Memory— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Keep answers focused and directly address the question with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two brief supporting details. Avoid long irrelevant anecdotes. Improve grammar (use ‘memory’ vs ‘memorising’, correct tense and articles) and use linking words for coherence.

Exemplo: Not really — I’m not very good at memorising things. For example, when I was a child I broke my leg and remember crying for about two hours, which is one of the few memories that stuck with me.

Sugestão: Start with a direct answer then give a concise specific example, using correct grammar and connectors. Explain briefly the consequence and what you learned to show reflection.

Exemplo: Yes, I have. Once I forgot my best friend’s birthday and didn’t buy her a gift, so she was very upset. Since then I set reminders in my phone to avoid repeating the mistake.

Sugestão: Answer with a clear topic sentence and supply specific supporting details. Use correct grammar (plural/singular agreement) and link ideas with simple connectors. Mention concrete methods or examples of vocabulary to make it specific.

Exemplo: I need to remember new English vocabulary every day, especially verbs and useful phrases. For instance, I try to learn five new words each day and review them in example sentences so I can use them when speaking.

Sugestão: Begin with a clear statement of your method, then give one or two specific steps. Use correct sentence structure and linking words to show sequence or reason. Mention tools (phone calendar, notes) to be precise.

Exemplo: Because my memory isn’t very good, I use my phone’s calendar and set reminders for important events. I also write short notes in a notebook and review them each evening so I don’t forget important dates.

× I'm not that good at memorizing but I remember one story when I was a kid I broke my leg and I cried about that like 2 hours.

✓ I'm not that good at memorizing, but I remember one story: when I was a kid I broke my leg and I cried about it for about two hours.

Run-on and awkward phrase: 'about that like 2 hours' is incorrect English. Use a colon or comma to separate clauses. Replace 'that' with 'it' to refer to crying, and put the time expression after the verb phrase: 'cried about it for about two hours'. Use digits as words in formal text: 'two'. Grammar problem type ID:6

× Yes, I forgot about my best friend's birthday and for I didn't buy her gifts and she was so mad.

✓ Yes, I forgot my best friend's birthday and so I didn't buy her a gift, and she was very mad.

Incorrect connector and article/quantifier usage. 'Forgot about' is acceptable but 'forgot my best friend's birthday' is more natural. 'For I didn't buy' is incorrect; use 'so I didn't buy'. 'Gifts' should be singular 'a gift' if referring to one, or use 'any gifts'. Also 'so mad' -> 'very mad' for clarity. The sentence refers to a past event, so past simple is correct. Grammar problem type ID:5

× I need to remember new words in English and remember and use this word.

✓ I need to remember new English words and remember to use them.

Incorrect verb pattern and pronoun reference. Use 'remember to use' when referring to performing an action in the future. 'This word' is unclear; use plural 'them' to match 'new words'. Also reorder 'new English words' for natural adjective order. Grammar problem type ID:10

× So for me it's so hard 'cause my memories and skills is not that good.

✓ So for me it's very hard because my memory and skills are not that good.

Subject-verb agreement: 'memories and skills is' is incorrect; with a compound subject use 'are'. Also 'memories' should be singular 'memory' when referring to capacity. Replace informal 'so' and ''cause' with 'very' and 'because' for clarity. Grammar problem type ID:27

× 'Cause of my memories is bad, I try to write important things about my family or friends so in calendar and remember when I need that.

✓ Because my memory is bad, I try to write important things about my family and friends in a calendar so I remember when I need to.

Incorrect structure and preposition use. "'Cause of my memories is bad" is ungrammatical; use 'Because my memory is bad'. Use 'about' is unnecessary: 'write important things about my family or friends in a calendar' -> 'write important things about my family and friends in a calendar'. 'So in calendar and remember when I need that' is awkward; use 'so I remember when I need to.' Also 'memory' singular is more natural. Grammar problem type ID:26}]}