Memory— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be more direct and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence (Yes/No) then give one specific reason and a brief example. Avoid vague phrases like "hectic schedule" without context; instead say what makes it hectic. Keep it to 2–3 sentences.

Exemplo: No, I’m not very good at memorising things. For example, because I work long hours and study in the evenings, I often forget small tasks unless I write them down.

Sugestão: Organise the answer with a clear opening and one concise supporting detail. Use linking words correctly (e.g., "because", "so") and fix grammar (use past tense consistently, remove filler words). Keep it to 2–3 sentences and include a short consequence or resolution if possible.

Exemplo: Yes. Last week my father asked me to give money to my younger brother for his school fees, but because I was rushing to my institute I forgot. As a result, my brother had to postpone paying the fee until I returned.

Sugestão: Provide a clear topic sentence and list 2–3 specific items with linking language. Use correct grammar and more natural phrases (e.g., "arrive at my institute on time", "complete my tasks", "remember lessons and important instructions"). Avoid repetition and keep within 3–4 sentences.

Exemplo: I need to remember several daily things, mainly to arrive at my institute on time, complete the tasks I am assigned there, and remember the lessons and important instructions from my teachers. For instance, I set reminders for deadlines and revise notes every evening to retain what I learned.

Sugestão: Good strategy—be more specific about your method and add a linking phrase and brief example of tools you use. Correct grammar ("an important thing" -> "an important thing") and avoid redundancy. Keep it to 2–3 sentences and mention effectiveness or a result.

Exemplo: I usually write important things in a note app on my mobile and set a reminder, so when I check my phone I see the note and remember. For example, I set an alarm and a short note to remind me to bring money for my brother's school fees.

× To be honest, I'm not good at memorizing things due to my hectic schedule.

✓ To be honest, I'm not good at memorizing things because of my hectic schedule.

The original uses 'due to' which often modifies nouns; 'because of' is more natural for explaining reasons for a state. This is an issue of preposition/use of linking phrase (mapped to Verb + -ing form category per instructions). Suggestion: use 'because of' to introduce reasons for situations.

× Well yes, it happened to me last week when my father told me to give some money to my younger brother as he had to submit his school fees.

✓ Well yes, it happened to me last week when my father told me to give some money to my younger brother because he had to pay his school fees.

'Submit his school fees' is incorrect collocation; use 'pay his school fees'. This is a lexical collocation error related to past-tense narrative. Suggestion: use 'pay' with 'school fees' in past tense context.

× But as I was in hurry to reach my institute then I forgot it.

✓ But because I was in a hurry to reach my institute, I forgot it.

Missing article 'a' before 'hurry' and unnecessary 'then'. This is a present/past tense and article usage issue. Suggestion: include 'a' and remove 'then' to make sentence natural in past narrative.

× In my daily life I have to remember a lot of things such as reaching my institute timely, doing the whole work there, memorize the things which my teacher taught me and all the instruction which are important.

✓ In my daily life I have to remember a lot of things such as reaching my institute on time, doing all the work there, memorizing the things my teacher taught me, and all the important instructions.

Multiple errors: 'timely' is incorrect collocation for arriving on time; use 'on time'. 'Doing the whole work' should be 'doing all the work'. 'Memorize' should be 'memorizing' to parallel other gerunds. 'Instruction' should be plural 'instructions' and adjective order 'important instructions'. These are preposition, gerund form, plural, and collocation issues. Suggestion: use parallel gerunds and correct collocations.

× When I have to remember a important thing, I usually make a note of it and save it on my mobile as the next time when I use my mobile I quickly remember it.

✓ When I have to remember an important thing, I usually make a note of it and save it on my mobile; the next time I use my mobile, I quickly remember it.

Use 'an' before a vowel-sound word 'important' (article error). Also streamline 'as the next time when' to 'the next time' and add punctuation for clarity. Suggestion: use 'an' and remove redundant words for clearer timing expression.