Singing— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is relevant and shows your opinion, but it lacks clarity and has some grammatical errors. Try to make your sentences complete and avoid redundancy. Use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly. For example, start with a clear topic sentence, then explain why singing is helpful, and finish with how it affects mood.

Exemplo: Yes, I like singing because it is an excellent way to express emotions. Sometimes, people find it hard to explain their feelings through words, but singing allows them to communicate better. Moreover, it helps to relax and improve one's mood.

Sugestão: Your answer is unclear and difficult to understand due to incomplete sentences and unclear vocabulary. Try to organize your thoughts before speaking and use simple, clear sentences. Directly answer the question and provide specific details about your singing lessons.

Exemplo: Yes, I have learned how to sing. When I was in school, I took singing classes from a popular teacher in my city. He helped me improve my voice and singing skills.

Sugestão: Your answer is clear and relevant, but some sentences are awkward and contain grammatical errors. Use correct verb forms and connect your ideas smoothly. Also, provide a bit more detail about the song or why you want to dedicate it to your husband.

Exemplo: If I get the chance to sing, I would like to dedicate a beautiful Punjabi song called "About It" to my husband because he is very special to me. Singing this song for him would show my love and appreciation.

Sugestão: Your answer shows your opinion but is unclear and contains incomplete sentences. Try to express your ideas clearly and use linking words to connect your points. Also, avoid hesitations and focus on giving specific reasons why singing brings happiness.

Exemplo: Definitely, singing can bring a lot of happiness to people because it helps improve difficult situations and lifts their spirits. It lightens the mood and creates joy and excitement among those who sing or listen.

× Yes, I do like singing because it is a good way to express feelings or emotions in front of people.

✓ Yes, I do like singing because it is a good way to express feelings or emotions to people.

The phrase 'in front of people' is awkward here; 'to people' is more appropriate when expressing feelings or emotions to others.

× Because sometimes people can't tell the. Conversation or tell the situation to other people, but they can express through the singing and it is a good way of relaxing the mood.

✓ Sometimes people can't explain the conversation or the situation to others, but they can express themselves through singing, and it is a good way to relax the mood.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. 'Tell the conversation' is incorrect; 'explain the conversation' is better. Also, 'express through the singing' should be 'express themselves through singing'. 'Relaxing the mood' should be 'to relax the mood'.

× I still don't remember in when I was in new ship forward stranded I used to get singing glasses from my teacher.

✓ I still don't remember exactly when I was in New Ship Forward Stranded, but I used to get singing classes from my teacher.

The phrase 'get singing glasses' is incorrect; it should be 'get singing classes'. Also, 'in when' is incorrect; 'exactly when' or 'when' is better. Proper nouns like 'New Ship Forward Stranded' should be capitalized.

× He was very. Popular in our school, even in our city I used to get to class is from him.

✓ He was very popular in our school and even in our city. I used to take classes from him.

The sentence is fragmented and has incorrect phrasing. 'I used to get to class is from him' is incorrect; it should be 'I used to take classes from him'. Also, the period after 'very' is misplaced.

× Under. No, that's it.

✓ No, that's it.

'Under.' is an incomplete and unclear fragment and should be removed for clarity.

× If I get the chance to singing and I definitely want to dedicate a beautiful song which is called about it.

✓ If I get the chance to sing, I definitely want to dedicate a beautiful song called 'About It'.

The phrase 'to singing' is incorrect; after 'chance to' the base verb 'sing' should be used. Also, the sentence was fragmented and needed punctuation for clarity.

× It is a Punjabi song and I want to dedicate it to my special person, none other than my husband because he's very special for me.

✓ It is a Punjabi song, and I want to dedicate it to my special person, none other than my husband because he is very special to me.

The sentence is mostly correct but 'special for me' should be 'special to me' for correct preposition use.

× Definitely, singing can bring lots of happiness to the people because it can make the situation. Horse from the. Sorry, better from the wars and it can lighten up the moods.

✓ Definitely, singing can bring lots of happiness to people because it can make the situation better and lighten up the mood.

The original sentence contains unclear and fragmented phrases like 'make the situation. Horse from the. Sorry, better from the wars'. These should be corrected to 'make the situation better'. Also, 'lighten up the moods' should be 'lighten up the mood'.

× It can bring joy and excitement. With the people while singing.

✓ It can bring joy and excitement to people while singing.

The sentence is fragmented; 'With the people while singing' should be connected to the previous sentence as 'to people while singing'.