Singing— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Try to make your answer clearer and more natural by using simpler and more accurate expressions. Avoid unclear phrases like "feel touching, like filled" and "being charged as quiet and relaxing." Instead, explain your feelings directly and simply.

Exemplo: No, I don't like singing because I don't find it enjoyable. Also, singing makes me feel shy and uncomfortable, so I prefer to stay quiet and relaxed.

Sugestão: Focus on correct grammar and clearer sentence structure. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly. For example, use 'but' or 'however' to contrast your feelings about singing yourself and listening to others.

Exemplo: No, I have never learned how to sing, but I often watch videos of people singing and enjoy them very much. I like listening to others sing more than singing myself because I feel more comfortable that way.

Sugestão: Improve clarity by organizing your ideas and correcting grammar. Use linking words like 'for example' and 'especially' properly. Avoid unclear phrases like 'calf gain my trust' and 'shy door for judge.'

Exemplo: I would like to sing for people I trust and who are very close to me, for example, my best friend. I wouldn't feel shy or worried about being judged if I sang for her. It would be a great experience, especially if I sang for her on her birthday to surprise her.

Sugestão: Try to express your ideas more clearly and use linking words to connect your points. Avoid repetition and unclear phrases. For example, explain how singing helps people forget problems and feel relaxed in a simple and logical way.

Exemplo: Yes, I think singing can bring happiness to people because it helps them forget their problems and enjoy the moment. Also, singing can make people feel calm and relaxed.

× I don't like singing at all 'cause I don't find it much enjoyable and I also would feel touching, like filled.

✓ I don't like singing at all because I don't find it very enjoyable and I also would feel touched, like fulfilled.

The verb 'feel' should be followed by the past participle 'touched' to express an emotional state. Also, 'filled' is corrected to 'fulfilled' to convey a sense of satisfaction. 'Cause' is expanded to 'because' for formality.

× That I am being charged as quiet and relaxing.

✓ That I am feeling quiet and relaxed.

The phrase 'being charged as' is incorrect. The correct expression is 'feeling quiet and relaxed' to describe a state of calmness.

× No, I have never learn how to sync but I usually watch video of people singing an I enjoyed very much.

✓ No, I have never learned how to sing but I usually watch videos of people singing and I enjoy it very much.

The verb 'learn' should be in past participle 'learned' after 'have never'. 'Sync' is corrected to 'sing'. 'Video' should be plural 'videos' to match 'usually watch'. 'Enjoyed' is changed to present tense 'enjoy' to match 'usually'.

× I usually watch video of people singing an I enjoyed very much.

✓ I usually watch videos of people singing and I enjoy it very much.

The noun 'video' should be plural 'videos' because it refers to multiple instances. Also, 'an' is corrected to 'and'.

× When other people singing I like to listen to them and for me I don't like to sing myself.

✓ When other people are singing, I like to listen to them and I don't like to sing myself.

The verb phrase 'other people singing' needs the auxiliary verb 'are' to form the present continuous tense 'are singing'.

× Who do you want to sing for? Student: I would say I would like to sing for people that. Calf gain my trust in someone that is very close, for example my best friend.

✓ I would say I would like to sing for people that I can trust, someone who is very close, for example my best friend.

'Calf gain' is incorrect and replaced with 'I can trust'. 'That' is replaced with 'who' when referring to people.

× I wouldn't get shy door for judge if I sync for her.

✓ I wouldn't get shy or feel judged if I sing for her.

'Door for judge' is incorrect; corrected to 'or feel judged'. 'Sync' corrected to 'sing'.

× It would have been a very good experience especially if I sing for her on her birthday and surprising her.

✓ It would be a very good experience especially if I sing for her on her birthday and surprise her.

The conditional 'would have been' is changed to 'would be' to match the present/future hypothetical. 'Surprising' is corrected to 'surprise' to maintain parallel verb form.

× Yes, I do think that saying can help bring happiness to people in some way because it could make them forget about what the problem was for the problem was an just enjoy the times as it us.

✓ Yes, I do think that singing can help bring happiness to people in some way because it can make them forget about their problems and just enjoy the time as it is.

'Saying' corrected to 'singing'. 'Could' changed to 'can' for present possibility. 'What the problem was for the problem was an' is corrected to 'their problems'. 'Times as it us' corrected to 'time as it is'.

× It's still happening. Yeah. And another thing is that it helps us in a way to feel calm and relaxed as well.

✓ It's still happening. Yeah. And another thing is that it helps us feel calm and relaxed as well.

The phrase 'helps us in a way to feel' is simplified to 'helps us feel' for natural present tense usage.