Singing— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is quite long and has many repetitions and unclear phrases. Try to make your response more natural and concise by directly answering the question with a clear topic sentence, followed by specific supporting details. Avoid repeating words and ensure your sentences are grammatically correct.

Exemplo: Yes, I have loved singing since my childhood because it helps me relax. I enjoy listening to various songs, especially when I need motivation or to calm my mind during difficult times.

Sugestão: Your answer is unclear and contains many grammatical errors and confusing phrases. Focus on giving a direct answer with clear supporting details. Use linking words to connect your ideas logically and try to use appropriate vocabulary related to learning singing.

Exemplo: Yes, I have learned singing from my elder brother. He often listens to music and advised me to practice by matching my voice with the songs, repeating them, and focusing on correct pronunciation.

Sugestão: Your answer addresses the question but is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical mistakes. Try to structure your answer with a clear topic sentence and use linking words to explain your reasons. Be specific about why you want to sing for your family and friends.

Exemplo: I want to sing for my family and friends because they have always supported me during difficult times. Singing for them is my way of showing gratitude and sharing happiness.

Sugestão: Your answer is relevant but contains some unclear phrases and repetition. Try to use linking words to organize your ideas clearly and provide specific reasons. Also, avoid repeating words and check your pronunciation of difficult words like 'anxiety'.

Exemplo: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness to people. For example, when someone feels anxious or depressed, listening to their favourite songs can calm their mind and refresh their thoughts, helping them feel better and motivated.

× You like singing?

✓ Do you like singing?

The original sentence lacks the auxiliary verb 'do' required for forming questions in the present simple tense in English. Adding 'Do' correctly forms the question 'Do you like singing?'. This is a common structure for yes/no questions in English.

× Well, from my childhood, I always like singing in from a childhood, I always say the I always fascinated in singing and I listen different different music from different different singles, which ever hit me to do work and whenever I am in a difficult situation, a listen to them to gamma give him a a peaceful.

✓ Well, since my childhood, I have always liked singing. I have always been fascinated by singing and I listen to different music from different singers, which inspires me to work. Whenever I am in a difficult situation, I listen to them to give myself peace.

The original sentence has multiple tense and grammatical errors. 'I always like' should be 'I have always liked' to indicate a continuous action from the past to present. 'Fascinated in' should be 'fascinated by'. 'Listen different different music' should be 'listen to different music'. 'Different different singles' should be 'different singers'. The phrase 'which ever hit me to do work' is unclear and corrected to 'which inspires me to work'. Also, 'a listen to them to gamma give him a a peaceful' is unclear and corrected to 'I listen to them to give myself peace'. These corrections improve clarity and grammatical accuracy.

× Oh definitely, I have learned singing from a Big Brother.

✓ Oh definitely, I have learned singing from my big brother.

The phrase 'a Big Brother' is incorrect; it should be 'my big brother' to indicate a specific person related to the speaker. The tense 'have learned' is correct as it indicates experience up to now.

× He is attending speaker ordered me and he often listen music very much or whenever it is amazing.

✓ He is an attending speaker who encouraged me and he often listens to music a lot, especially when it is amazing.

The original sentence has unclear pronoun use and missing articles. 'Attending speaker ordered me' is unclear; corrected to 'attending speaker who encouraged me'. 'He often listen music' should be 'he often listens to music'. The phrase 'very much or whenever it is amazing' is corrected to 'a lot, especially when it is amazing' for clarity.

× I know said Tim too close and to share some views and he said he said that you should learn a music by a matching their voice with their might and repetition and pronation.

✓ I know he said to listen closely and share some views, and he said that you should learn music by matching your voice with theirs through practice, repetition, and pronunciation.

The original sentence has unclear pronouns and incorrect word choices. 'I know said Tim too close' is corrected to 'I know he said to listen closely'. 'Learn a music' should be 'learn music'. 'Matching their voice with their might' is corrected to 'matching your voice with theirs'. 'Pronation' is corrected to 'pronunciation'. These changes improve clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Well, to be honest I think from my family and for my friends because they are very supportive and help me in different difficulty situations and whenever I want to think I think form of that for the brightness and their help.

✓ Well, to be honest, I think of my family and my friends because they are very supportive and help me in difficult situations. Whenever I want to think, I think of them for their support and help.

The original sentence has unclear pronoun references and awkward phrasing. 'I think from my family and for my friends' is corrected to 'I think of my family and my friends'. 'Different difficulty situations' is corrected to 'difficult situations'. 'I think form of that for the brightness and their help' is corrected to 'I think of them for their support and help' to clarify meaning.

× Uh, definitely singing can bring up happiness to people.

✓ Uh, definitely singing can bring happiness to people.

The phrase 'bring up happiness' is incorrect; the correct collocation is 'bring happiness'. The modal verb 'can' is used correctly here to express possibility.

× There are a couple of reasons like whenever a person is in very difficult solution and he is in depression or anixety, he listened to a music of his choice and which gives a peaceful, peaceful thoughts to their mind and a refreshed their mind to start a new work of which Dedicat.

✓ There are a couple of reasons. For example, whenever a person is in a very difficult situation and is experiencing depression or anxiety, they listen to music of their choice, which gives peaceful thoughts to their mind and refreshes it to start new work with dedication.

The original sentence has multiple errors: 'solution' should be 'situation'; 'he listened' should be 'they listen' to maintain present tense and gender neutrality; 'a music' should be 'music'; 'peaceful, peaceful thoughts' is redundant; 'a refreshed their mind' is incorrect and corrected to 'refreshes it'; 'which Dedicat' is unclear and corrected to 'with dedication'. These corrections improve grammar and clarity.