Memory— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be clearer and more natural: start with a direct topic sentence, avoid unclear phrases and grammar mistakes, limit to 2–4 sentences, and add a specific technique with a linking word. Correct vocabulary (e.g., "quickly" not "fastly") and grammar (e.g., "I have been good at subjects that require memorization").

Exemplo: Yes, I’m quite good at memorising things. I often use simple techniques such as writing information down and reviewing it several times, which helps me remember facts quickly and retain them for a long time.

Sugestão: Be concise and use correct idioms and grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence (yes/no), then give a brief reason and a specific remedy using linking words like "however" or "so". Use correct verb forms (e.g., "I certainly have forgotten") and singular/plural agreement.

Exemplo: Yes, I have forgotten important things before. However, to prevent this I write everything down in a To‑Do list so I can check it and complete tasks on time.

Sugestão: Answer directly with a topic sentence naming examples, then add a brief explanation using linking words. Fix grammar and be specific about what tasks you mean (appointments, bills, errands). Keep it to 2–3 sentences.

Exemplo: I need to remember things like appointments, bills and occasional errands that are not part of my daily routine. Therefore, I write them down in a To‑Do list so I don’t forget to complete them on time.

Sugestão: Give a clear topic sentence then explain the method and benefit with correct word choice. Use linking words like "because" or "which" and correct vocabulary ("tasks" not "talks", "timely" or "on time"). Keep it concise and natural.

Exemplo: I remember important things by writing them down in a To‑Do list, because reviewing the list daily helps me prioritise tasks and finish them on time and efficiently.

× Since you alone I have been wonderful on the subjects which need to be memorized and I use simple techniques to memorize things which involves writing them down and again and again, which helps me memorize them fastly and for long term.

✓ Since I was young I have been good at subjects that need to be memorized, and I use simple techniques to memorize things, which involve writing them down again and again; this helps me memorize them quickly and retain them for the long term.

Errors addressed: incorrect phrase 'you alone' (sentence structure), wrong word 'wonderful' (word choice), subject-verb agreement 'techniques ... involves' (verb agreement), adverb 'fastly' (incorrect adverb), and awkward phrase 'for long term' (article/phrase use). Suggestions: replace 'you alone' with 'I was young' to make sense, use 'good at' not 'wonderful on', change 'which involves' to 'which involve' to match plural 'techniques', use 'quickly' instead of 'fastly', and use 'for the long term' to be idiomatic.

× As the idiom go to errors to human, I certainly do forgot very important things, but to do make up for it, I just mentions all the important things in my To Do List so that I remember to do them in time.

✓ As the idiom goes, 'to err is human,' I certainly do forget very important things, but to make up for it, I just mention all the important things in my to-do list so that I remember to do them on time.

Errors: incorrect idiom wording and structure, subject-verb agreement in idiom 'go' -> 'goes', wrong past tense 'do forgot' should be present 'do forget' or simple past 'forgot', extra 'to do' before 'make up', verb form 'mentions' should be 'mention', and preposition 'in time' -> 'on time'. Suggestions: use correct idiom 'to err is human', use 'do forget' for emphasis or 'forget', use base verb after auxiliary 'do', use 'make up for it' without extra 'do', 'mention' to match subject, and 'on time' for punctuality.

× Certain task which I forgot as they're not the part of DD routine, but I make sure to write them in To Do List so that I can do them in time.

✓ Certain tasks I forget because they're not part of my daily routine, but I make sure to write them in my to-do list so that I can do them on time.

Errors: 'Certain task' should be plural 'Certain tasks' to match 'they're', missing article 'the part of DD routine' is incorrect and unclear; 'DD' likely 'daily' abbreviated incorrectly; add possessive 'my' for 'to-do list'; use 'on time' instead of 'in time'. Suggestions: ensure plural agreement between subject and pronoun, expand abbreviations, include possessive pronouns where appropriate, and use idiomatic prepositions.

× I remember important things by writing them down in my To Do List which helps me complete those talks timely as well as efficiently.

✓ I remember important things by writing them down in my to-do list, which helps me complete those tasks in a timely and efficient manner.

Errors: 'talks' is wrong word; should be 'tasks'. 'timely as well as efficiently' mixes adjective/adverb forms and word order; use 'in a timely and efficient manner' or 'timely and efficiently' consistently. Suggestions: choose correct noun ('tasks'), use parallel structure and idiomatic phrase 'in a timely and efficient manner', and decapitalize 'to-do list'.