Memory— Part 1 Relatório

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Part 1

Examinador

Are you good at memorising things?

Candidato

Yes, I have a good at memorizing things. Uh, because, uh, I'm, I'm younger and I'm a psychologist.

Examinador

Have you ever forgotten something important?

Candidato

Yes, I have ever forgotten something, uh, essential, uh, but uh, I didn't remember right now, but uh, yes, I had ever forget some something.

Examinador

What do you need to remember in your daily life?

Candidato

Uh, I need to get at least 6.5 on the IS exam. So, uh, I uh, have to remember for exam because it's very important for my career.

Examinador

How do you remember important things?

Candidato

I give it to attention myself and. I usually do mindfulness exercise for my mind because it's very clear my mind.

Avaliação

Total

Total: 5.0Fluência e coerência: 5.0Pronúncia: 5.0Gramática: 5.0Recurso lexical: 5.0

Part 1

Are you good at memorising things?

Pontuação: 35.0

Sugestão: Doğrudan ve doğal bir ifadeyle cevap verin: “I’m good at memorising things.” “I have a good at” dilbilgisi açısından yanlıştır. Gerekçe olarak yaşınızı veya mesleğinizi belirtmek yerine kullandığınız somut bir hafıza yönteminden ya da iyi hatırladığınız şeylere örnekten söz edin. Gereksiz duraksamaları azaltın.

Exemplo: Yes, I’m quite good at memorising things. I usually remember information better when I connect it to an image or a personal experience.

Have you ever forgotten something important?

Pontuação: 25.0

Sugestão: “Have you ever…?” sorusuna “Yes, I have” veya “No, I haven’t” şeklinde cevap verin. “I have ever forgotten” yerine “I have forgotten” kullanılır; geçmişteki belirli bir olay için “I forgot” deyin. Olayı şu anda hatırlamıyorsanız, bunu kısa ve doğal biçimde söyleyin; mümkünse neyi unuttuğunuzu ve sonucunu açıklayın.

Exemplo: Yes, I have. I once forgot an important appointment because I didn’t add it to my calendar. Fortunately, I was able to reschedule it.

What do you need to remember in your daily life?

Pontuação: 45.0

Sugestão: Soruyu günlük yaşamda hatırlamanız gereken şeyler üzerinden yanıtlayın. Sınav hedefinizi belirtmeniz uygun olsa da “I have to remember for exam” doğal değildir; “I need to remember to study for my exam” diyebilirsiniz. Hedefinizin kariyeriniz açısından neden önemli olduğunu kısa bir ayrıntıyla açıklayın. Sınavın adını kastediyorsanız “IELTS exam” ifadesini kullanın.

Exemplo: I need to remember to study for my IELTS exam and keep track of my deadlines. Getting at least 6.5 is important because I need that score for my future career.

How do you remember important things?

Pontuação: 35.0

Sugestão: Önemli şeyleri nasıl hatırladığınızı açıklarken net ve uygulanabilir bir yöntem belirtin; örneğin not almak, takvime hatırlatıcı eklemek veya bilgiyi tekrar etmek. “I give it to attention myself” doğal bir ifade değildir; “I pay close attention” diyebilirsiniz. Mindfulness egzersizinden bahsedecekseniz, bunun odaklanmanıza nasıl yardımcı olduğunu doğru bir cümleyle açıklayın.

Exemplo: I usually write important tasks in my phone calendar and set reminders. I also try to focus on one task at a time, and mindfulness exercises help me concentrate.

Gramática

26: Sentence structure errors

× Yes, I have a good at memorizing things.

✓ Yes, I'm good at memorizing things.

The phrase 'have a good at' is not a grammatical construction. Use 'be good at' followed by a noun or a verb ending in -ing.

20: Incorrect adverb placement

× Yes, I have ever forgotten something, uh, essential.

✓ Yes, I have forgotten something important.

'Ever' is generally used in questions and negative statements, or in contexts such as 'the best ... ever.' It is not normally used in this affirmative statement. Omit it here.

6: Present tense issue

× But I didn't remember right now.

✓ But I can't remember right now.

'Right now' refers to the present, so the past-tense form 'didn't remember' does not fit. Use a present-tense form such as 'can't remember.'

5: Past tense issue

× But, yes, I had ever forget some something.

✓ But, yes, I have forgotten something before.

The past perfect 'had forgotten' normally refers to an event that happened before another past event, which is not mentioned here. Use the present perfect to describe a past experience that is relevant now.

9: Verb in the past participle form

× But, yes, I had ever forget some something.

✓ But, yes, I have forgotten something before.

The verb after 'have' or 'had' must be in the past participle form. The past participle of 'forget' is 'forgotten,' not 'forget.'

22: Article errors

× So, uh, I have to remember for exam because it's very important for my career.

✓ So, I have to remember the material for the exam because it's very important for my career.

Use 'the' before 'exam' when referring to a specific exam. Also, 'remember' needs an object in this sentence, so 'the material' clarifies what the student needs to remember.

11: Incorrect use of prepositions

× I give it to attention myself.

✓ I pay attention to it myself.

The expression is 'pay attention to something.' The original phrase uses an incorrect verb-preposition construction.

22: Article errors

× I usually do mindfulness exercise for my mind.

✓ I usually do a mindfulness exercise for my mind.

'Exercise' is a singular countable noun here, so it needs an article. Use 'a' before it.

26: Sentence structure errors

× Because it's very clear my mind.

✓ Because it makes my mind very clear.

The original sentence does not have a grammatical structure connecting 'clear' and 'my mind.' Use 'make + object + adjective' to express that the exercise makes the mind clear.

Vocabulário

Clear— Understandable; Obvious; Transparent; Bright; Unobstructed
Good— Fine; Virtuous; Well-behaved; Right; Capable
Important— Significant; Main; Powerful
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