Singing— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Jawaban Anda sudah cukup baik, tetapi Anda perlu membuat kalimat lebih alami dan menghindari pengulangan kata seperti "I feel" yang terlalu sering. Cobalah untuk menggunakan variasi kata dan struktur kalimat yang lebih sederhana dan efektif.

Exemplo: Yes, I really enjoy singing because it lifts my mood and creates a positive atmosphere around me.

Sugestão: Jawaban Anda kurang jelas dan terdapat kesalahan tata bahasa serta kalimat yang tidak lengkap. Perbaiki struktur kalimat dan gunakan kalimat yang lebih teratur serta jelas untuk menjelaskan pengalaman Anda belajar menyanyi.

Exemplo: Yes, I have learned how to sing. I was a member of the choir committee at my school and took singing lessons during senior high school.

Sugestão: Jawaban Anda kurang koheren dan terdapat kesalahan tata bahasa serta penggunaan kata yang kurang tepat. Cobalah untuk membuat kalimat yang lebih jelas dan terstruktur dengan baik, serta gunakan kosakata yang sesuai.

Exemplo: I like to sing for myself because it makes me feel comfortable and more positive. Singing helps me to appreciate and motivate myself.

Sugestão: Jawaban Anda mengandung beberapa kesalahan tata bahasa dan kalimat yang terputus-putus. Perbaiki penggunaan kalimat lengkap dan gunakan kata penghubung untuk membuat jawaban lebih koheren dan mudah dipahami.

Exemplo: Of course, singing happy songs can bring happiness to people because they spread positive vibes. However, sad songs like ballads can make me feel emotional and thoughtful.

× Yes, I like singing a lot because when I'm singing I feel happy and I feel like all up, all of the atmosphere around me is really positive.

✓ Yes, I like singing a lot because when I sing, I feel happy and I feel like all of the atmosphere around me is really positive.

The phrase 'when I'm singing' should be 'when I sing' to correctly express habitual action in the present tense. Using the present participle 'singing' here is incorrect because it implies an ongoing action rather than a general habit.

× Yes, I have learned how to sing because I'm the. I'm the committee of choir organization in my school before Anne.

✓ Yes, I have learned how to sing because I was the committee member of the choir organization in my school before.

The sentence incorrectly uses present tense 'I'm' and incomplete phrase 'I'm the'. It should use past tense 'I was' to indicate a past role. Also, 'committee' should be 'committee member' for clarity.

× I'm being a bus section, so I learn singing in my Senior High School.

✓ I was a bass section member, so I learned singing in my Senior High School.

The phrase 'I'm being a bus section' is incorrect. It should be 'I was a bass section member' to correctly describe the role in the choir. Also, 'learn' should be in past tense 'learned' to match the past time frame.

× I like to sing for myself. Singing for myself make me feel comfort table an. Be more positive.

✓ I like to sing for myself. Singing for myself makes me feel comfortable and be more positive.

The verb 'make' should be 'makes' to agree with the singular subject 'Singing'. 'Comfort table an' is a misspelling and should be 'comfortable'. The sentence structure is corrected for clarity.

× I love myself more than anything, and to prove that I always think to persuade myself.

✓ I love myself more than anything, and to prove that, I always try to persuade myself.

The phrase 'think to persuade myself' is incorrect. It should be 'try to persuade myself' to express the intended meaning of making an effort.

× Of course, if you sing the happy song. People around you will. Feel the positive vibes from the happy song.

✓ Of course, if you sing a happy song, people around you will feel the positive vibes from the happy song.

The sentence fragments should be combined into one sentence. Also, 'the happy song' should be 'a happy song' to generalize the statement. The modal verb 'will' is correctly used here.

× But no for the bed song, ballad song, it's make me feel sad too.

✓ But not for the bad song or ballad song; they make me feel sad too.

'No for the bed song' is incorrect; it should be 'not for the bad song'. Also, 'it's make' should be 'they make' to agree with plural subject 'songs'.

× So deep on with this song.

✓ So I feel deeply moved by this song.

The original sentence is unclear and ungrammatical. The corrected sentence expresses the intended meaning clearly and grammatically.