Memory— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be concise and direct. Start with a short topic sentence answering the question, then add one or two specific supporting details using clear linking words. Use correct grammar (subject-verb agreement, articles) and simpler vocabulary rather than long confused phrases.

Exemplo: I’m fairly average at memorising things. For example, I can remember short-term details like appointments, but I often forget past events unless I write them down or use reminders.

Sugestão: Give a single clear example of a time you forgot something important. Use past tense correctly and logical sequencing words (e.g., once, then, because). Avoid confusing or contradictory details.

Exemplo: Yes, I have. For instance, about seven years ago I forgot my own birthday and didn’t notice until a classmate mentioned it. I felt embarrassed and now I set reminders on my phone to avoid that happening again.

Sugestão: Answer directly: name specific daily things you must remember, then briefly explain how you manage them with linking words. Use clearer phrasing and avoid repetition.

Exemplo: I need to remember appointments, work tasks and personal routines like exercise and meals. To manage these I use a daily planner and set alarms so I can keep a healthy routine and complete my tasks on time.

Sugestão: Describe specific methods you use to remember (e.g., lists, phone reminders, repetition) and give a brief reason why they help. Use simple, correct sentences and linking words such as 'for example' or 'because'.

Exemplo: I use several methods to remember important things. For example, I write to-do lists and set phone reminders because seeing tasks written down and getting alerts helps me recall and complete them.

× Well to be honest, I am an average person who has who do not have a strong memory power as a little bit of memory can be stored in my mind but almost I am not able to convey all the memories that I had happened with me in the past.

✓ Well, to be honest, I am an average person who does not have a strong memory; only a little can be stored in my mind, and I am not able to recall all the events that happened to me in the past.

This sentence has multiple structural problems: incorrect relative clause and verb forms ('who has who do not have' is ungrammatical), awkward noun phrase 'memory power', incorrect verb 'convey' for 'recall', and wrong tense/word order 'that I had happened with me'. Suggestions: use 'who does not have' for the relative clause, replace 'memory power' with 'a strong memory', use 'only a little can be stored' for clarity, and use 'recall all the events that happened to me' to express past memories clearly.

× Definitely, as it happens a considerable amount of times with me, as I have told you earlier, I do not keep a think more memorized and one time when I forget about my own birthday, it was the metro about 7 years ago when I forget about my birth data as I had to call it in the classroom.

✓ Definitely, this has happened to me a considerable number of times. As I told you earlier, I do not memorize many things, and once I forgot my own birthday. It was around seven years ago when I forgot my birth date and had to announce it in the classroom.

Errors include incorrect tense forms ('happens' should be present perfect 'has happened'), wrong noun choices ('a think' should be 'many things'), repeated tense errors 'forget' should be past 'forgot', and incorrect phrase 'birth data' should be 'birth date'. Also use 'once' or 'one time' then past tense. Suggestions: use present perfect for repeated past experiences that relate to present, use past simple for a specific past event, and choose correct nouns ('many things', 'birth date').

× Well, to be frank, a lot of things are very necessary to keep in mind in our daily routines and in that things the only major thing is that how I can manage my daily hours or routines to maintain a good lifestyle as well as also I have to keep the important things such as performing my task.

✓ Well, to be frank, many things are necessary to keep in mind in our daily routines. The most important is how I can manage my daily hours to maintain a good lifestyle, and I also have to remember important tasks I must perform.

Problems: awkward phrasing and incorrect word order ('in that things', 'the only major thing is that how I can'), redundancy ('as well as also'), and incorrect noun forms ('performing my task' should be 'tasks I must perform'). Suggestions: simplify sentences, use 'many things are necessary' or 'many things are important', use 'the most important is how I can manage...', and use 'remember important tasks' to sound natural in present-tense general statements.

× Well, to be honest, I do some efforts to recognize as well as recall all the important or crucial memories in my mind.

✓ Well, to be honest, I make some efforts to recognize and recall all the important memories in my mind.

Error: 'do some efforts' is incorrect collocation; use 'make an effort' or 'make some efforts'. Also unnecessary 'or crucial' duplication with 'important'. Suggestion: use 'make efforts' or 'make an effort' and coordinate verbs with 'and' not 'as well as' for parallel actions.

× I keep doing some efforts in learning about all that particular memories as well as events that help me to know about more and recall that.

✓ I keep making efforts to learn about those particular memories and events that help me remember more and recall them.

Errors: incorrect preposition 'in learning about' should be 'to learn about' when paired with 'make efforts'; 'that particular memories' wrong demonstrative and number, use 'those particular memories'; 'know about more' is awkward—use 'remember more'; 'recall that' should be 'recall them' with correct pronoun. Suggestions: use 'make efforts to learn', correct demonstratives and plural forms, and use direct verbs like 'remember' and 'recall' with correct pronouns.