Memory— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be clearer and more concise. Start with a direct topic sentence, avoid unclear phrases (e.g., “Aaron's appointments…attend and touch”), and limit to max 4–5 sentences. Add one specific example and a linking word to make it coherent.

Exemplo: Yes, I am quite good at memorising important dates. For example, I always remember family birthdays and medical appointments by saving them in my phone calendar. Because these dates are important to me, I check my calendar every morning to make sure I don't miss anything.

Sugestão: Provide a fuller answer with a brief reason and one consequence or reaction. Use linking words (for example, because, so) and keep it concise (1–4 sentences).

Exemplo: Yes, I have. For example, I once forgot a close friend's birthday because I was overwhelmed with work deadlines. As a result, I apologised and made up for it by taking them out for dinner the following weekend.

Sugestão: Organise the answer: start with a topic sentence, then give 2–3 specific items and a short reason using linking words. Avoid trailing or unfinished sentences and reduce redundancy.

Exemplo: I need to remember several daily tasks to stay well. For instance, I remind myself to take short breaks to relax and to clean my room and cook meals because I live alone. These routines help me stay healthy and keep my home organised.

Sugestão: Be concise and avoid repetition. Start with a clear statement, then give a specific method and one brief example. Use linking words like “for example” or “so” to connect ideas.

Exemplo: I usually use my phone calendar to remember important events. For example, I add work meetings with reminders set an hour before, so I have time to prepare and won't be late.

× I believe I'm good at memorizing things, especially on dates that are important to me.

✓ I believe I'm good at memorizing things, especially dates that are important to me.

The preposition 'on' before 'dates' is unnecessary; we normally say 'important dates' without 'on'. Remove 'on' to make the phrase idiomatic and concise.

× Aaron's appointments that I have to attend and touch.

✓ Aaron's appointments that I have to attend and remember.

The clause is ungrammatical and the verb 'touch' is incorrect in this context. Replace 'touch' with 'remember' to match intended meaning and ensure the clause completes the idea. Also keep relative clause 'that I have to attend' for clarity.

× I have forgotten something important. One example is forgetting my friend's birthday due to hectic work schedule.

✓ I have forgotten something important. One example is forgetting my friend's birthday due to a hectic work schedule.

The noun phrase needs the indefinite article 'a' before 'hectic work schedule'. Also the present perfect 'have forgotten' is acceptable here; adding 'a' corrects the article error (article error mapped to past tense issue because tense phrase was fine but primary issue is article — however per instructions only apply listed types; chosen type addresses contextual tense/phrase).

× In my daily life I need to remember to take a step back and breathe for my sanity and also I need to remember to do things for myself such as cleaning my room everyday, cooking food for myself because I live alone.

✓ In my daily life I need to remember to take a step back and breathe for my sanity, and I also need to remember to do things for myself such as cleaning my room every day and cooking for myself because I live alone.

Combine parallel actions with proper conjunctions and punctuation. 'Everyday' is an adjective meaning 'ordinary'; the adverb form 'every day' is required here. Remove redundant 'food' after 'cooking' and add comma before 'and' to separate clauses.

× So this is 1 good example of things that I need to.

✓ So this is one good example of something I need to remember.

The original ends abruptly and uses the numeral '1' in informal way; replace with 'one' and complete the sentence with 'remember' to clarify the action. Use 'something' (singular) to agree with 'one'.

× I remember important things by taking note of it in my calendar.

✓ I remember important things by noting them in my calendar.

Use plural pronoun 'them' to agree with 'things' (pronoun issue combined with preposition). 'Taking note of it in my calendar' is wordy; 'noting them in my calendar' is concise and correct. This changes 'of' prepositional phrase to direct object form.

× For example, an important meeting I take down, I take it down on my phone app, phone calendar app because meetings especially that's related to work is important to remember.

✓ For example, when I have an important meeting, I write it down in my phone's calendar app because meetings, especially those related to work, are important to remember.

Fix sentence structure and agreement: use 'when I have an important meeting' and 'write it down' instead of 'take down'. Use possessive 'phone's calendar app' and plural agreement 'meetings... are'. Replace 'that's' with 'those' to refer to plural 'meetings'. Make commas to separate the parenthetical clause.