Memory— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Begin with a clear topic sentence and avoid filler words. Correct grammar (use verb forms and articles) and shorten the answer to be more natural. Add one specific example and a linking word to make it coherent.

Exemplo: I'm not very good at memorising things. For example, I often struggle to remember passages for literature class, so I have to reread them several times.

Sugestão: Answer directly, use past tense correctly, remove hesitation sounds, and give one concise consequence with a linking word. Use clearer phrasing to describe the result.

Exemplo: Yes, once I forgot the date of an important test. As a result, I went to school unprepared and received a very low grade.

Sugestão: Start with a clear topic sentence, reduce repetition and fillers, and organise points using linking words (for example, 'first', 'also'). Be specific about what you remember and why.

Exemplo: I need to remember my schoolwork and my daily schedule. For example, I memorise vocabulary and scientific definitions for class, and I keep track of appointments and study times so I don't miss anything.

Sugestão: Provide a clear topic sentence, use correct verb forms and concise phrasing, and link methods with reasons (use linking words like 'so' or 'therefore'). Give one specific example of a note-taking or phone technique.

Exemplo: I usually take notes and set reminders on my phone to avoid forgetting important tasks. For example, I create calendar alerts for tests and read passages aloud when revising, which helps me remember key points.

× I don't think I really good at memorizing as UMM.

✓ I don't think I'm really good at memorizing.

Missing linking verb 'am' after subject and improper placement of 'really' as an adverb modifying 'good' is acceptable but requires the verb. Use the contraction 'I'm' or 'I am' to complete the clause. Remove 'as UMM' which is filler. Suggestion: include the correct form of the verb 'to be' after the subject: 'I don't think I am really good at memorizing.'

× I usually umm can't memorize my school work or umm some passages at school or in my academic work.

✓ I usually can't memorize my schoolwork or some passages for my classes.

The sentence is understandable but 'school work' should be the compound noun 'schoolwork' and 'at school or in my academic work' is wordy. 'Usually can't' is a correct modal usage but streamline prepositions: use 'for my classes' or 'for school'. Suggestion: use correct compound nouns and concise prepositional phrases.

× Oh definitely, I have once forgotten my test day and just went to the school and didn't prepare much for my test and I really did a bad UH.

✓ Oh definitely, I once forgot the date of my test, went to school, and hadn't prepared much for it, so I got a very bad grade.

Use of present perfect 'have once forgotten' is acceptable but 'I once forgot' (simple past) fits the completed past event. 'Went to the school' should be 'went to school' in natural usage. 'Didn't prepare much for my test' is fine but better as 'hadn't prepared much' to show prior lack of preparation. 'Did a bad' is ungrammatical; replace with 'got a very bad grade.' Suggestion: use consistent past tense and correct collocations ('went to school', 'got a bad grade').

× I really had a great bad grade then.

✓ I really got a very bad grade then.

'Great bad grade' is a contradictory phrase; use an intensifier like 'very' with 'bad grade'. Use 'got' instead of 'had' for receiving a grade. Suggestion: choose appropriate intensifier and verb collocation: 'got a very bad grade.'

× Umm usually I, I have to memorize for umm my school work, like the passages umm for Chinese or umm some definition and circle umm, science subjects, and also I have to remember for the things umm and schedule my daily routine and schedules.

✓ Usually I have to memorize my schoolwork, such as passages for Chinese, definitions and terms for science subjects, and I also have to remember things and schedule my daily routine.

Do not use 'memorize for'—the correct verb pattern is 'memorize something' without 'for'. 'School work' should be 'schoolwork'. 'Some definition and circle' is unclear; likely 'definitions and terms' is intended. Avoid repeating 'schedule' twice. Suggestion: remove unnecessary prepositions, use correct nouns (definitions, terms), and simplify the list structure.

× I would usually take notes and mark down my daily schedule and my phone to prevent myself from forgotten forgetting something, and I would read aloud the passages of my schoolwork to enhance my memorizing skills.

✓ I usually take notes and write down my daily schedule on my phone to prevent myself from forgetting something, and I read aloud the passages from my schoolwork to improve my memory skills.

'Mark down my daily schedule and my phone' is incorrect preposition/phrase; use 'write down my daily schedule on my phone'. 'Prevent myself from forgotten' mixes forms—use gerund 'forgetting'. 'Enhance my memorizing skills' is awkward; use 'improve my memory skills' or 'improve my ability to memorize'. Also prefer simple present for habitual actions: 'I usually take' and 'I read.' Suggestion: use correct prepositions ('on my phone'), correct verb forms (gerund after 'prevent from'), and more natural nouns ('memory skills').