Memory— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be direct and coherent. Start with a clear topic sentence (Yes/No), then give 1–2 specific supporting details using linking words. Keep sentences simple and avoid repetition. Use correct tense and articles, and choose precise vocabulary (e.g., "remind me", "calendar app", "deadlines").

Exemplo: Yes, I rely on my smartphone to help me remember things. For example, I use the calendar app to set reminders for deadlines and appointments, which ensures I complete tasks on time.

Sugestão: Answer clearly and give a concrete example. Start with a direct response (Yes/No), then briefly describe a specific incident and its consequence. Use linking words like "for example" or "because" and avoid repeated filler phrases like "I think".

Exemplo: Yes, once I forgot to take an important medicine because I didn't set a reminder. As a result, I felt unwell that day, so now I always set alarms on my phone.

Sugestão: Give a structured answer: state the main things you need to remember, then add specific examples and frequencies. Use linking words ("for example", "also", "so") and correct collocations ("take vitamins/medication", "meet deadlines"). Keep it under five sentences.

Exemplo: I need to remember to take vitamins and my prescribed medication every day. I also use my calendar to remember work deadlines and appointments, for example I set alerts the day before a meeting.

Sugestão: Explain your method clearly with a short topic sentence and one or two supporting details. Use accurate verbs and nouns ("I set reminders", "alarm", "calendar app") and avoid repetition. Mention any backups you use (e.g., notes, alarms) to show range.

Exemplo: I set alarms and calendar reminders on my smartphone for important tasks like taking medicine or attending meetings. I also write notes on sticky notes as a backup if I worry I might miss an alert.

× Actually I don't remember the things there was there, but my smartphone always Remember Me and always I'm using calendar to help me to remember what I need to finishing it to be after before deadline.

✓ Actually I don't remember everything, but my smartphone always reminds me and I always use a calendar to help me remember what I need to finish before the deadline.

Multiple sentence structure problems: incorrect word order, unnecessary words, and wrong verb forms. 'there was there' is incorrect and should be 'everything' or 'the details'. 'Remember Me' should be 'reminds me' (third person present). 'I'm using calendar' should be 'I always use a calendar' for natural present habit. 'to remember what I need to finishing it to be after before deadline' mixes forms; use 'to help me remember what I need to finish before the deadline'. Suggestion: simplify the sentence into clear clauses, use correct verb forms and natural phrases.

× Therefore it's remember.

✓ Therefore it reminds me.

'It's remember' is ungrammatical: 'remember' is a verb and needs a subject that performs the action. The smartphone 'reminds me' (verb with object). Use the third person singular present 'reminds'. Suggestion: use 'reminds me' to express that the device performs the action.

× Therefore the phone is very healthy.

✓ Therefore the phone is very helpful.

'Healthy' describes living beings, not objects like a phone. The intended meaning is that the phone is useful; replace 'healthy' with 'helpful'. Suggestion: choose adjectives appropriate for the noun.

× It helped me to help me to finish all the work.

✓ It helps me finish all my work.

Redundant and inconsistent tense: 'helped me to help me to' is repetitive. Use simple present 'helps me finish' to show habitual action. Also 'all the work' is more naturally 'all my work'. Suggestion: remove redundancy and use correct tense for habits.

× Yes, I am.

✓ Yes, I have forgotten something.

The question asked about past experience, so answer should reflect having forgotten something. 'Yes, I am' is awkward and incorrect. Use present perfect or simple past depending on context: 'Yes, I have forgotten something' or 'Yes, I have'. Suggestion: respond with a verb phrase that matches the question about past experiences.

× I think I'm only the I think it is.

✓ I think I'm the only one who forgets sometimes.

The original is fragmented and unclear. Likely intended meaning is 'I'm the only one who forgets things.' Use 'the only one' and a relative clause 'who forgets sometimes' for clarity. Suggestion: complete the thought and use proper pronouns.

× I think some of more I think more things are forget that without using the phone, smartphone or without using calendar to remember how can to eat, to take care of vitamins and keep my healthy always the good without the unfilled.

✓ I think I would forget more things without using my smartphone or a calendar to remind me, such as when to eat, to take vitamins, and how to maintain my health.

This sentence has many structural issues: word order, incorrect verb forms ('are forget' should be 'would forget' or 'forget'), redundant phrases, and unclear nouns ('unfilled'). Use a conditional or modal to express hypothetical forgetting: 'I would forget more things without...' Use 'remind me' for purpose and list examples in parallel form: 'when to eat, to take vitamins, and how to maintain my health.' Suggestion: break complex ideas into clearer clauses and use appropriate modal verbs for hypotheticals.

× And my daily life, I'm always there using a smartphone or a calendar to take vitamins and drugs to keep my healthy, to keep my healthy body.

✓ In my daily life, I always use a smartphone or a calendar to remind me to take vitamins and medicine to stay healthy.

Use 'In my daily life' rather than 'And my daily life'. 'I'm always there using' is awkward; 'I always use' is natural. 'Drugs' is better as 'medicine' here. 'to keep my healthy, to keep my healthy body' is incorrect; use 'to stay healthy'. Prepositions and articles need correction. Suggestion: use natural prepositional phrases and appropriate vocabulary.

× And sometimes I remember to to finish my work at the deadline and always using calendar such such as I am.

✓ Sometimes I remember to finish my work before the deadline because I always use a calendar.

Duplicate 'to to' and wrong preposition 'at the deadline' should be 'before the deadline'. 'always using calendar such such as I am' is ungrammatical and redundant. Use a cause clause 'because I always use a calendar.' Suggestion: correct infinitive duplication, use proper prepositions, and express cause clearly.

× I am always the smartphone and always and actually using the calendar to Remember Me about the important things.

✓ I always use my smartphone and the calendar to remind me about important things.

'I am always the smartphone' is nonsensical; should be 'I always use my smartphone'. 'Remember Me' should be 'remind me'. Remove unnecessary 'and always and actually'. Suggestion: state the habitual action clearly with correct verbs.

× It's just to take taking the drugs and and vitamins on the to make to keep my healthy to keep my healthy goods.

✓ It's just to take medicine and vitamins to keep me healthy.

Incorrect gerund/infinitive forms and redundancy: 'to take taking' is wrong; use 'to take'. 'drugs' should be 'medicine' and 'to keep my healthy' should be 'to keep me healthy'. Remove extra words. Suggestion: use infinitive 'to take' and pronoun 'me' for clarity.

× Therefore I am using the calendar and in time I am using the switch.

✓ Therefore I use the calendar, and I set reminders on time using the alarm or notification feature.

'in time I am using the switch' is vague and unclear. Likely means setting alarms or switches for reminders. Use clear terms like 'set reminders' or 'use the alarm/notification feature'. Also use simple present 'I use' for habitual actions. Suggestion: replace vague words with precise vocabulary and use consistent tense.