Memory— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 질문에 직접 답하고 이유와 구체적 예를 간결하게 이어야 합니다. 현재 문장은 반복, 문법 오류(동명사/복수형), 그리고 불필요한 채우기 말(umm)이 많습니다. 개선 포인트: 1) 주제 문장으로 바로 답하기(예: No, I'm not very good at remembering things). 2) 이유를 하나만 간단히 제시하고 연결어 사용(for example, because). 3) 예시는 과거형 문법을 정확히 사용하고 불필요한 반복을 줄이기. 4) 문장 수는 최대 3~4문장으로 유지하기.

Exemplo: No, I'm not very good at remembering things. For example, this morning I forgot my wallet when I left my apartment because I was in a hurry. Since then, I've been trying to make a checklist before I go out.

Sugestão: 답변은 경험을 구체적이고 정확한 시제와 문장 구조로 전달해야 합니다. 현재 문장은 관사와 시제 오류(a trip, realized at the bus stop), 동사의 형태(get → got), 그리고 불필요한 단어('Yes')가 있습니다. 개선 포인트: 1) 사건의 시간과 장소를 명확히 말하기. 2) 과거 시제를 일관되게 사용하기. 3) 간결한 연결어(so, then)를 사용해 흐름을 매끄럽게 하기.

Exemplo: Yes. Three years ago, when I was about to travel to Japan, I realized at the bus stop that I had forgotten my passport. I hurried back home and managed to get it just in time for the trip.

Sugestão: 질문에 대한 직접적 주제 문장과 구체적 세부사항을 자연스럽게 연결해야 합니다. 현재 문장은 불필요한 ‘umm’이 많고 어순·표현(note application, when I was forget) 오류가 있습니다. 개선 포인트: 1) 주제문으로 시작하기(I need to remember appointments, tasks, and shopping lists). 2) 도구와 사용법을 구체적으로 설명하기(using my phone's notes and reminders). 3) 연결어(for example, so)로 문장을 매끄럽게 연결하기.

Exemplo: I need to remember appointments, tasks, and shopping lists in my daily life. For example, I use my phone's Notes and Reminders apps to record things I must do, so I get notifications and don't forget important tasks.

Sugestão: 답은 방법을 명확하고 논리적으로 설명해야 합니다. 현재 문장은 시제·어순 오류(write down to → write down on), 의미 불명확(clean my application?), 그리고 반복(search it, search the what I was forgot)이 있습니다. 개선 포인트: 1) 한두 문장으로 방법을 직설적으로 설명하기(I write important things in my phone). 2) 구체적 절차와 이유를 덧붙이기(then I check the list regularly so I don't miss anything). 3) 문법에 맞는 시제와 어휘 사용하기.

Exemplo: I write important things in my phone's Notes app and set reminders for deadlines. Then I check the app every morning to make sure I haven't missed anything.

× Actually I'm not good at memorizing something.

✓ Actually I'm not good at memorizing things.

Use plural 'things' instead of 'something' because 'not good at memorizing' refers to general items; 'memorizing something' is awkward here. Use plural nouns after expressions like 'good at' when speaking generally.

× I forgot the wallet today before my before leaving my apartment.

✓ I forgot my wallet today before leaving my apartment.

Remove the definite article 'the' and duplicate phrase 'before my'. Use the possessive 'my wallet' and 'before leaving' without repeating 'my'. This creates natural word order.

× And yes, memorizing things are very difficult to me.

✓ And yes, memorizing things is very difficult for me.

The subject 'memorizing things' is singular as a gerund phrase, so use singular verb 'is'. Also use preposition 'for' not 'to' in 'difficult for me'.

× Three years ago when I was planning to go to trip to Japan, I forgot my passport and I realized that on the bus stop.

✓ Three years ago when I was planning to go on a trip to Japan, I forgot my passport and realized it at the bus stop.

Use 'go on a trip' and include article 'a'. 'Realized it' is more natural than 'realized that', and use 'at the bus stop' for correct preposition.

× So I ran into my home and get that passport.

✓ So I ran back home and got the passport.

Use past tense 'got' to match 'ran'. 'Run into my home' is unnatural; use 'ran back home'. Omit 'that' before passport.

× Three years ago when I was planning to go to trip to Japan, I forgot my passport and I realized that on the bus stop. So I ran into my home and get that passport. Yes.

✓ Three years ago when I was planning to go on a trip to Japan, I forgot my passport and realized it at the bus stop, so I ran back home and got my passport.

Combine sentences for fluency, use 'go on a trip', correct prepositions and past tense consistency, and use 'my passport' for possession.

× Umm, recently umm cellphone helped me to remember several things.

✓ Umm, recently my cellphone has helped me remember several things.

Include possessive 'my cellphone'. Present perfect 'has helped' is appropriate for recent actions with present relevance. Remove 'to' after 'helped' when followed by bare infinitive 'remember'.

× For example umm note that application that can memo something, it is helpful for when I was forget something.

✓ For example, a note-taking application that can store notes is helpful when I forget something.

Use 'a' before 'note-taking application', use correct noun 'store notes' instead of 'memo', and use present simple 'forget' for general habit. Remove unnecessary 'it is' and correct word order.

× As I said, I just write down to my phone and when I was feel that I forget something I clean my application and search it, search the what I was forgot.

✓ As I said, I just write things down on my phone, and when I feel that I might forget something I open the app and search for what I forgot.

Use 'write things down on my phone' (correct preposition 'on'), use present simple 'feel' for habitual actions, 'might forget' clarifies possibility, 'open the app' is natural, and 'search for what I forgot' uses correct verb form and preposition.

× Most of that is written on that, yes.

✓ Most of the things I need are written there, yes.

Replace vague 'that' with 'the things I need' and 'there' for application location; improves clarity and natural word order.