Flowers— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Cần cải thiện ngữ pháp cơ bản, ý trả lời nên gọn và tự nhiên hơn; tránh lỗi số nhiều/số ít và cấu trúc thừa. Nên mở đầu bằng câu chủ đề rõ ràng, sau đó nêu lý do cụ thể (ví dụ: mùi thơm, màu sắc, khiến bạn cảm thấy thư giãn). Hạn chế câu quá dài và sửa các lỗi phát âm/viết như "every girls on is" -> "most girls" hoặc "many people".

Exemplo: Yes, I do. I find flowers very romantic and I love their scent. They make me feel relaxed and brighten up a room.

Sugestão: Cần sửa thì động từ và chính tả; dùng liên từ để khiến câu mạch lạc hơn. Nên nêu một thông tin cụ thể (ví dụ: loại hoa yêu thích, thói quen mua) và giải thích ngắn gọn lý do. Sửa các lỗi như "She buy" -> "She buys", "scans" -> "scents", "special occasion" -> "special occasions".

Exemplo: Yes, my best friend loves flowers. She buys them every week, especially roses and tulips, because she enjoys their colors and fragrance and I often give her flowers for birthdays or anniversaries.

Sugestão: Cần câu trả lời trực tiếp và câu rõ ràng; sửa cấu trúc câu và ngữ pháp. Nên dùng liên từ để nối ý (because, so, however) và đưa ví dụ cụ thể (ví dụ: chỉ có vài công viên, nhiều tòa nhà, chỉ có cửa hàng hoa). Tránh dùng từ lặp và nói lúng túng như "is rarely you know".

Exemplo: Not really. I live in a busy commercial area with many buildings, so flowers are scarce in public parks and you usually only find them in a few flower shops.

Sugestão: Cần sửa vài lỗi nhỏ và rút gọn câu để tự nhiên hơn; thay "when I say" bằng "when I see" và tránh lặp từ "take" nhiều lần. Thêm chi tiết cụ thể về tần suất hoặc mục đích chụp (ví dụ: đăng lên mạng xã hội, làm kỷ niệm).

Exemplo: Yes, I do. Whenever I see flowers on the street or in a park, I often take photos with my phone, sometimes for social media or just to keep as memories.

Sugestão: Cần diễn đạt rõ ràng và sửa lỗi ngữ pháp/logic (ví dụ: "They give a budget" không rõ nghĩa). Nên nêu cụ thể khi nào người ta tặng hoa (ngày lễ, kỷ niệm, xin lỗi) và mục đích. Dùng từ vựng chính xác như "not only... but also" đúng vị trí.

Exemplo: Yes, people often send flowers, especially in romantic relationships. They do this not only on special occasions like Valentine’s Day or anniversaries, but also sometimes as an everyday gesture to show affection or to apologize.

× Of course yes, I think every girls on is love flowers because this is so romantic and I like their smell.

✓ Of course yes, I think every girl loves flowers because they are so romantic and I like their smell.

'Every' requires a singular noun: 'girls' -> 'girl' (singular). Subject-verb agreement: 'every girl' takes singular verb 'loves' not 'is love'. Use 'they are' to refer to 'flowers' (plural) and 'their smell' is fine. Suggestion: use 'every + singular noun' and match verb form to the singular subject; use correct verb 'love' -> 'loves'.

× I think my best friend really loves flowers. She buy them every week because she likes their colors and scans and she always ask me to give her flowers on special occasion.

✓ I think my best friend really loves flowers. She buys them every week because she likes their colors and scents and she always asks me to give her flowers on special occasions.

Third person singular subjects require verbs with -s: 'She buy' -> 'She buys'; 'she always ask' -> 'she always asks'. 'Scans' is incorrect word, should be 'scents'. 'Special occasion' should be plural or preceded by article: 'on special occasions' or 'on a special occasion'. Suggestion: add -s for third person singular verbs, correct vocabulary, and use plural or article for 'occasion'.

× I think no, because I live in an economic center so there are a lot of building and flowers are not really located in the parks is rarely you know and it's just in some flowers shop I think.

✓ I think not, because I live in an economic center so there are a lot of buildings and flowers are not really found in the parks; they are rare, you know, and they are just in some flower shops, I think.

Article and plural errors: 'a lot of building' -> 'a lot of buildings' (plural). 'flowers are not really located in the parks is rarely' is ungrammatical: use 'not really found in the parks; they are rare'. 'flowers shop' -> 'flower shops' (compound noun with singular noun as modifier and plural for shop). Suggestion: pluralize countable nouns, fix sentence structure and articles, and use clearer verbs like 'found'.

× Of course yes, because I really love flowers and when I say flowers in the road or in the park, I often take my phone to take many beautiful pictures with flowers or selfie with flowers.

✓ Of course yes, because I really love flowers and when I see flowers on the road or in the park, I often take out my phone to take many beautiful pictures of the flowers or selfies with them.

Wrong verb 'say' should be 'see' (lexical error), but regarding -ing form: 'selfie' should be plural 'selfies' when implied multiple; use verb phrase 'take out my phone' and 'pictures of the flowers'. Suggestion: use correct verb 'see', correct preposition 'on the road', and form plural 'selfies' or structure 'take a selfie'.

× Yes, I think in the country often send flowers, especially in romantic relationships. They give a budget, uh, not only on special occasions like Valentine's Day, but also as a daily gift to show affection and to strengthen the relationship.

✓ Yes, I think people in the country often send flowers, especially in romantic relationships. They give them not only on special occasions like Valentine's Day, but also as a daily gift to show affection and strengthen the relationship.

Missing subject and unclear phrase: 'in the country often send flowers' lacks subject — add 'people'. 'They give a budget' is incorrect: likely intended 'They give them' (flowers). Also remove filler 'uh' and improve parallel structure: 'not only... but also...'. Suggestion: include explicit subject, use appropriate object pronoun, and maintain parallel verb forms.