Singing— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is a bit unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to give a direct response first, then explain with clear and simple sentences. Avoid redundancy and incomplete sentences. Use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

Exemplo: Yes, I like singing because it helps me relax and feel comfortable. When I sing songs or lyrics, it creates a peaceful atmosphere that calms my body and mind.

Sugestão: Your answer is relevant but has grammatical mistakes and some unclear phrases. Use past tense correctly and avoid unnecessary words. Also, try to be more specific about what you learned in music class.

Exemplo: No, I have never formally learnt how to sing. However, when I was in school, I took music classes where I learned about different types of music, which helped me appreciate singing more.

Sugestão: Your answer is confusing and repetitive. Avoid repeating phrases and focus on answering the question directly. Use clear sentences and correct grammar. Also, explain your experience briefly and logically with linking words.

Exemplo: I don't usually sing for a specific person. However, I remember once in school, I participated in a group singing event and we sang a song for our principal. She was very happy to hear it.

Sugestão: Your answer has good ideas but needs clearer structure and grammar. Use linking words like 'because' and 'so' properly. Avoid redundancy and try to express your opinion in a concise way with specific reasons.

Exemplo: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness because when people feel stressed, listening to music helps them relax and feel comfortable. Therefore, singing can improve their mood and make them happy.

× Absolutely, I like a singing because most of the time I think that if I single any kind of song or lyrics, so it gives me a very.

✓ Absolutely, I like singing because most of the time I think that if I sing any kind of song or lyrics, it gives me a very.

The phrase 'a singing' is incorrect because 'singing' here is a gerund and should not have an article 'a' before it. Also, 'single' is a wrong verb form; the correct verb is 'sing' in the base form after 'if I'. The sentence structure is also improved by removing 'so' which is unnecessary here.

× A comfort zone which is very prominent for me for make my body relax.

✓ A comfort zone which is very prominent for me to make my body relax.

The phrase 'for make' is incorrect; the correct infinitive form is 'to make'. This correction improves sentence structure and clarity.

× To be honest, in my life I never learn how to sing, but yes, I vividly remember when I was in my school, so there is a subject of music and at that time I learned different kinds of musics which helped me everyday.

✓ To be honest, in my life I have never learned how to sing, but yes, I vividly remember when I was in school, there was a subject called music and at that time I learned different kinds of music which helped me every day.

The verb 'learn' should be in the present perfect tense 'have never learned' to indicate experience up to now. 'In my school' should be 'in school' for natural English. 'There is' should be past tense 'there was' to match the past time frame. 'Musics' is incorrect; 'music' is uncountable and should not be plural. 'Everyday' as one word is an adjective; the correct phrase is 'every day' as two words.

× Who do you want to sing for?

✓ For whom do you want to sing?

In formal English, prepositions should not be left at the end of a sentence. 'Who do you want to sing for?' is informal; the correct form is 'For whom do you want to sing?' However, in spoken English, the original is acceptable.

× To be honest, to be honest, and I was saying for any specific person, but I vividly remember when I was in Maskandi school, I took a participate and that time I'll sing a song from our principal and she felt a very wonderful at that time because we sing a group song at that time.

✓ To be honest, I was not singing for any specific person, but I vividly remember when I was in Maskandi school, I took part and at that time I sang a song for our principal and she felt very wonderful because we sang a group song then.

The phrase 'I was saying for any specific person' is incorrect; it should be 'I was not singing for any specific person'. 'I took a participate' is wrong; the correct phrase is 'I took part'. 'I'll sing' should be past tense 'I sang' to match the past context. 'She felt a very wonderful' is incorrect; 'felt very wonderful' is correct. 'We sing' should be past tense 'we sang'. Repetition of 'at that time' is reduced for clarity.

× Absolutely, singing can bring happiness to individuals becaused sometimes they feel very pressurized and I think that is they listen a music so they can feel relax as well as they can feel very comfort at that time.

✓ Absolutely, singing can bring happiness to individuals because sometimes they feel very pressurized and I think that if they listen to music, they can feel relaxed as well as very comfortable at that time.

The word 'becaused' is incorrect; it should be 'because'. 'Listen a music' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'listen to music'. 'Feel relax' should be 'feel relaxed' (adjective form). 'Feel very comfort' should be 'feel very comfortable'. These corrections improve preposition use and adjective forms.

× So yes, in my opinion I think that people can feel a very happiness at that time.

✓ So yes, in my opinion I think that people can feel very happy at that time.

'Happiness' is an uncountable noun and should not be preceded by 'a'. The correct form is 'feel very happy' using the adjective 'happy' instead of the noun 'happiness'.