Memory— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Говоря на эту тему, вам нужно сократить повторения и исправить грамматику. Начните с чётного тематического предложения («Yes, I'm quite good at memorising things») и добавьте 1–2 конкретных примера или контекста. Избегайте абсолютных утверждений («perfect memory»), исправьте ошибки согласования и времени (например, «questions» → «ask»). Используйте связку для пояснения («For example,» или «As a result,»), но не растягивайте ответ более 3 предложений.

Exemplo: Yes, I'm quite good at memorising things. For example, I can easily remember schedules and small details about my friends, so they often ask me to remind them about appointments.

Sugestão: Ответ звучит неестественно из‑за грубых ошибок грамматики и повтора «no». Переформулируйте тему прямо («Not really») и объясните причину кратко, используя правильные структуры («because I use planners to help me remember important things»). Избегайте словесного мусора («uh», «such a lot of»).

Exemplo: Not really. I rarely forget important things because I use planner apps and calendars to set reminders for deadlines and appointments.

Sugestão: Ответ хороший по содержанию, но требует ясности и естественности. Начните с прямого тематического предложения и затем приведите конкретные примеры. Уберите запинки («uh») и уточните типы дат (deadlines, meetings, birthdays). Используйте связку («for example,» «such as») для плавного перехода.

Exemplo: I need to remember important dates every day. For example, I keep track of project deadlines, competition schedules and friends' birthdays so I can plan my time and send greetings on time.

Sugestão: Ответ содержит ошибки смысла и слово «blankets» явно неверно; также есть противоречие («write... in order to not remember»). Переформулируйте чётко: укажите конкретные методы (apps, calendars, to‑do lists, alarms) и объясните как вы ими пользуетесь. Используйте связующее («for instance,») и максимум 2–3 предложения без противоречий.

Exemplo: I use several methods to remember important things. For instance, I set alarms and reminders in planner apps, keep a daily to‑do list and write important dates in my calendar so I don't miss deadlines.

× Yes, definitely I have a perfect memory and that's really convenient because I keep every single detail of my life in my mind and it's every time helps me.

✓ Yes, definitely I have a perfect memory and that's really convenient because I keep every single detail of my life in my mind and it always helps me.

The phrase 'it's every time helps me' mixes a subject contraction and a verb incorrectly. Use 'it always helps me' to place the adverb 'always' correctly and use the pronoun 'it' as the subject followed by the verb 'helps'. This corrects word order and subject-verb structure. Suggestion: place adverbs (always, usually) before the main verb in simple present ('it always helps me').

× So even my friends always questions me about how can I have such a perfect memory.

✓ So even my friends always question me about how I can have such a perfect memory.

The subject 'friends' is plural, so the verb should be 'question' not 'questions' (subject-verb agreement). Also, in indirect questions English uses statement word order: 'how I can have' is acceptable but more natural is 'how I can have' or 'how I have such'. Suggestion: use plural verb with plural subject and change question word order to statement form in reported speech.

× Actually, no, I don't remember when I lastly forgot something really significant for me because I use such a lot of planners in order to don't forget something that is, uh, really important.

✓ Actually, no, I don't remember when I last forgot something really significant to me because I use a lot of planners so I don't forget anything important.

Several issues: 'lastly forgot' is incorrect; use 'last' as an adverb. 'Significant for me' should be 'significant to me'. 'such a lot of' is nonstandard; use 'a lot of' or 'so many'. 'in order to don't forget' is wrong word order; correct is 'so I don't forget' or 'in order not to forget'. Suggestion: simplify and use correct adverb forms, prepositions and negative infinitive order ('in order not to').

× In my opinion, one thing that I have to keep in my mind daily is definitely the dates.

✓ In my opinion, one thing that I have to keep in mind daily is definitely the dates.

The phrase 'keep in my mind' is unidiomatic; the correct prepositional phrase is 'keep in mind'. Removing 'my' makes the phrase natural. Suggestion: use fixed expression 'keep in mind' for remembering things.

× For example, it may be, uh, deadlines of some projects and competitions or even birthdays, uh, of some people, which is really significant.

✓ For example, it may be deadlines for some projects and competitions or even people's birthdays, which are really significant.

Use 'deadlines for' rather than 'deadlines of'. 'birthdays of some people' is awkward; 'people's birthdays' is natural. Also 'which is really significant' refers to plural nouns so verb should be 'are'. Suggestion: match prepositions to nouns ('deadline for') and ensure pronoun/verb agreement with relative clauses.

× To be honest, I use a lot of stuff in order to remember some significant things.

✓ To be honest, I use a lot of tools to remember important things.

'A lot of stuff' is informal and vague; 'tools' or 'methods' is clearer. 'in order to remember some significant things' is wordy; 'to remember important things' is concise and natural. Suggestion: choose precise nouns and simplify redundant phrases.

× For example, I always use planner apps and blankets and I write my plans to them every day in order to not remember.

✓ For example, I always use planner apps and notebooks, and I write my plans in them every day so I don't forget.

Multiple errors: 'blankets' is incorrect word (probably 'notebooks' or 'bullet journals'), 'write my plans to them' should be 'write my plans in them'. 'in order to not remember' is opposite meaning; correct is 'so I don't forget' or 'in order not to forget'. Suggestion: use correct nouns, correct preposition 'in', and negative infinitive order or simple 'so' construction for purpose statements.