Memory— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is natural and directly addresses the question, but it has some redundancy and informal phrasing. To improve, shorten the opening filler, use one clear topic sentence, then add one concise supporting detail or brief example. Vary vocabulary slightly (e.g., forgetful, poor memory) and avoid overusing qualifiers like "very" or repeating ideas.

Exemplo: No, I'm not very good at memorising things. For example, my friends call me forgetful because I often misplace items or forget appointments, which has caused me to miss deadlines.

Sugestão: The story answers the question but is long and slightly unclear in parts. Improve by using a clear topic sentence ('Yes, I have'), then give one concise, well-structured example with logical sequence and linking words (first, then, as a result). Correct minor grammar (e.g., 'burnt' -> 'burned' or 'the food got burned').

Exemplo: Yes, I have. Once my mother asked me to turn off the stove before she left; I forgot, so the food on the stove burned and she was very angry. As a result, I learned to set a timer to avoid repeating that mistake.

Sugestão: Your answer is relevant but contains fillers and small grammar errors. Make a direct topic sentence and provide one or two specific examples of what you must remember. Use linking words if you add details and avoid hesitation words like 'uh'.

Exemplo: As a student, I need to remember mathematical formulas and deadlines for assignments. For instance, I memorise key algebra formulas and keep a schedule to track homework due dates.

Sugestão: Good practical strategy and clear method. Improve by correcting small grammar errors and making the explanation more concise and natural. Add a short reason why the method works and, if possible, one more method to show range.

Exemplo: I write colourful notes and stick them on a wall I pass frequently because seeing them repeatedly helps me remember. I also set phone reminders for time-sensitive tasks.

× I have to say that yes, I remember that when my mom went out and she asked me if I could turn off the stove but I forgot that so it turned out to be burnt and my mom was really mad at me and she scored me so much.

✓ I have to say that yes, I remember that when my mom went out she asked me to turn off the stove, but I forgot, so it ended up burned and my mom was really mad at me and scolded me a lot.

Pronoun and verb choices: 'she asked me if I could turn off the stove' is understandable but more natural is 'she asked me to turn off the stove' (use of reporting verbs with infinitive). 'I forgot that' is awkward; use 'I forgot' or 'I forgot to do it.' 'It turned out to be burnt' is unnatural in this context; use 'it ended up burned' or 'it got burned.' 'She scored me so much' incorrectly uses 'scored' instead of 'scolded' and 'so much' is colloquial; use 'scolded me a lot.' Improve by using clear pronoun references and correct verb choice.

× Because I'm still a student, so in my daily routine I have to memorize, uh, many formula about mathematics and many tips to do homework.

✓ Because I'm still a student, in my daily routine I have to memorize many formulas in mathematics and many tips for doing homework.

Tense and count: 'many formula' is singular/plural error; use 'many formulas' (Grammar problem type 1 also relevant but primary issue here is plural). 'about mathematics' is less natural than 'in mathematics.' 'tips to do homework' should be 'tips for doing homework' or 'tips on doing homework.' Remove redundant 'so' after 'Because' (starting a clause with 'Because' already provides the reason). Use present simple 'have to memorize' correctly.

× When I have to memorize crucial thing, I often write down a colorful note and glue it on wall where I often pass so it will be easily for me to memorize it.

✓ When I have to memorize a crucial thing, I often write a colorful note and stick it on a wall where I often pass, so it will be easier for me to remember it.

Gerund/infinitive and collocation errors: 'memorize crucial thing' needs an article and pluralization: 'a crucial thing' or better 'something crucial.' 'Write down a colorful note' is acceptable but 'write a colorful note' is more natural. 'Glue it on wall' should be 'stick it on a wall' or 'glue it to the wall.' 'Where I often pass' is ungrammatical; use 'where I often pass by' or 'where I often walk by.' 'It will be easily for me to memorize it' mixes adverb/adjective; correct is 'it will be easier for me to remember it.' Also use 'remember' rather than 'memorize' in this context for natural phrasing.

× To be honest, no, I'm not good at memorizing things. My friends often say that I have a goldfish memory and I always forget things easily, even crucial things.

✓ To be honest, no, I'm not good at memorizing things. My friends often say that I have a goldfish memory, and I always forget things easily, even important ones.

Word choice and parallelism: 'crucial things' is grammatical but 'important ones' is more natural and avoids repetition. 'Forget things easily' is acceptable, but 'always forget things easily' is slightly redundant; consider 'I often forget things' or 'I forget things easily.' Improve adjective choice for clarity and naturalness.

× Because I'm still a student, so in my daily routine I have to memorize, uh, many formula about mathematics and many tips to do homework.

✓ Because I'm still a student, in my daily routine I have to memorize many formulas in mathematics and many tips for doing homework.

Count noun error: 'formula' should be plural 'formulas' when preceded by 'many.' Also use 'in mathematics' rather than 'about mathematics.' This correction fixes the singular/plural mismatch and improves preposition use.

× When I have to memorize crucial thing, I often write down a colorful note and glue it on wall where I often pass so it will be easily for me to memorize it.

✓ When I have to memorize a crucial thing, I often write a colorful note and stick it on a wall where I often pass, so it will be easier for me to remember it.

Articles missing: 'crucial thing' needs an article 'a crucial thing.' 'On wall' needs 'on a wall' or 'on the wall.' Adding the correct articles makes the sentence grammatical and clearer.