MemoryPart 1 Relatório

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Part 1

Examinador

Are you good at memorising things?

Candidato

Nope, I think I am good at forget things.

Examinador

Have you ever forgotten something important?

Candidato

Of course, for example, I sometimes have some important something, but I forget write notes, so I forget it.

Examinador

What do you need to remember in your daily life?

Candidato

A lot of things, for example I want to shopping it and. I started it.

Examinador

How do you remember important things?

Candidato

Well, I usually. Write importance is in my notes.

Avaliação

Total

Total: 5.0Fluência e coerência: 5.0Pronúncia: 5.0Gramática: 5.0Recurso lexical: 5.0

Part 1

Are you good at memorising things?

Pontuação: 35.0

Sugestão: 回答不自然且语法错误较多。应该直接回答问题并用完整句子表达能力,同时避免双重否定或口语化俚语(如“Nope”)。可说明程度并给出简短原因。保持一句或两句,言简意赅。

Exemplo: Not really. I find it difficult to memorise detailed information, especially names and dates, because I don’t use memory techniques often.

Have you ever forgotten something important?

Pontuação: 40.0

Sugestão: 内容含混且语法混乱。应直接确认并给出具体例子和原因,使用连接词(for example, because)使逻辑清楚。控制在最多五句内,避免重复。

Exemplo: Yes, I have. For example, I once missed an important appointment because I didn’t write it down, so I forgot about it the next day.

What do you need to remember in your daily life?

Pontuação: 30.0

Sugestão: 回答不清晰且句子不完整。应先给出主题句,然后列举具体日常事项并用连接词连接(such as, for example)。确保句子完整并使用正确词汇(go shopping, shopping list)。

Exemplo: I need to remember many daily tasks, such as grocery items, bills to pay and appointments, so I usually keep a checklist on my phone.

How do you remember important things?

Pontuação: 35.0

Sugestão: 句子断裂且表达不准确。应说明具体方法并举例说明如何使用该方法(eg. set reminders, make a to‑do list)。使用连词使步骤或原因连贯。

Exemplo: I usually write important things in my notes app and set reminders on my phone so I get an alert before the deadline.

Gramática

Incorrect use of verbs / Verb form and structure

× Nope, I think I am good at forget things.

Nope, I think I am good at forgetting things.

错误类型(ID 8): 动词 + -ing 形式使用错误。此处介词短语"good at"后面应接动名词(-ing形式),不是动词原形。建议记住常见搭配:"good at" 后接动名词,例如 "good at swimming/remembering"。

Incorrect use of pronouns and verb form

× Of course, for example, I sometimes have some important something, but I forget write notes, so I forget it.

Of course. For example, I sometimes have some important things, but I forget to write notes, so I forget them.

错误类型复合:名词单复数错误(ID 1)与不定式/动词结构错误(ID 8/9)与代词使用错误(ID 12)。1) "something"用法不当,意为不确定的事物,应改为复数名词"things"来表示多件重要的事。2) "forget write notes"中动词搭配错误,动词"forget"后接表示动作要做但忘了,需接不定式"to write"。3) 代词"it"指代不明且与复数不一致,改为复数代词"them"。建议:注意可数名词单复数,掌握动词后接不定式或动名词的区别,并保证代词与先行词在人称与数上一致。

Incorrect use of verbs and articles

× A lot of things, for example I want to shopping it and. I started it.

A lot of things. For example, I want to go shopping for them. I started doing it.

错误类型复合:动词结构错误(ID 8/26)和代词/冠词使用问题(ID 12/22)。1) "want to shopping"错误,动词"want to"后应接动词原形,正确为"want to go shopping"或"want to shop"。2) "it"指代不明且与复数不一致,改为"them"或直接用名词。3) 句子断裂和结构不完整(句子结构错误,ID 26),第二句需用"I started doing it"来表示已开始做这件事。建议:注意动词不定式结构、动名词使用以及句子完整性,确保代词与先行词数一致。

Word order and punctuation / Fragment sentence

× Well, I usually. Write importance is in my notes.

Well, I usually write important things in my notes.

错误类型复合:句子无谓语或断句错误(ID 23/26)与形容词/名词顺序错误(ID 13/18)。原句被错误地断为两部分且词序混乱。1) 不应把主句分成"I usually."和残句"Write importance is in my notes"。2) "Write importance"不是正确表达,应该用名词短语"important things"并放在动词write之后或直接用动词write + 宾语。建议:保持句子连贯,主语+谓语+宾语的基本结构,形容词放在名词前:"important things";如需表示记录,使用"write down important things"或"write important things in my notes"。

Vocabulário

GoodFine; Virtuous; Well-behaved; Right; Capable
ImportantSignificant; Main; Powerful
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