Memory— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 답변을 더 자연스럽고 구조적으로 개선하세요. 토픽 문장으로 바로 응답한 후, 한두 문장의 구체적 예시와 연결어를 사용해 이유를 설명하면 좋습니다. 문법(예: 'When I hear' 와 'forget it right away')과 불필요한 반복('terrible at memorizing' 두 번 사용)을 줄이세요.

Exemplo: No, I'm not very good at memorising. For example, I often forget people's names as soon as I meet them, which is embarrassing. Because I meet many new people at university, I find it hard to remember names unless I repeat them or write them down.

Sugestão: 정확한 시제와 부정 표현을 사용하여 문장을 명확히 하세요. 숫자나 불필요한 단어('15')는 제거하고, 사건의 시간·결과·느낌을 논리적으로 연결해 설명하세요. 또한 문장 수를 3~4개로 제한해 자연스럽게 말하세요.

Exemplo: Yes, I have. Once I missed an important exam because I forgot the date. I panicked since I hadn't prepared at all, and I ended up submitting a blank paper. That experience taught me to use reminders so it doesn't happen again.

Sugestão: 응답을 더 구체적으로 하고 연결어를 사용하세요. 예를 들어 어떤 종류의 계획표를 쓰는지, 미리 준비하는 방법과 이유를 덧붙이면 좋습니다. 중복된 단어('I I')와 주어·목적어 일치를 확인하세요.

Exemplo: As a student, I need to remember important dates like exams and assignment deadlines. I try to prepare at least a month in advance, so I write all dates in my planner and set reminders on my phone to stay on track.

Sugestão: 대명사와 인칭 일치를 바로잡고 문장을 간결하게 만드세요. 방법을 순서대로 설명하고 연결어(For important things, firstly/then)와 구체적 예(앱이나 노트의 사용법)를 추가하면 더 설득력 있습니다.

Exemplo: For important things, I write them down in a notebook or on my phone and review the notes regularly. I also use alarms and revise the information several times, because repeating it helps me remember better.

× No, I'm terrible at memorizing. Like especially the name.

✓ No, I'm terrible at memorizing, especially names.

The original contains awkward phrasing and a singular noun 'the name' when speaking generally. Use plural 'names' for general statements and combine clauses for fluency. Suggestion: use 'especially names' and connect clauses with a comma.

× When I heard the name of someone, I forget about it right away.

✓ When I hear someone's name, I forget it right away.

Mixed tenses: 'heard' (past) conflicts with habitual present 'forget'. For habitual actions use present simple: 'When I hear... I forget.' Also use 'someone's name' and omit unnecessary preposition 'about'.

× And so yeah, I'm terrible at memorizing.

✓ So yeah, I'm terrible at memorizing.

Minor redundancy: 'And so' is informal and repetitive. Use 'So' to start the sentence. This is a style clarity improvement rather than a strict grammar rule.

× Yeah, definitely 15. I forgot about a very crucial exam and I was literally in panic because I hadn't prepared nothing.

✓ Yeah, definitely. I forgot a very important exam and I was literally in a panic because I hadn't prepared anything.

'15' is unclear and likely extraneous; remove or clarify number. Double negative 'hadn't prepared nothing' is incorrect—use 'hadn't prepared anything.' 'In panic' should be 'in a panic.' Also 'crucial' can be fine but 'important' is more natural here.

× So I submitted the exam completely blank.

✓ So I submitted the exam completely blank.

This sentence is grammatically correct in past simple and fits context. No change needed.

× As a student, I need to remember my exam date.

✓ As a student, I need to remember my exam dates.

If speaking generally about multiple exams, use plural 'exam dates'. If referring to a single upcoming exam, 'my exam date' is acceptable—context suggests recurring obligations, so plural is clearer.

× I'm trying to prepare them at least before a month, so I I write down the dates in my planner.

✓ I try to prepare at least a month in advance, so I write the dates in my planner.

'At least before a month' is incorrect. Use 'at least a month in advance' to indicate the time period. Also correct repetition 'I I' and change 'I'm trying' to simple present 'I try' for habitual action.

× In case of important things, you try to remember them by writing them down in my notes and review them repeatedly.

✓ For important things, I try to remember them by writing them down in my notes and reviewing them repeatedly.

Pronoun mismatch: sentence switches from 'you' to 'my'; maintain first person 'I'. Also verb form 'review' should be gerund 'reviewing' after 'and'.

× And personally I think to repeat is the best way to remember.

✓ Personally, I think repeating is the best way to remember.

Infinitive 'to repeat' is unnatural here; use gerund 'repeating' as the subject. Add comma after introductory 'Personally' for clarity.