼写，应为'feel happy and relaxed'。