Memory— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be more concise and correct grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one brief supporting detail. Avoid irrelevant medical details unless they directly answer the question. Use correct articles and verb forms (e.g., "a doctor").

Exemplo: Not really. I'm not good at memorising things. For example, I often forget appointments, so I take notes and set phone reminders to help me remember.

Sugestão: Give a clear, grammatically correct response and one specific example. Avoid unclear phrases like "I always not everything." Use linking words (for example, so, because) to make the logic clear.

Exemplo: Yes, I have. For instance, I once forgot a dentist appointment because I didn't put it in my calendar, so now I write down dates and set alarms on my phone.

Sugestão: Begin with a direct topic sentence naming what you need to remember, then add one specific detail and a linking word to show consequence. Avoid repeating the same idea; vary vocabulary (e.g., "appointments, errands").

Exemplo: I need to remember appointments and errands in my daily life. Because I sometimes forget plans, I write them down and check my calendar every morning to stay organised.

Sugestão: This answer is clear but brief—add one specific method and a linking word to enrich it. Use varied vocabulary (e.g., "set reminders, use apps, review notes") to show range.

Exemplo: I usually take notes and set phone reminders to remember important things. In the morning and evening I review my notes so I don't miss any tasks or appointments.

× I actually went to doctor very recently because of this and he gave me some vitamin B12 pills for it.

✓ I actually went to the doctor very recently because of this, and he gave me some vitamin B12 pills for it.

Missing definite article before 'doctor'. Use 'the doctor' when referring to a specific medical professional. Also add a comma before 'and' joining two independent clauses. Suggestion: include articles before singular countable nouns referring to known people or roles.

× Yes, I always forgot important things, that's why I always not everything and I check my notes quite often.

✓ Yes, I always forget important things; that's why I always note everything and I check my notes quite often.

The student mixed past tense 'forgot' with 'always', which requires the simple present 'forget' for habitual actions. 'always not everything' is ungrammatical; likely intended 'note everything' meaning to write down all items. Use a semicolon or conjunction to connect related clauses. Suggestion: use simple present for habits and replace incorrect phrase with 'note everything'.

× In my daily life, I need to remember if I have to go somewhere that day and I usually forget it.

✓ In my daily life, I need to remember whether I have to go somewhere that day, and I usually forget it.

Use 'whether' (not 'if') when presenting alternatives or choices to remember. Also add a comma before the coordinating conjunction 'and' connecting two independent clauses. Suggestion: use 'whether' for alternatives and maintain comma usage.

× That's why I always take notes and that's why I always use calendar.

✓ That's why I always take notes, and that's why I always use a calendar.

'Calendar' is a singular countable noun and requires an indefinite article 'a' when speaking generally. Add a comma before 'and' connecting clauses. Suggestion: use 'a calendar' for one calendar in general contexts.

× To remember important things, I usually take notes, and I look at my notes quite often.

✓ To remember important things, I usually take notes and look at them quite often.

Repetition of 'I' and 'my notes' is redundant. Replace the second clause with 'look at them' for conciseness. Also no comma is needed before the final short coordinated verb phrase. Suggestion: combine actions into one fluent sentence and use pronouns to avoid repetition.