Memory— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Make your answer more natural, concise and grammatically correct. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting examples linked with a connector. Avoid repetition and keep it to under five sentences.

Exemplo: I'm not very good at memorising things. For example, my mother sometimes asks me to bring items to the kitchen and I often forget soon after she asks me. Because of that, I try to write quick reminders on my phone so I don't miss tasks.

Sugestão: Tell the story in a clear, logical sequence with correct tense and fewer repetitions. Begin with a topic sentence saying yes, then briefly describe what happened, why it happened, and the result. Use linking words like 'because' and 'so'.

Exemplo: Yes, I once forgot something important. I accidentally locked my brother in the car because I didn't notice he was still sleeping inside while I was distracted by my phone. Fortunately, we solved it quickly, but I learned to check the car before locking the doors.

Sugestão: Answer directly with a clear topic sentence about key daily responsibilities, then add one or two specific details about what you must remember. Use correct grammar and linking words to make the meaning clear.

Exemplo: I need to remember my work responsibilities every day. For example, because I work part-time at a food stall, I must track deliveries and know when vegetables or meat will arrive so I can prepare and serve customers on time.

Sugestão: Give a clear topic sentence about your main memory strategies, then provide specific examples and a brief reason why they work. Use correct verb forms and linkers like 'also' or 'for example'.

Exemplo: I usually use my phone's voice recorder or notes app to remember important things. For very critical tasks, I sometimes write reminders on my hand so I see them immediately; this helps me avoid missing urgent duties.

× Actually I'm not person really good at memorize.

✓ Actually I'm not a person who is really good at memorizing.

Missing article 'a', incorrect adjective order and missing relative clause; 'memorize' should be gerund 'memorizing' after 'good at'. Use 'a person who is' to describe ability.

× I sometimes forget somethings such as when my when my mom asked me to put things to her kitchen and I forget in a short time.

✓ I sometimes forget things, for example when my mom asks me to put things in her kitchen and I forget shortly after.

'Somethings' is incorrect plural; use 'things'. Use present tense 'asks' to match habitual action. Preposition 'in' for location. 'In a short time' is better as 'shortly after'.

× To be honest it is a very funny story.

✓ To be honest, it was a very funny story.

Context describes a past event, so use past tense 'was' instead of present 'is'.

× One time I locked my brother in the car because I forgot that he was sleep.

✓ One time I locked my brother in the car because I forgot that he was asleep.

Use adjective 'asleep' to describe state of sleeping, not base verb 'sleep'.

× He was sleeping inside and I just scroll my phone and walk out the car and lock them in.

✓ He was sleeping inside and I just scrolled through my phone, walked out of the car, and locked him in.

Narration of a past event requires past tense verbs 'scrolled', 'walked', 'locked'. Use 'through' with 'scroll' and 'out of' for exiting. Use correct pronoun 'him' for singular brother.

× As a part as a part because I'm work as a part time job so sometimes I have to responsible for my job so I have to manage like how when will vegetable or when will the meat come in?

✓ Because I work a part-time job, sometimes I am responsible for my tasks, so I have to manage when the vegetables and the meat will arrive.

Remove repeated phrase, use 'work a part-time job' or 'work part-time'. 'Have to responsible' is incorrect; use 'am responsible'. Word order for questions changed to statement 'when they will arrive'. Use plural 'vegetables' and definite article 'the' if specific.

× Sometimes I recorded in my phone and if the things is very important, I will write on my hand so that I can see them anywhere.

✓ Sometimes I record it on my phone, and if something is very important, I write it on my hand so that I can see it anywhere.

Use simple present 'record' for habitual action. Use 'on my phone' not 'in'. Agreement: 'things is' -> 'something is' or 'things are'. Use 'write it on my hand' and singular pronouns to match. Habitual future 'will' not necessary; use present simple for routines.