Memory— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be clearer and more concise: start with a direct topic sentence saying whether you are good at memorising, then give one specific reason and one brief example. Avoid repeating words (memorizing/memoir) and correct vocabulary (memory, not memoir). Keep to 2–3 sentences and use a linking word to connect reason and example.

Exemplo: No, I'm not very good at memorising. My memory is quite weak, so I often forget important tasks, for example I frequently miss small deadlines at university.

Sugestão: Give one clear, specific example and use correct tense and linking words. Start with a direct answer, then describe a single incident with when and what happened, and end with the result or lesson. Avoid vague phrases and grammar errors.

Exemplo: Yes, I have. For example, last semester I missed a project deadline because I confused the date, so I submitted the work late and lost marks. Since then I try to double-check deadlines.

Sugestão: Be specific about the kinds of things you need to remember and organise the answer with a topic sentence and two concise supporting points. Use linking words (for example, also) and correct prepositions (remember to, remember for). Avoid repetition and unclear phrases like 'maybe on some little thing'.

Exemplo: I need to remember major deadlines, such as project or homework submission dates. I also have to remember small daily tasks, like appointments or errands, for example buying groceries after classes.

Sugestão: Answer directly and concisely: name the method and give a short explanation with an example. Reduce filler words (umm) and use correct grammar (set reminders, receive notifications). Mention one concrete app or method to add specificity.

Exemplo: I use my mobile phone to set calendar reminders and alarms, which notify me before deadlines. For example, I set an alarm two days before a project is due so I have time to finish it.

× I think I'm not good at memorizing things because I think my memoir is weak and also I always forget something important in my daily life.

✓ I don't think I'm good at memorizing things because my memory is weak and I often forget important things in my daily life.

Pronoun and noun choice: 'I think I'm not good' is wordy and non-idiomatic; use 'I don't think I'm good'. 'My memoir is weak' is incorrect noun choice; 'memory' is correct. 'I always forget something important' mixes singular with vague time; 'I often forget important things' is more natural. Suggestion: choose correct nouns (memory), use negative contraction for opinion (I don't think), and match plurality between 'things' and 'important'.

× Yes, I sometimes forgot something important.

✓ Yes, I sometimes forget something important.

Tense inconsistency: The student uses simple past 'forgot' with 'sometimes' which often denotes habitual action — present simple 'forget' is appropriate. Use present simple for habitual patterns. Suggestion: use 'sometimes forget' for repeated actions.

× For example I forgot how the project deadline and I do it after the deadline and I also forgot the homework deadline and this is the important thing for me and because I am the student so.

✓ For example, I forgot the project deadline and submitted my work after it; I also missed the homework deadline. This is important to me because I am a student.

Multiple structural errors: 'forgot how the project deadline' is incorrect phrase; use 'forgot the project deadline' or 'forgot when the project was due'. 'I do it after the deadline' should be 'I submitted my work after it' or 'I did it after the deadline'. Run-on sentence with 'and this is the important thing for me and because I am the student so' is ungrammatical — simplify to 'This is important to me because I am a student.' Suggestion: break into shorter sentences, use correct verbs (forgot, missed, submitted), and remove redundant connectors.

× I need to remember on the project deadline in my daily life and I have to submit it and also I need to remember something on maybe on some little thing I need to remember it.

✓ I need to remember the project deadline in my daily life because I have to submit it; I also need to remember small tasks.

Preposition errors: 'remember on the project deadline' is wrong; use 'remember the project deadline' or 'remember when the project is due'. Repetition and awkward phrasing 'something on maybe on some little thing I need to remember it' should be simplified to 'small tasks' or 'small things'. Suggestion: remove unnecessary prepositions and repetitions, use concise nouns.

× Umm, I will use my mobile phone umm to have a schedule to remember this important thing and it will remind me and it will have messages send message to me to remember this important things.

✓ I use my mobile phone to keep a schedule to remember important things; it reminds me and sends messages to me.

Tense and verb form issues: 'I will use' suggests future but context is habitual — present simple 'I use' fits better. 'To have a schedule' is awkward; 'to keep a schedule' or 'to set reminders' is better. 'It will have messages send message to me' is ungrammatical; correct is 'it sends me messages' or 'it sends reminders'. Plural agreement: 'this important things' mixes singular and plural; use 'important things'. Suggestion: use present simple for routines, correct verb forms (sends), and concise phrasing like 'set reminders'.