Part 1
Examinador
Are you good at memorising things?
Candidato
Be honestly on the easily to forget things person.
Examinador
Have you ever forgotten something important?
Candidato
Yeah, it is. I have the forgot, uh, too many things important on my study.
Examinador
What do you need to remember in your daily life?
Candidato
Actually I have too many things need. I remember like something on my work and my mom taught me something I need to do.
Examinador
How do you remember important things?
Candidato
Actually I'm usually to forget something, so I will choose a way to make me remember that. Like you know that ignored them and you write something important on the book or you on your form and to set alarm to mention you.
Are you good at memorising things?
Pontuação: 40.0Sugestão: 句子不完整且语法错误较多。回答应直接回应问题并用一两句说明原因或举例。注意主语和谓语一致,使用自然表达如“I’m not very good at remembering things.”并尽量不要超过五句。
Exemplo: To be honest, I'm not very good at remembering things. I often forget small details like appointments or where I put my keys, especially when I'm busy.
Have you ever forgotten something important?
Pontuação: 35.0Sugestão: 表达混乱且语法错误严重。回答时要给出一个清晰的主题句,随后用一两句具体说明忘记了什么及后果。使用正确时态和词序,例如“I have forgotten something important related to my studies, such as deadline.”
Exemplo: Yes, I have. I once forgot to submit an important assignment for a class, which made me miss the deadline and lose marks. Since then I've tried to be more organised.
What do you need to remember in your daily life?
Pontuação: 45.0Sugestão: 回答较笼统且语法有误。应先给出主题句,然后举一两个具体例子并用连接词使句子连贯。比如说记住工作任务、家庭琐事或重要日期。
Exemplo: I need to remember various daily tasks, such as work deadlines and household chores. For example, my mother often reminds me to buy groceries and pay bills on time.
How do you remember important things?
Pontuação: 50.0Sugestão: 内容有用但表达混乱。应用清晰的句子结构说明具体方法,使用连接词列出几种策略(notes, alarms, reminders)并给出简短例子。避免冗长或不恰当短语。
Exemplo: I often use practical methods to remember important things, such as writing notes in a planner, setting alarms on my phone, and making checklists. For instance, I set an alarm the night before an exam so I won't forget to prepare.
× Be honestly on the easily to forget things person.
✓ To be honest, I'm someone who easily forgets things.
句子结构混乱且动词形式错误。原句中缺少主语和正确的动词词形,短语顺序不自然。建议先用短语 'To be honest,' 表示诚实,然后用 'I'm someone who...' 来描述身份,谓语用第三人称单数形式 'forgets' 或者用 'easily forgets'。这样句子结构完整且清晰。
× Yeah, it is. I have the forgot, uh, too many things important on my study.
✓ Yeah. I have forgotten too many important things related to my studies.
混合使用了不正确的时态和动词形式。'have the forgot' 是错误的搭配;应使用现在完成时 'have forgotten' 表示过去发生并与现在相关的动作。'things important on my study' 词序和介词不当,应改为 'important things related to my studies' 或 'important things in my studies'。建议学习现在完成时的构成(have/has + 过去分词)以及常用介词搭配。
× Actually I have too many things need.
✓ Actually I have too many things I need to do.
原句中缺少关系从句或不定式来修饰 'things',使句子不完整。应使用 'things I need to do' 或 'things that I need' 来补足信息。'too many things need' 是词序错误。建议用关系从句或不定式来连接名词与其描述。
× I remember like something on my work and my mom taught me something I need to do.
✓ I remember things about my work, and my mom taught me things I need to do.
原句中 'on my work' 介词使用不当,应该用 'about' 或 'at' 根据语境。'remember like something' 用法不自然,应直接说 'remember things'。第二部分 'my mom taught me something I need to do' 结构基本可用,但复数更符合上下文,用 'things I need to do'。建议注意介词搭配与名词单复数一致。
× Actually I'm usually to forget something, so I will choose a way to make me remember that. Like you know that ignored them and you write something important on the book or you on your form and to set alarm to mention you.
✓ Actually I usually forget things, so I choose ways to help me remember them. For example, you can write important notes in a notebook or on a form, and set an alarm to remind you.
原句中 'I'm usually to forget' 用法错误,应为 'I usually forget'(习惯性动作用一般现在时)。'choose a way to make me remember that' 语序和代词使用不当,改为 'choose ways to help me remember them' 更自然。'ignored them and you write' 意思混乱;建议用明确例子:'write important notes in a notebook'。'on the book' 应为 'in a notebook','to set alarm to mention you' 中 'mention' 用错,正确应为 'remind you'。建议复习习惯用法(usually + 动词原形),常见动词搭配(set an alarm, remind somebody),以及代词指代一致。