Memory— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be more grammatically accurate, concise, and organized. Start with a clear topic sentence, correct verb forms and word choice, and provide one or two brief supporting details. Use linking words if adding details. For example, say you rely on notes and explain briefly how that helps.

Exemplo: Not really. I’m not good at memorising things, so I rely on notes to keep track of my tasks and belongings. For example, I write down what I need to bring before leaving the house, which helps me avoid forgetting important items.

Sugestão: Give a focused response with a clear past example, correct grammar, and a brief reflection. Use linking words (for example, because, so) to connect ideas and explain consequences or feelings.

Exemplo: Yes. Once I forgot my friend’s birthday and I felt terrible about it because I hadn’t set a reminder. Since then, I use calendar alerts and notes to make sure I don’t miss important dates.

Sugestão: Answer directly naming specific daily items or tasks, and explain briefly how you remember them. Use linking words to add clarity and be specific about methods (phone reminders, lists, routines).

Exemplo: I need to remember things like my keys, phone, and appointments. I write a short checklist each morning and set phone reminders, so if I forget something I can quickly check the list.

Sugestão: Provide a clear topic sentence about your main method, then give one or two specific supporting details about tools or routines. Use correct prepositions and concise phrasing.

Exemplo: I use notes and digital reminders to remember important things. For instance, I keep a running notes app for tasks and set calendar alarms for deadlines, which lets me review them whenever I might forget.

× I often where I put or what I am going to bring so I usually put a notes.

✓ I often forget where I put things or what I am going to bring, so I usually write notes.

The original sentence has missing verb ('forget') and incorrect noun phrase ('a notes'). This is a sentence structure error: clauses are not connected correctly and countable noun 'notes' should not take 'a'. Use 'forget' to express failing to remember, 'things' as a general object, and 'write notes' as the natural collocation. Suggestion: Include the verb 'forget' after 'often', use plural 'notes' without 'a', and use 'write' instead of 'put' for creating notes.

× Yes, I forgot my friend's birthday and I felt terrible about it and sometimes even if I put on my notes what I'm going to bring, I still forgetting.

✓ Yes, I forgot my friend's birthday and I felt terrible about it, and sometimes even if I write in my notes what I'm going to bring, I still forget.

The sentence mixes past ('forgot', 'felt') with incorrect present progressive form 'forgetting' and incorrect phrase 'put on my notes'. This is a past tense issue plus verb form errors. Use 'write in my notes' for recording and 'forget' (simple present) to describe habitual behavior. Keep tense consistent: past for the birthday incident, present simple for habitual actions. Suggestion: Use 'write in my notes' and 'I still forget' to describe repeated behavior.

× I put on my notes what I do in my daily life so if there is something I forgot I can look back at my notes.

✓ I write in my notes what I do in my daily life, so if there is something I forget I can look back at my notes.

The phrase 'put on my notes' is an incorrect use of preposition; the correct preposition is 'in' when referring to writing into a notebook. Also tense: 'forgot' should be 'forget' to describe potential future or general situation. This combines preposition error and tense consistency. Suggestion: Use 'write in my notes' and 'if there is something I forget' to be clear and grammatically correct.

× I put on my notes to remember my important things, so if there is something that I forgot I can just look back on my notes.

✓ I write in my notes to remember important things, so if there is something I forget I can just look back at my notes.

Again 'put on my notes' and 'look back on my notes' show preposition misuse. Use 'write in' for adding content to notes and 'look back at' or 'look back in' for reviewing them. Also change 'forgot' to 'forget' for general/habitual reference and remove unnecessary 'my' before 'important things'. Suggestion: Use 'write in my notes' and 'look back at my notes' and use present simple 'forget' for habitual situations.