Memory— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be concise and clear: give a direct topic sentence, avoid repetition, correct grammar, and add one specific supporting detail. Use linking words for coherence. Practice reducing hesitations and self-corrections.

Exemplo: No, I'm not good at memorising things. For example, I often learn lines for a drama one day but forget them the next because I don't review them. Therefore, I rely on written notes to remind myself.

Sugestão: Start with a clear topic sentence, correct tense and vocabulary, and give a specific example with coherent sequencing. Avoid informal or unclear phrases. Use linking words like 'for example' and 'as a result'.

Exemplo: Yes, I have. For example, I once missed an important meeting at work because I forgot the deadline. As a result, my manager criticised me and I had to apologise and reschedule, which was embarrassing.

Sugestão: Give a clear, relevant topic sentence about everyday tasks you must remember. Use specific, logical details and avoid unrelated or unclear words. Keep it short (1–3 sentences) and use linking words if adding details.

Exemplo: I need to remember daily tasks like preparing meals, taking my medication, and planning my work schedule. For instance, every morning I make a to-do list and check it throughout the day so I don't forget important chores.

Sugestão: Good content — you listed strategies. Improve grammar, fluency, and reduce hesitations. Start with a clear topic sentence, then list methods using linking words. Be slightly more specific about tools and routine.

Exemplo: I use several methods to remember important things. For example, I write tasks in a notebook and set multiple alarms on my phone; if something is very important, I also add it to my calendar and set reminders a day in advance.

× No, I'm not good at memorising things because I I just say, say that I am a very, a very, very bad in memorising things.

✓ No, I'm not good at memorising things because I just say that I am very bad at memorising things.

The phrase 'very bad in memorising things' uses incorrect preposition and adjective placement. Use 'bad at' for ability and remove repeated words. Also remove duplicate 'I' and repeated 'say'. Improve fluency by saying 'I just say that I am very bad at memorising things.'

× For example, if I was the drama today, but yeah, tomorrow I just forget about the drama because I had not memorised the different things.

✓ For example, if I performed in a drama today, tomorrow I just forget about it because I did not memorise the details.

The original mixes tenses and uses incorrect verbs. Use 'performed' for acting in a drama (past) or 'perform' for conditional; here context prefers simple past for the example and simple past 'did not memorise' for the reason. 'Different things' is vague; 'details' is more appropriate. Also use 'forget about it' to refer back to the drama.

× On the other hand, I also not memorise where.

✓ On the other hand, I also do not remember where I put things.

The sentence lacks an auxiliary 'do' for negation and uses 'memorise where' awkwardly. Replace with 'do not remember where I put things' for grammatical negation and clearer meaning.

× Yes, most of the time I just forget about the deadlines of the meetings.

✓ Yes, most of the time I just forget meeting deadlines.

'Deadlines of the meetings' is wordy; 'meeting deadlines' is concise. Tense 'forget' is present simple and appropriate for habitual action; simplifying improves naturalness.

× It is a very bad for me.

✓ It is very bad for me.

The article 'a' is unnecessary before 'very bad'. Remove 'a' to correct the adjective phrase.

× For example at the company their deadline are coming and I forget about the important meeting.

✓ For example, at the company their deadlines are coming and I forget about important meetings.

Subject-verb agreement and pluralization issues: use 'deadlines are' and match nouns consistently. 'The important meeting' is too specific; plural 'important meetings' fits context.

× Than CEO was just shot on me and they said you just forget you were important deadline and how you can do it so.

✓ Then the CEO shouted at me and said, 'You just forgot an important deadline; how could you do that?','explanation':'Multiple errors: 'Than' should be 'Then'; 'shot on me' is incorrect idiom, use 'shouted at me'; tense should be past 'forgot'; word order and auxiliary for question 'how could you do that' is correct. Also add 'the' before 'CEO'.'

Multiple errors: 'Than' should be 'Then'; 'shot on me' is incorrect idiom, use 'shouted at me'; tense should be past 'forgot'; word order and auxiliary for question 'how could you do that' is correct. Also add 'the' before 'CEO'.

× Well, I need to remember in my daily life her dad is my preparations because now the time I just focus on eye sleeping preparations and now my my day start with the ice cream ice preparation and I just focus on the all day on the yards.

✓ Well, I need to remember my daily preparations because right now I just focus on sleep preparations, and my day starts with those preparations; I then focus all day on my tasks.

The original contains wrong pronouns ('her dad'), unclear phrases, and lack of subject-verb agreement. Replace with 'my daily preparations', use 'right now' for timing, correct verb 'starts', and replace unclear 'ice cream ice preparation' with a plausible phrase 'those preparations' and 'tasks' to convey meaning. Break into clearer clauses.

× Uh, I remember the more important things. I just, uh, set the alarm on my phones are, uh, noted at my notebook.

✓ I remember the more important things by setting alarms on my phone and noting them in my notebook.

Use gerund 'setting' to show method; singular 'phone' or 'phones' must match context and 'noted at my notebook' is incorrect preposition—use 'noting them in my notebook.' Combine into a single fluent sentence.

× Uh, sometime I just make the deadlines and set alarm on the different alarms are set.

✓ Sometimes I just set deadlines and set different alarms.

Use 'sometimes' (adverb), not 'sometime'. Remove redundant wording 'set alarm on the different alarms are set'. Use concise parallel structure 'set deadlines and set different alarms.'

× Like for example, I set alarm 4:00 PM, then I set alarm at 5:00 PM. So I just remind myself.

✓ For example, I set an alarm for 4:00 PM, then another at 5:00 PM, so I remind myself.

Include the article 'an' before 'alarm' and correct preposition 'for 4:00 PM', place adverbial phrases correctly. Use 'another' for the second alarm and 'remind myself' present simple fits habitual action.