Memory— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Good content but needs clearer structure, more natural phrasing and concise support. Start with a direct topic sentence, avoid odd phrases (e.g. “because I deserve them”) and limit to 2–3 supporting details with linking words. Also fix small grammar/spelling (memorising → memorizing/ memorising consistent with British).

Exemplo: Yes, I'm quite good at memorizing things I care about. For example, I always remember family birthdays and details about my favourite actors, so I can easily recall names and movies when talking with friends.

Sugestão: Clear story and useful lesson but improve coherence and vocabulary. Use linking words (for instance, "because" → "so") and replace informal verbs like “fish it” with natural alternatives ("retrieve it"). Keep it within 3–4 sentences and correct small phrasing issues.

Exemplo: Yes. Once I forgot my ID when I went to apply for a new passport, so my mother had to drive back to help me retrieve it. Since that embarrassing experience, I always check my documents carefully before leaving the house.

Sugestão: Answer contains many ideas but is long and slightly repetitive. Use a clear topic sentence then 1–2 specific supporting points with linking words like "so" or "therefore." Simplify to avoid run-on sentences and ensure natural collocations ("prepare my bag" is fine; remove "before I can").

Exemplo: I need to remember my daily schedule and appointments. Therefore, I plan the next day the night before, prepare my bag and set an alarm so I can avoid being late.

Sugestão: Strong, natural answer with clear strategy and reasons. To improve further, add one linking word and a short example of what you store, and keep within 3–4 sentences. This will increase specificity and naturalness.

Exemplo: I usually save important information in a locked note on my phone that requires a face scan. For example, I keep passport details and emergency contacts there, so I can always check them when needed and avoid forgetting anything.

× I'm quite good at memorizing things that I find important or interesting.

✓ I'm quite good at memorizing things that I find important or interesting.

No article error here; sentence is correct. Keep as is.

× For example, I always remember birthdays or people I love because I deserve them every year, and I can easily call details about an actor I like.

✓ For example, I always remember birthdays of people I love because I celebrate them every year, and I can easily recall details about an actor I like.

The original uses 'deserve' incorrectly; the intended verb is 'celebrate'. 'Call details' is incorrect collocation; use 'recall details'. Also 'birthdays or people I love' is unclear; 'birthdays of people I love' clarifies meaning. Suggestion: use correct verbs that fit collocations and clarify noun relationships.

× Yes, once I forgot my identification card when I went to apply for a new passport so my mom had to drive back with me to fish it.

✓ Yes, once I forgot my identification card when I went to apply for a new passport, so my mom had to drive back with me to fetch it.

The verb 'fish' is incorrect in this context; the correct verb is 'fetch' meaning to go and get something. Also add a comma before 'so' linking two clauses. Suggestion: use 'fetch' for retrieving items and punctuate coordinating conjunctions.

× After that embarrassing experience, I always check my document carefully before leaving.

✓ After that embarrassing experience, I always check my documents carefully before leaving.

Use plural 'documents' because people commonly have multiple documents (ID, passport forms). If referring to a single item, ensure context matches. Also 'check' in present simple is correct to express habitual action.

× I need to remember my schedule and keep track of appointments because I plan my next day in advance and want to avoid being late if I review my timetable at night before I can prepare my bag and set an alarm to make the morning smoother.

✓ I need to remember my schedule and keep track of appointments because I plan my next day in advance; I review my timetable at night, prepare my bag, and set an alarm to make the morning smoother so I can avoid being late.

Original sentence is long and has misplaced conditional 'if' and 'before' phrases causing confusion. Reorder clauses logically: first state planning actions (review, prepare, set alarm), then give the purpose (to make morning smoother and avoid being late). Use punctuation to separate ideas. Suggestion: break long sentences into shorter clauses and place time/condition phrases next to the actions they modify.

× Personally, if something is really important, I don't try to remember it.

✓ Personally, if something is really important, I don't try to memorize it.

'Remember' vs 'memorize': 'remember' is usually passive while 'memorize' is the active process of committing to memory. Context implies intentional storage, so 'memorize' or 'store it' is clearer. Modal use is fine; suggestion: choose verbs that match intended meaning.

× I save it in a locked note on my phone that requires face scan to open.

✓ I save it in a locked note on my phone that requires a face scan to open.

Missing article 'a' before 'face scan'. Also 'on my phone' is correct preposition. Suggestion: include articles with singular countable nouns.

× This way I can always check the information when I need it and I don't risk forgetting it.

✓ This way I can always check the information when I need it, and I don't risk forgetting it.

Sentence is grammatically correct; only a comma before 'and' improves clarity. 'Forgetting' is gerund here and used correctly. Keep verb forms as they are.