SingingPart 1 Relatório

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Part 1

Examinador

Do you like singing? Why?

Candidato

I like seeing because. Same can help me to lie and. Release the stress.

Examinador

Have you ever learnt how to sing?

Candidato

Never learn how to sing. I learn to some instruments but I never learned how to saying before.

Examinador

Who do you want to sing for?

Candidato

I if I have to say, probably myself.

Examinador

Do you think singing can bring happiness to people?

Candidato

Yeah, of course, as I said that singing can help you to release the stress. And. Especially if you're a really bad mood, if you listen some happy songs that would really helpful.

Avaliação

Total

Total: 5.0Fluência e coerência: 5.0Pronúncia: 5.0Gramática: 5.0Recurso lexical: 5.0

Part 1

Do you like singing? Why?

Pontuação: 30.0

Sugestão: 你的回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题,建议加强基础语法学习,避免拼写错误,并且回答时要直接回应问题,表达清楚原因。

Exemplo: Yes, I like singing because it helps me relax and release stress after a long day.

Have you ever learnt how to sing?

Pontuação: 35.0

Sugestão: 回答中语法错误较多,时态使用不当,建议练习正确的时态和句子结构,同时回答要完整,清晰表达自己的经历。

Exemplo: No, I have never learned how to sing, but I have learned to play some musical instruments.

Who do you want to sing for?

Pontuação: 40.0

Sugestão: 回答不完整且表达不流畅,建议练习完整句子表达,并且可以适当扩展理由,使回答更丰富。

Exemplo: If I have to choose, I would sing for myself because it helps me feel happy and confident.

Do you think singing can bring happiness to people?

Pontuação: 50.0

Sugestão: 回答中有重复和语法错误,建议使用连词使句子更连贯,避免重复表达,并且注意语法和词汇的准确使用。

Exemplo: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness because it helps people release stress. Especially when someone is in a bad mood, listening to happy songs can be very helpful.

Gramática

Verb + -ing form

× I like seeing because.

I like singing because.

这里动词应该用动名词形式表示喜欢的活动,'seeing'(看见)应改为'singing'(唱歌),符合语境。

Sentence structure errors

× I like seeing because. Same can help me to lie and. Release the stress.

I like singing because it can help me to relax and release stress.

原句结构不完整且有拼写错误,'Same'应为'it'指代唱歌,'lie'应为'relax',句子应连贯表达喜欢唱歌的原因。

Past tense issue

× Never learn how to sing.

I have never learned how to sing.

表达过去经历时应使用现在完成时,'Never learn'缺少主语且时态错误,应改为'I have never learned'。

Past tense issue

× I learn to some instruments but I never learned how to saying before.

I have learned to play some instruments but I have never learned how to sing before.

时态应统一使用现在完成时,'learn'应为'have learned','to some instruments'应为'to play some instruments','saying'应为'sing'。

Sentence structure errors

× I if I have to say, probably myself.

If I have to say, probably myself.

句首多余的'I'导致句子结构错误,应删除。

Incorrect use of prepositions

× if you listen some happy songs that would really helpful.

if you listen to some happy songs, that would be really helpful.

动词'listen'后应接介词'to',且缺少系动词'be',使句子完整。

Vocabulário

BadSubstandard; Harmful; Unpleasant; Inauspicious; Severe
HappyCheerful; Glad; Fortunate
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