Memory— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be more concise and grammatical: start with a clear topic sentence, avoid filler words, correct grammar (e.g., "one of my weaknesses"), and give one specific supporting detail with a linking word. Keep answers under five sentences.

Exemplo: No, I'm not very good at memorising things. Because it's a weakness of mine, I always make checklists—for example, at work I list tasks in order of priority so I don't miss anything.

Sugestão: Give a clear past example with correct tense and smoother linking words. Remove hesitations and combine short sentences to sound more fluent. Add a brief reflection on what you learned to enrich content.

Exemplo: Yes. Once at work I almost forgot to start a major project, but my supervisor reminded me before the end of my shift. As a result, I began the task immediately, and since then I use reminders on my phone to avoid similar mistakes.

Sugestão: Provide a concise topic sentence and two specific, contrasting examples using linking words like "for example" and "however." Correct grammar ("duties," "I rest well"). Avoid repeating phrases.

Exemplo: It depends on the day. For example, on workdays I need to remember my duties and deadlines to complete tasks before my shift ends; however, on rest days I focus on remembering to relax and get enough sleep.

Sugestão: Start with a clear topic sentence describing your main method, then give one specific detail about how you use it. Remove fillers and use correct phrasing ("an app," "I use the app to create lists").

Exemplo: I use an app on my phone to create checklists. For instance, I keep separate lists for work tasks and grocery items and tick them off as I go so I don't forget anything.

× I'm not good at memorizing things and because I know my, that's one of my weakness, I always create a checklist on, uh, especially on workplace or uh, grocery shopping, just to ensure that everything important is checked on my checklist.

✓ I'm not good at memorizing things, and because I know it, that's one of my weaknesses. I always create a checklist, especially for the workplace or grocery shopping, to ensure that everything important is checked off.

The sentence uses incorrect pronoun 'my' where 'it' (referring to memorizing things) is needed; 'weakness' should be plural 'weaknesses' to agree with 'one of'; preposition 'on' is incorrect for 'workplace' and 'grocery shopping' — use 'for'; the phrase 'checked on my checklist' is awkward — use 'checked off'. Also run-on ideas were split into clearer sentences. Suggestion: replace 'my' with 'it', change 'one of my weakness' to 'one of my weaknesses', use 'especially for' and 'checked off'.

× Yes, I did. Uh, uh, when I was working in my company, I almost forgot one of the most important project that I have to do.

✓ Yes, I did. When I was working at my company, I almost forgot one of the most important projects that I had to do.

Use past tense consistently: 'have to do' should be 'had to do' to match the past time frame 'when I was working'. 'Project' should be plural 'projects' after 'one of the'. Also use preposition 'at' with 'company'. Suggestion: match verb tenses to the time frame and correct noun plurality after 'one of'.

× And luckily my supervisor reminded me before I ended my shift and I committed to work on that project right away.

✓ Luckily, my supervisor reminded me before I ended my shift, and I committed to working on that project right away.

Use the gerund 'working' after 'committed to' (phrasal verb requires -ing). Also add commas for clarity. Ensure past tense 'reminded' and 'ended' are consistent. Suggestion: use 'committed to working' rather than 'committed to work'.

× Well, it depends on the purpose of that day.

✓ Well, it depends on the purpose of the day.

The phrase 'that day' suggests a specific day previously mentioned; in general statements use 'the day' or 'the purpose of the day'. 'Depends' is fine but 'that' is unnecessary and awkward here. Suggestion: use 'the' for general statements about a typical day.

× For example, if it's working day and I have to work, I have to remember every single detail of my duty and I have to ensure that I commit to those duty before I end my shift.

✓ For example, if it's a working day and I have to work, I have to remember every single detail of my duties and ensure that I complete those duties before I end my shift.

Missing article 'a' before 'working day'. 'Duty' should be plural 'duties' when referring to multiple details, and 'those duty' must be 'those duties'. 'Commit to' is not ideal here; use 'complete' to express finishing tasks. Also remove redundant 'I have to'. Suggestion: add 'a', make nouns plural to agree with 'every single detail', and use appropriate verbs like 'complete'.

× But if it's a rest day, I have to ensure that I'm rest well.

✓ But if it's a rest day, I have to ensure that I rest well.

After 'ensure that' use the base form 'I rest', not the adjective 'rest' after 'am'. 'I'm rest' is ungrammatical. Use 'I rest well' or 'I get enough rest'. Suggestion: use 'ensure that I rest well' or 'ensure I get enough rest'.

× I downloaded a application on my mobile that creates A checklist very easily.

✓ I downloaded an application on my mobile that creates a checklist very easily.

Use the article 'an' before a vowel sound ('application') and use lowercase 'a' in 'a checklist'. Also 'on my mobile' is acceptable but 'on my phone' is more natural in some varieties. Suggestion: use 'an application' and 'a checklist'.

× So I utilize the application to create multiple checklists on work and for my casual grocery shopping for example.

✓ So I use the application to create multiple checklists for work and for my casual grocery shopping, for example.

Use 'for work' rather than 'on work'. 'Utilize' is formal; 'use' is more natural. Add commas around 'for example' and place 'for' consistently. Suggestion: replace 'on' with 'for' and prefer 'use' over 'utilize'.

× Uh, so I won't miss any details.

✓ So I won't miss any details.

Sentence is grammatically fine; retained as is. No correction needed other than removing filler 'Uh'. Suggestion: remove fillers for fluency.