Singing— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer shows enthusiasm but lacks clarity and contains grammatical errors. Try to give a clear topic sentence directly answering the question, followed by specific reasons using correct grammar and vocabulary. Avoid redundancy and unclear phrases.

Exemplo: Yes, I love singing because it brings me a lot of joy and helps me relax my mind after a busy day.

Sugestão: Your answer is relevant but somewhat disorganised and contains unclear phrases like 'a lot of Annie'. Use linking words to connect ideas logically and be specific about how you improved your singing.

Exemplo: No, I have never had formal singing lessons, but I have always been interested in singing. Therefore, I watched many tutorial videos and listened to various songs, which helped me improve my vocal skills.

Sugestão: Your answer is heartfelt but could be more coherent. Use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly and avoid sentence fragments. Also, try to be concise and clear in your explanation.

Exemplo: I want to sing for my God because I enjoy singing in the choir, which I believe is a meaningful way to worship and express my feelings through music.

Sugestão: Your answer is difficult to understand due to unclear and incomplete sentences. Focus on giving a clear topic sentence and support it with specific reasons or examples. Use correct grammar and vocabulary to express your ideas effectively.

Exemplo: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness to people because it helps them relax, express their emotions, and connect with others.

× Yes, I do love singing because it has given when I saying it gives me a lot of pleasure and it helps me to suit my mind.

✓ Yes, I do love singing because it gives me a lot of pleasure and it helps me to soothe my mind.

The phrase 'it has given when I saying' is grammatically incorrect and unclear. The correct form is 'it gives me a lot of pleasure' to express a general truth in the present tense. Also, 'suit my mind' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'soothe my mind', meaning to calm or relax. The error involves incorrect use of verb forms and vocabulary.

× No, actually I was never taught. Do sing.

✓ No, actually I was never taught to sing.

The phrase 'Do sing' is incorrect and incomplete. The correct form is 'taught to sing' to indicate the action that was not taught in the past. This is a past tense issue where the verb phrase needs to be completed properly.

× That's why I used to watch a lot of videos, a lot of Annie and listen to a lot of songs and that has helped me to learn singing and improve my vocals.

✓ That's why I used to watch a lot of videos, a lot of Annie, and listen to a lot of songs, and that has helped me to learn singing and improve my vocals.

The sentence is mostly correct but missing a comma before 'and' in a list, which improves clarity. No major grammar error but punctuation helps. 'Annie' might be a proper noun or name, so it is kept as is.

× That's why. I love singing and and I love to express my feelings. Through song, and it is said that a song is also kind of prayers.

✓ That's why I love singing, and I love to express my feelings through song, and it is said that a song is also a kind of prayer.

The original sentences are fragmented and have repeated conjunctions ('and and'). The correction combines the fragments into coherent sentences and corrects 'kind of prayers' to 'a kind of prayer' for singular agreement. This addresses sentence structure and conjunction use.

× Those were really interested in singing or those who really love singing.

✓ Those who are really interested in singing or those who really love singing.

The phrase 'Those were really interested' is incorrect because 'were' does not agree with the subject in this context. The correct form is 'Those who are really interested' to indicate present interest. This is an incorrect use of pronouns and verb agreement.

× It is there. A median of hapiness.

✓ It is a medium of happiness.

The phrase 'It is there. A median of hapiness.' is incorrect and unclear. The correct phrase is 'It is a medium of happiness.' 'Median' is incorrect here; 'medium' means a means or channel. Also, 'hapiness' is misspelled; correct spelling is 'happiness'. This addresses 'there be' issue and vocabulary.

× Singing and. Sue their mind, improve our. Brokers and give us a P.

✓ Singing can soothe the mind, improve our moods, and give us peace.

The original sentence is fragmented and contains unclear words like 'Sue their mind' and 'Brokers' and 'give us a P'. The correction interprets the intended meaning: 'soothe the mind', 'improve our moods', and 'give us peace'. This corrects pronoun use and vocabulary for clarity.