Part 1
Examinador
Are you good at memorising things?
Candidato
No, I think I'm a little weak in remember something important. For example, if I try to remember a English word I I will need to repeat for four and even five times.
Examinador
Have you ever forgotten something important?
Candidato
Yes, in the last year I forgotten my mother's birthday. She she was a little disappointed. I'm every time I I'm in birthday she will always send me a gift but I haven't remembered this.
Examinador
What do you need to remember in your daily life?
Candidato
In recent days I'm learning English, so I need to remember a lot of English words and grammar, which make me have little time to relax and concentrate on my work.
Examinador
How do you remember important things?
Candidato
If there is something important and I'm afraid of forgotten it, I will told the AI assistant such as the theory to to notice me of of this.
Are you good at memorising things?
Pontuação: 62.0Sugestão: 在回答时要注意语法和句子连贯性,使用更自然的表达并避免重复。可以先给出直接回答(主题句),然后用一两句具体的例子或细节支持。注意冠词和动词形式(a English → an English;remember → remembering;I I → 删除重复)。可以用连接词如“for example”或“usually”保持逻辑流畅。
Exemplo: Not really. I'm not very good at memorising important things. For example, when I learn a new English word I usually have to repeat it four or five times before I can remember it.
Have you ever forgotten something important?
Pontuação: 55.0Sugestão: 注意时态和句子结构(应为 I forgot / I have forgotten; she she → 删除重复)。回答要简洁并补充影响或感受作为支持细节。可使用连接词如“because”或“so”说明原因或结果。避免不必要的冗长与混乱的时间表达。
Exemplo: Yes, last year I forgot my mother's birthday. She was a little disappointed because she always sends me a gift, and I felt quite guilty about it.
What do you need to remember in your daily life?
Pontuação: 68.0Sugestão: 回答要更直接并改善语法(recent days → recently;which make me have → which means I have)。可以补充具体的记忆内容或优先级,使用连接词如“therefore”或“so”连接因果关系,限制在最多五句话内。
Exemplo: Recently I'm learning English, so I need to remember many new words and grammar rules. As a result, I have less time to relax and sometimes find it hard to concentrate on my other work.
How do you remember important things?
Pontuação: 58.0Sugestão: 注意语法和词汇搭配(afraid of forgotten it → afraid of forgetting it;I will told → I will tell;notice me of → remind me)。回答时给出具体方法并用连接词分步说明。可举例说明使用提醒工具的方式和频率。
Exemplo: If something is important and I'm afraid of forgetting it, I tell my AI assistant to set a reminder. For example, I ask it to notify me by phone the day before an appointment.
× No, I think I'm a little weak in remember something important.
✓ No, I think I'm a little weak at remembering important things.
错误类型对应:8 (Verb + -ing form) 和 11 (Incorrect use of prepositions) 说明:短语“weak in remember”不符合英语习惯,动词记忆在此处应使用动名词形式“remembering”,并且常用搭配是“weak at”。此外“something important”更自然地改为复数泛指“important things”。建议:把不定式或动词原形改为动名词,并使用正确的介词搭配(weak at doing sth)。
× For example, if I try to remember a English word I I will need to repeat for four and even five times.
✓ For example, if I try to remember an English word, I will need to repeat it four or even five times.
错误类型对应:22 (Article errors)、27 (Subject-verb agreement/structure) 与 26 (Sentence structure) 说明:在元音音素前需用不定冠词“an”,句中“I I”是重复错误,应删去一个。动词“repeat”后需要宾语“it”来指代“word”,并用“four or even five times”更符合表达习惯。建议:注意冠词的使用,避免词语重复,并补上缺失宾语,使句子结构完整。
× Yes, in the last year I forgotten my mother's birthday.
✓ Yes, last year I forgot my mother's birthday.
错误类型对应:5 (Past tense issue) 说明:“forgotten”是过去分词,需要与助动词(have/has)连用形成现在完成时。句中谈论明确的过去时间“last year”,应使用一般过去时“forgot”。建议:遇到具体过去时间点时用一般过去时;若用完成时需加助动词(I have forgotten)。
× She she was a little disappointed.
✓ She was a little disappointed.
错误类型对应:26 (Sentence structure errors) 和 12 (Incorrect use of pronouns) 说明:句中“She she”重复,应删除一个重复项。原句其余部分结构正确。建议:读完一句话后检查是否有重复单词。
× I'm every time I I'm in birthday she will always send me a gift but I haven't remembered this.
✓ Every time it's my birthday, she always sends me a gift, but I didn't remember it this time.
错误类型对应:6 (Present tense issue)、5 (Past tense issue) 与 26 (Sentence structure errors) 说明:原句时态混乱且结构不清。“Every time it's my birthday”用于表达习惯;后半句“she will always send”应为一般现在时“she always sends”表示习惯。表示这次没有记得应该用过去时“didn't remember it this time”或现在完成“I haven't remembered it”也可,但搭配“this time”更常用过去时。建议:区分习惯性事实用一般现在时、具体过去事件用一般过去时,避免句中多余的“I I'm in birthday”等错误片段。
× In recent days I'm learning English, so I need to remember a lot of English words and grammar, which make me have little time to relax and concentrate on my work.
✓ Recently I'm learning English, so I need to remember a lot of English words and grammar, which leaves me little time to relax and concentrate on my work.
错误类型对应:6 (Present tense issue)、11 (Incorrect use of prepositions)、27 (Subject-verb agreement/errors) 说明:“In recent days”更自然为“Recently”或“In recent days I have been learning”以强调持续性。“which make me have little time”是错误结构,应改为“which leaves me little time”或“which makes me have little time”中主语和动词需一致。建议:用现在完成进行时表示近来一直在做的事(I have been learning),并用固定搭配“leave sb little time”或“make sb have little time”。
× If there is something important and I'm afraid of forgotten it, I will told the AI assistant such as the theory to to notice me of of this.
✓ If there is something important and I'm afraid of forgetting it, I will tell an AI assistant to remind me of it.
错误类型对应:8 (Verb + -ing form)、4 (Modal verb usage/conditional future), 22 (Article errors)、26 (Sentence structure errors) 说明:短语“afraid of forgotten it”应为“afraid of forgetting it”;“I will told”中“told”是过去式,应用动词原形“tell”在将来时态中;“such as the theory”意义不明且用法错误,应删去或改为“an AI assistant”表示泛指;“to to notice me of of this”含有重复并且搭配错误,正确表达为“to remind me of it”。建议:在“afraid of”后用动名词;将来时用“will + 动词原形”;避免不必要的词语和重复,使用固定搭配“remind sb of sth”。