Memory— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be more concise, correct grammar, and structure the response with a clear topic sentence and one or two supporting details using linking words. Avoid fillers like "so like" and provide a specific example of what you do to improve.

Exemplo: Not really. I often forget appointments and even my daily schedule, so I set reminders on my phone to stay on track. For example, I use calendar alerts and a to‑do list app to remind me of appointments and deadlines.

Sugestão: Give a direct, clear example and correct grammar. Keep it emotionally concise — state the incident, explain briefly why it happened, and use linking words to connect ideas. Avoid vague phrases and overlong sentences.

Exemplo: Yes. For instance, I sometimes block out happy memories after an argument with someone I love because it hurts to remember the painful things they did. As a result, I focus on negative events as a coping mechanism, but I'm working on talking about my feelings instead.

Sugestão: Clarify and correct the content and grammar. Start with a topic sentence naming what you need to remember, then give a brief reason and one specific method you use. Remove unclear phrases like "Outdated" and fix pronouns.

Exemplo: I need to remember when to eat regularly because I sometimes skip meals and that has affected my health. Therefore, I set meal alarms on my phone and prepare snacks in advance so I don't miss mealtimes.

Sugestão: This is a good direct answer. Make it slightly more specific and use linking words to show how the method helps. Add one concrete example to strengthen it.

Exemplo: I usually set reminders or alarms on my phone to remember important tasks, and I also write them down in a planner. For example, I set an alarm for bill payments and add the due dates to my calendar so I don't miss them.

× Yes, I've often forget about the good memories whenever a person makes me feel bad, which I think is a coping mechanism of mine because it hurts me more whenever I think about the painful things that a person that I love have done to me.

✓ Yes, I've often forgotten the good memories whenever a person makes me feel bad, which I think is a coping mechanism of mine because it hurts me more whenever I think about the painful things that a person I love has done to me.

The contraction I've requires the past participle form 'forgotten' rather than the base verb 'forget' (error type 9). Also 'a person that I love have done' has a subject-verb agreement error: 'a person I love' is singular and needs the singular present perfect 'has done' (error type 27). Use 'forgotten' after 'have/has' and match verb number to subject. Suggestion: use present perfect correctly (have/has + past participle) and ensure singular subject takes 'has'.

× I need a constant reminder of when and what time to eat because I have developed a severe condition from it. Outdated because I often forget that it was time to eat us.

✓ I need a constant reminder of when and what time to eat because I have developed a severe condition from it, because I often forget when it's time to eat.

The original contains fragmented and unclear clauses; 'Outdated' is misplaced and 'it was time to eat us' is ungrammatical (error type 26). Also 'that it was time to eat us' wrongly uses 'us' instead of expressing 'to eat' event (error type 12/pronoun misuse). Revision combines clauses into one clear sentence, removes the stray word, and uses 'when it's time to eat' to convey the intended meaning. Suggestion: combine fragments, remove irrelevant words, and use correct pronouns/clauses to express time.

× I'm not very good at memorizing because I often forget even the most important things so like my schedule and what time I had to go.

✓ I'm not very good at memorizing because I often forget even the most important things, like my schedule and what time I have to go.

The original mixes past tense 'had to go' with present habitual context; since the question asks about general ability, use present simple 'have to go' (error type 6). Also remove filler 'so' before 'like'. Suggestion: keep verb tenses consistent with the general present context and remove unnecessary fillers.

× I remember important things by setting a reminder or putting an alarm that will make me remember what I need or what needs to be done.

✓ I remember important things by setting reminders or putting alarms that help me remember what I need or what needs to be done.

Original is understandable but slightly awkward: 'a reminder or putting an alarm that will make me remember' is wordy. Use plural 'reminders'/'alarms' and replace 'will make me remember' with the present participle 'help me remember' for concise habitual action (error type 10). Suggestion: prefer concise parallel structure and use verbs like 'help' for habitual methods.