Memory— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 表現が不自然な語彙選択や文法ミスが多いです。まず、'mobilizing'や'English Bulgaria exam'など不適切な語を正しい語に置き換えてください。また、主題文で直接答えてから、理由や具体例を1〜2文で補足し、冗長な語を避けて自然な流れにしてください。例えば、主語と動詞の一致、冠詞の使用、接続詞を正しく使う練習をしましょう。最後に発音とイントネーションも意識して短くはっきり話す練習をして下さい。

Exemplo: Yes, I am fairly good at memorising things. I enjoy studying history and English because I find them interesting, which helps me remember facts more easily. For example, I use flashcards and short summaries to review key dates and vocabulary.

Sugestão: 内容は伝わりますが、時制や冠詞、語順の誤りがあり、表現がぎこちないです。まず過去の出来事は過去形で一貫して述べ、原因と結果を論理的に結ぶ接続詞（for example, so, therefore, since）を正しく使ってください。改善点として、具体的な行動（どのアプリや何分前にリマインドするか）を加えると説得力が増します。練習では短く明確な構成（主張→理由→結果）を意識してください。

Exemplo: Yes, once I missed an important meeting when I was in high school because I had written an overly long schedule and overlooked it. As a result, I apologised to my teacher. Since then, I always double-check my calendar and set phone reminders 30 minutes before important events.

Sugestão: 文法と語順の誤りが多く、意味が取りにくいです。まず直接的な主題文（I need to remember ...）で答え、その後に理由と具体例を1〜2文で続けてください。'diary'の使い方や目的を明確にし、代わりに'schedule'や'to-do list'など具体的なツールを挙げるとより自然です。日本語では、主語と目的語を明確にし、なぜそれが役立つかも説明する練習をしてください。

Exemplo: I need to remember daily tasks and appointments, so I write a short diary or to-do list every day. This helps me track what I did and how I felt, and it also reminds me of tasks I need to finish.

Sugestão: 答えは基本的に適切ですが、フィラー（uh）や単数・複数の一致（a reminder/reminders, smartphone/smartphones）の誤りが目立ちます。より自然に聞こえるように、短く明確な主題文を使い、1つか2つの具体的な方法（カレンダーアプリ、アラーム、チェックリスト）を挙げ、接続詞でつなぎましょう。発音練習でフィラーを減らすことも重要です。

Exemplo: I remember important things by checking my digital calendar and setting reminders on my phone. I also keep a checklist for daily tasks so I can tick items off as I complete them.

× Yes, I'm good at mobilizing things because I like studying the History and English Bulgaria exam to get a high score. Which makes me always feel fun and.

✓ Yes, I'm good at memorizing things because I like studying history and English for exams to get high scores, which always makes me feel happy.

ID 12 & 26: The sentence has multiple issues: wrong word choice 'mobilizing' should be 'memorizing' (vocabulary error), incorrect capitalization for 'history' and awkward phrase 'English Bulgaria exam'. The fragment 'Which makes me always feel fun and.' is a sentence fragment and uses 'fun' incorrectly (adjective vs adverb). Suggested correction fixes word choice, article/phrase use, capitalization, combines the fragment into the main sentence, and uses 'happy' to express feeling. To improve, use precise verbs (memorize), keep nouns lowercase unless proper names, avoid sentence fragments, and choose correct adjectives/adverbs for feelings.

× Yes, I missed the important meeting when I was a high school because I wrote long schedule. As a result, I apologize to the teacher.

✓ Yes, I missed an important meeting when I was in high school because I had written a long schedule. As a result, I apologized to the teacher.

ID 5: Tense errors and article use: 'when I was a high school' should be 'when I was in high school'; 'wrote long schedule' requires past perfect 'had written a long schedule' to show the sequence (writing before missing); 'I apologize' should be past 'I apologized' because the apology happened after the event. Also 'the important meeting' can be 'an important meeting'. Improve by using correct preposition 'in' with 'high school', using past perfect to show earlier action, and matching tense for subsequent actions.

× Since then, I double checked my schedule and set a reminder.

✓ Since then, I have double-checked my schedule and set reminders.

ID 6: With 'Since then' we expect present perfect 'have double-checked' to indicate an action that started in the past and continues to the present. Also 'set a reminder' can be pluralized to 'set reminders' for general practice. Improve by using present perfect for actions continuing to the present and using consistent pluralization when referring to habitual actions.

× To remind daily life I should write diary every day because it helps me remind the what today I do and how you how I feel.

✓ To remember daily tasks, I should write a diary every day because it helps me recall what I did today and how I felt.

ID 26: The original sentence has word order and pronoun errors: 'To remind daily life' is awkward and unclear; 'write diary' needs article 'write a diary'; 'remind the what today I do and how you how I feel' is ungrammatical and has wrong pronouns. Corrected version clarifies purpose ('remember daily tasks'), uses proper article, and fixes clause order and pronouns. Improve by planning sentence structure: subject + verb + object, and use consistent pronouns and verb forms.

× I always remember important things by, uh, checking schedules and setting reminder in my smartphones.

✓ I always remember important things by checking my schedule and setting reminders on my smartphone.

ID 11: Preposition and article errors: 'setting reminder in my smartphones' should be 'setting reminders on my smartphone'; use singular 'smartphone' or plural consistently, and use 'on' for devices. Also 'schedules' is better singular 'schedule' for a personal plan. Improve by using correct prepositions for devices ('on a phone'), match singular/plural consistently, and avoid filler words like 'uh' in written answers.

× It helps me remind the, uh, important things.

✓ It helps me remember important things.

ID 8: Wrong verb form: 'helps me remind' is incorrect because 'remind' needs an object (someone reminded), whereas 'remember' is the correct intransitive verb meaning 'to recall'. Also remove filler 'uh' and extra article 'the'. Improve by choosing the correct verb ('remember') and using simple structure 'helps me remember'.