Memory— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be direct and accurate. Start with a clear topic sentence, avoid repeated words and grammar mistakes, use linking words for clarity, and give a specific example. Keep it within 2–4 sentences.

Exemplo: I’m not very good at memorising things. For example, I often forget my keys and my glasses, so I rely on my phone’s notes and reminder apps to help me remember important items.

Sugestão: Give a concise account with specific details and logical order. Use past tense correctly, avoid repetition, and mention what you did to fix it. Two to three sentences are enough.

Exemplo: Yes, once I forgot my best friend’s birthday. I apologised and gave her a belated gift, and I set a reminder in my phone so I wouldn’t forget it again.

Sugestão: Organise your answer: state the main things you must remember, then give specific examples. Avoid vague phrases and slang. Use linking words like 'for example' or 'such as'. Keep to 2–4 clear sentences.

Exemplo: As a high school student I need to remember my study schedule and important documents. For example, I must remember homework deadlines, exam dates and my maths textbook, so I check a planner every morning to stay organised.

Sugestão: Be specific about the methods you use and give an example of how they help you. Use correct vocabulary (reminder, note, alarm) and linking words to make it coherent. Two to three sentences are enough.

Exemplo: I use my phone’s reminder and note apps to remember important tasks. For instance, I set alarms for exam dates and add details in a note so I can review them easily before deadlines.

× No, I don't excellent at memorandizing things.

✓ No, I'm not good at memorizing things.

Original uses incorrect auxiliary 'do' with adjective 'excellent' and wrong adjective choice. Use 'to be' for state (present tense) and adjective 'good' or 'excellent'. Suggestion: use 'I am not good at memorizing things.' or 'I'm not excellent at memorizing things.' but 'good' is more natural.

× I always like forget my key and my like my my Lunette in everywhere.

✓ I always forget my keys and my glasses everywhere.

Errors: unnecessary 'like' fillers, incorrect verb form 'like forget', incorrect singular/plural 'key'→'keys', 'Lunette' (French) wrong word choice -> 'glasses', and 'in everywhere' incorrect preposition; use 'everywhere'. Suggestion: remove fillers and use 'I always forget my keys and my glasses everywhere.'

× I I don't can remember that and I have to use my like application, like note and reminder to help me, uh, re uh, memorizing some.

✓ I can't remember them, so I have to use apps like notes and reminders to help me remember things.

Errors: 'don't can' is ungrammatical — use modal 'can't'. Use plural 'them' to refer to things. 're memorizing' wrong form; use 'remember' not 'memorizing' after 'help me'. 'application'→'apps' (plural) and 'note and reminder'→'notes and reminders'. Remove filler words.

× Yes, I have. I forget my birthday of my bestie.

✓ Yes, I have. I forgot my best friend's birthday.

After 'Yes, I have' meaning experienced, the specific incident uses past tense 'forgot' (not 'forget'). 'Birthday of my bestie' is unnatural; use 'my best friend's birthday'.

× Oh my God, it's so terrible and I have to apologize and promise like I, I, I, I have like I have supposed to say I heard so much and I say with her, I I promise I will like remember that this next year.

✓ It was awful; I had to apologize and promise her that I would remember it next year.

This compound sentence has many fillers and tense mismatches. Use past simple 'was' for past event, 'had to' for obligation in past, and 'promise her that I would remember it next year' for future-in-past. Remove repetitive 'I' and 'like'. Be concise: 'It was awful; I apologized and promised her I would remember it next year.'

× Well, so normally, because I'm a high school student in the crazy hell, so in my daily routine, I just have to say my like my study, like my document, my record, like something about my just about the the objects, like math.

✓ Well, I'm a high school student, so in my daily routine I have to study, keep records and documents, and deal with things like math.

Problems: awkward phrase 'in the crazy hell' (idiomatic/informal); unnecessary repetition and fillers. Use present simple for habitual actions 'I have to study'. Remove extra 'the' and clean list structure. Use 'things like math' for examples.

× Let's try to hear free or something like that. It's just about my.

✓ For example, let's say algebra or something like that. It's just about my subjects.

Original is unclear and ungrammatical. 'Let's try to hear free' makes no sense. Use a clear example: 'algebra' and complete the sentence with 'subjects'. Keep present tense where appropriate.

× Well, so I use the application in my phone to help me remember something important like the reminder and reminded and the note to help me.

✓ I use apps on my phone to help me remember important things, such as reminders and notes.

Use plural 'apps' and preposition 'on' with 'my phone'. 'the reminder and reminded' is incorrect; use nouns 'reminders and notes'. Improve word order and conciseness.

× Lady can call me or give me a live messenger to help me like uh, memorizing something important for me.

✓ People can call me or message me to help me remember something important.

'Lady' is wrong; use 'people' or 'someone'. 'give me a live messenger' is incorrect; use 'message me'. Use base verb 'remember' after 'help me' (not 'memorizing'). Remove filler 'for me'.