Singing— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Jawaban Anda kurang alami dan ada kesalahan tata bahasa. Cobalah untuk membuat kalimat yang lebih lengkap dan mengalir dengan baik, serta hindari kalimat yang terputus. Misalnya, jelaskan alasan Anda menyukai bernyanyi dengan kalimat yang utuh dan jelas.

Exemplo: Yes, I like singing because I have been told by my friends and colleagues that I have a beautiful voice, which makes me enjoy singing even more.

Sugestão: Jawaban Anda mengandung kesalahan tata bahasa dan kurang terstruktur dengan baik. Gunakan kalimat yang lengkap dan perhatikan penggunaan tense yang tepat. Jelaskan pengalaman belajar bernyanyi Anda dengan kalimat yang jelas dan teratur.

Exemplo: Yes, I have been learning to sing since I was in elementary school. My father taught me how to improve my voice and use singing techniques.

Sugestão: Jawaban Anda cukup baik namun ada beberapa kesalahan tata bahasa dan penggunaan kata. Cobalah untuk membuat kalimat yang lebih alami dan menghubungkan ide dengan kata penghubung yang tepat.

Exemplo: I want to sing for my best friend, my husband, and my parents because I love to see them happy, and singing in front of them makes me feel confident.

Sugestão: Jawaban Anda kurang lancar dan terdapat kesalahan tata bahasa serta penggunaan kata. Cobalah untuk membuat kalimat yang lebih koheren dan gunakan kata penghubung untuk mengalirkan ide dengan baik.

Exemplo: Yes, I think singing can bring happiness to people because when I sing, my heart is full of joy. Moreover, many songs have meaningful lyrics that can touch people's hearts.

× Yes, I like singing because my voice is. Very beautiful.

✓ Yes, I like singing because my voice is very beautiful.

The original sentence is fragmented due to an unnecessary period, causing a sentence structure error. Combining the two parts into one complete sentence improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× My friends or my colleagues told me that.

✓ My friends and my colleagues told me that.

Using 'or' suggests exclusivity, but here the speaker likely means both groups. Replacing 'or' with 'and' correctly includes both friends and colleagues.

× Yeah. I learn sing along singing since I was in elementary school, my father teach me how to. Sing a song with a better voice and some technique.

✓ Yeah. I have learned to sing along since I was in elementary school, and my father taught me how to sing a song with a better voice and some techniques.

The verbs 'learn' and 'teach' should be in the past tense ('have learned' and 'taught') to match the time frame indicated by 'since I was in elementary school.' Also, 'sing' should be preceded by 'to' to form the infinitive 'to sing.' The sentence is also corrected for clarity and completeness.

× I want to sing for my best friend, my husband, my parents because I love to see them. Happy and singing front of them makes me so confident.

✓ I want to sing for my best friend, my husband, and my parents because I love to see them happy, and singing in front of them makes me so confident.

The preposition 'front' should be 'in front of' to indicate position. Also, 'Happy' should not be capitalized and should be connected properly to the sentence. Adding 'and' before 'my parents' improves the list structure.

× And. There are so many good lyric. In the song that can touch people heart.

✓ And there are so many good lyrics in the song that can touch people's hearts.

'Lyric' should be plural 'lyrics' to match 'so many.' 'People heart' should be possessive 'people's hearts.' Also, unnecessary periods break the sentence, so they are removed for proper sentence flow.