Memory— Part 1 Relatório

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Part 1

Examinador

Are you good at memorising things?

Candidato

I was really good at memorizing things since I was a child but I am now student and I have a lot of things to do and I have to memorize a lot of different things and I'm really good at this because I am load so that.

Examinador

Have you ever forgotten something important?

Candidato

To be honest, yes because when I talk with a different person sometimes I will forget words when I'm trying to speak different topics and different issues. Also, I have purgas the location of my house

Examinador

What do you need to remember in your daily life?

Candidato

In my daily life I need to remember the most basic things like my location and my destination to my house and to my university although I have to remember my studies because as I said that I am law student and I have to memorize the different topics and also

Examinador

How do you remember important things?

Candidato

To be honest when I want to remember the most important issues or the topics I have to repeat this topics for a lot of and also I have to write down this topics

Avaliação

Total

Total: 5.0Fluência e coerência: 5.0Pronúncia: 5.0Gramática: 5.0Recurso lexical: 5.0

Part 1

Are you good at memorising things?

Pontuação: 48.0

Sugestão: Answer the question directly with a clear topic sentence, then add one specific reason or example. Use the present perfect or present tense accurately: “I have been good at memorising things since I was a child” or “I am good at memorising things.” Avoid repetition of “memorize” and replace the unclear phrase “I am load so that” with a clear explanation, such as having a good memory or using effective study methods. Keep the answer to three or four connected sentences.

Exemplo: Yes, I have always been quite good at memorising things. I have been studying law, so I often need to remember rules, cases, and definitions. I usually remember information well when I review it several times and connect it with practical examples.

Have you ever forgotten something important?

Pontuação: 42.0

Sugestão: Begin with a direct answer and give one clear, relevant example. Use “sometimes I forget words” rather than “sometimes I will forget words” for a general habit. The phrase “I have purgas the location of my house” is unclear; explain precisely what you forgot, such as your address or where you parked your car. Use a linking word such as “For example” to make the response more coherent.

Exemplo: Yes, I have forgotten important things before. For example, I sometimes forget people’s names or lose my train of thought when I am speaking about an unfamiliar topic. Once, I even forgot my exact address when I was filling out a form, so I had to check it on my phone.

What do you need to remember in your daily life?

Pontuação: 45.0

Sugestão: Organize the answer by mentioning everyday responsibilities first and academic responsibilities second. The expressions “my location and my destination to my house” are unnatural; say “my schedule, appointments, and the routes to my home and university.” Correct “I am law student” to “I am a law student,” and avoid ending with “and also.” Use a specific example to make the content more effective.

Exemplo: I need to remember my daily schedule, including my classes, appointments, and the route to my university. As a law student, I also have to remember legal principles, case details, and important deadlines. I usually put these things in my phone so that I do not forget them.

How do you remember important things?

Pontuação: 55.0

Sugestão: Give a direct explanation using accurate grammar and natural collocations. Say “repeat the topics several times” or “review the information repeatedly,” not “repeat this topics for a lot of.” Also, use “these topics” rather than “this topics.” Add a brief explanation of how writing helps you remember, and connect the methods with “Additionally” or “Because of this.”

Exemplo: I usually use two methods to remember important information. First, I review it several times, because repetition helps me retain it. Additionally, I write down the key points in a notebook and use short summaries before an exam.

Gramática

5: Past tense issue

× I was really good at memorizing things since I was a child but I am now student and I have a lot of things to do and I have to memorize a lot of different things and I'm really good at this because I am load so that.

✓ I have been really good at memorizing things since I was a child, but I am now a student, and I have a lot of things to do. I have to memorize many different things, and I am good at it because I am used to doing so.

The phrase since I was a child describes a situation that began in the past and continues now, so the present perfect form have been is more appropriate than the simple past was.

22: Article errors

× I was really good at memorizing things since I was a child but I am now student and I have a lot of things to do and I have to memorize a lot of different things and I'm really good at this because I am load so that.

✓ I have been really good at memorizing things since I was a child, but I am now a student, and I have a lot of things to do. I have to memorize many different things, and I am good at it because I am used to doing so.

Student is a singular countable noun, so it needs the indefinite article a: I am now a student.

26: Sentence structure errors

× I was really good at memorizing things since I was a child but I am now student and I have a lot of things to do and I have to memorize a lot of different things and I'm really good at this because I am load so that.

✓ I have been really good at memorizing things since I was a child, but I am now a student, and I have a lot of things to do. I have to memorize many different things, and I am good at it because I am used to doing so.

The ending I am load so that is not a grammatically complete or meaningful structure. Use a clear expression such as I am used to doing so to explain why memorizing is easy for you. Dividing the long sentence also makes the ideas clearer.

11: Incorrect use of prepositions

× To be honest, yes because when I talk with a different person sometimes I will forget words when I'm trying to speak different topics and different issues.

✓ To be honest, yes. When I talk to someone, I sometimes forget words when I am trying to discuss different topics and issues.

Talk is normally followed by the preposition to when referring to the person being addressed: talk to someone. Discuss does not need a preposition before its object, so discuss different topics is correct.

6: Present tense issue

× To be honest, yes because when I talk with a different person sometimes I will forget words when I'm trying to speak different topics and different issues.

✓ To be honest, yes. When I talk to someone, I sometimes forget words when I am trying to discuss different topics and issues.

This sentence describes a habitual situation, so the simple present is appropriate: I sometimes forget. The adverb sometimes should be placed before the main verb.

9: Verb in the past participle form

× Also, I have purgas the location of my house.

✓ Also, I have forgotten where my house is.

The present perfect structure have requires a past participle. The past participle of forget is forgotten, not purgas: have forgotten.

23: Sentence without a verb

× In my daily life I need to remember the most basic things like my location and my destination to my house and to my university although I have to remember my studies because as I said that I am law student and I have to memorize the different topics and also.

✓ In my daily life, I need to remember basic things, such as the location of my house and my university, as well as my studies. As I said, I am a law student, so I have to memorize different topics.

The original sentence ends with and also, leaving the final idea incomplete. Every sentence should end with a complete thought rather than an unfinished conjunction.

16: Incorrect conjunction use

× In my daily life I need to remember the most basic things like my location and my destination to my house and to my university although I have to remember my studies because as I said that I am law student and I have to memorize the different topics and also.

✓ In my daily life, I need to remember basic things, such as the location of my house and my university, as well as my studies. As I said, I am a law student, so I have to memorize different topics.

Although expresses contrast, but the original sentence does not present a contrast. As well as correctly adds studies to the list, and so correctly shows the result of being a law student.

22: Article errors

× In my daily life I need to remember the most basic things like my location and my destination to my house and to my university although I have to remember my studies because as I said that I am law student and I have to memorize the different topics and also.

✓ In my daily life, I need to remember basic things, such as the location of my house and my university, as well as my studies. As I said, I am a law student, so I have to memorize different topics.

Law student is a singular countable noun, so it requires the article a: I am a law student.

14: Incorrect use of quantifiers

× To be honest when I want to remember the most important issues or the topics I have to repeat this topics for a lot of and also I have to write down this topics.

✓ To be honest, when I want to remember important issues or topics, I have to repeat them many times, and I also have to write them down.

For a lot of is incomplete because a lot of must be followed by a noun. Many times correctly expresses how often the action is repeated.

12: Incorrect use of pronouns

× To be honest when I want to remember the most important issues or the topics I have to repeat this topics for a lot of and also I have to write down this topics.

✓ To be honest, when I want to remember important issues or topics, I have to repeat them many times, and I also have to write them down.

Topics is plural, so this topics is incorrect. Use the plural pronoun them to refer back to issues or topics. The phrase write them down also avoids repeating the noun unnecessarily.

Vocabulário

Different— Dissimilar; Distinct; Unusual
Good— Fine; Virtuous; Well-behaved; Right; Capable
Important— Significant; Main; Powerful
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