Snacks— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Make your response clear and concise with a direct topic sentence, correct verb forms, and one or two supporting details. Use linking words (for example, "usually" and "because") and avoid repetition. Aim for up to 3 sentences: state when you snack, give one reason, and provide a short example.

Exemplo: I usually eat snacks in the evening. I do this because I like to relax after work and often have a snack while watching a movie.

Sugestão: Answer directly with a clear opinion, then give 1–2 specific reasons and a brief contrast if needed. Use correct grammar for causes and effects (e.g., "it doesn't make me" and "it can cause"). Avoid filler words and repetitions.

Exemplo: I don't think snacking is healthy, because many snacks are high in sugar and fat and can lead to weight gain and other health problems. Although I enjoy tasty snacks, I try to limit them to maintain good health.

Sugestão: Give a clear past-tense statement and one or two specific examples. Use past simple for habits ("I often ate") and give a reason or short detail. Remove hesitations and unclear words.

Exemplo: Yes, I often ate snacks when I was young. I usually had fries, chips and sweets because my parents allowed them as treats after school.

Sugestão: Start with a topic sentence naming the snacks you like, then give one or two specific situations when you eat them and explain briefly why. Use varied vocabulary instead of repeating the same verb forms and avoid filler sounds.

Exemplo: I like salty snacks, especially fries and potato chips. I often eat them while watching movies or when I'm doing chores because they make me feel more energetic and relaxed.

× I think in the evening I often it's nice because I often realize in evening every day and I want it.

✓ I think in the evening is nice because I often relax in the evening every day and I want to.

The original sentence has tense and word choice problems: 'it's nice' attached to 'I often' is awkward and 'realize' is incorrect for 'relax'. Use simple present to describe habitual actions. Suggest replacing 'realize' with 'relax' and reorder to 'I think the evening is nice' or 'I think in the evening is nice' to make the idea clear. Also add 'the' before 'evening' when referring to a specific time of day: 'in the evening'.

× I usually eating snack and watch a movie.

✓ I usually eat snacks and watch a movie.

The verb form is incorrect: after 'usually' use the base form (simple present) not the progressive. Also use plural 'snacks' for habitual snacking. Use 'eat' (base form) and 'snacks' to indicate general habit.

× Absolutely not because it's not make me faster and uh, it bring many health problem.

✓ Absolutely not because it doesn't make me faster and it causes many health problems.

Incorrect tense and auxiliary usage: 'it's not make' should be 'it doesn't make' (use do-support for negative simple present). 'Bring' should be 'causes' or 'brings', and 'health problem' should be plural 'health problems'. Use simple present for general truths.

× Uh, firmly speaking, I'd be fan of snack, but I have to, uh, let it's not because I I want to keep the health good.

✓ Frankly speaking, I'm a fan of snacks, but I have to avoid them because I want to keep good health.

Multiple structural issues: 'firmly' is the wrong adverb (use 'frankly'), 'I'd be fan' mixes conditional; use 'I'm a fan'. 'Snack' should be plural 'snacks'. 'let it's not' is ungrammatical—intended meaning likely 'avoid them'. Use 'because I want to keep good health' or 'because I want to stay healthy'.

× Well, of course, because I, I think every children do I to a snack like, uh, fries and uh, BIM BIM or uh, have to what have you to that, Umm, my Karen down line me to eat.

✓ Well, of course, because I think every child used to eat snacks like fries and chips when they were young.

Many problems: 'every children' should be singular 'every child' (singular/plural issue). The tense for past habitual action is 'used to' or 'would' (past tense). 'BIM BIM' unclear—replace with 'chips' or omit. Remove incoherent fragment 'my Karen down line me to eat'. Keep simple past/habitual past: 'used to eat snacks when they were young.'

× That it fries and caster, uh, I often eat, I eat fries every day.

✓ I like fries and crackers; I often eat fries every day.

Word choice and pluralization: 'That it fries and caster' is ungrammatical. Replace with 'I like fries and crackers'. Keep plural forms for countable snacks. 'I often eat' and 'I eat fries every day' are repetitive; combine or keep one. Use consistent simple present for habits.

× Uh, when I watch movie, when I, uh, do household chores or do homework, I think snack, uh, help me have full of energy.

✓ When I watch a movie, or when I do household chores or homework, I think snacks help me feel full of energy.

Use articles: 'a movie'. Use plural 'snacks' with the verb 'help' (plural subject). 'Help me have full of energy' is ungrammatical—use 'help me feel full of energy' or 'help me have more energy'. Maintain simple present for habitual actions and correct subject-verb agreement.