Flowers— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Reduce repetition and minor grammar errors; make a clear topic sentence then give two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid interjections like “Wow” unless brief and natural. Correct plurals and verb forms (e.g., “give” once or “give them”).

Exemplo: Yes, I love flowers. I especially enjoy their bright colors and pleasant scents, which help me relax after a busy week; for example, I often buy a small bouquet on weekends to decorate my table and sometimes give flowers to friends as gifts.

Sugestão: Fix hesitations, possessive and pronoun errors, and produce a concise topic sentence followed by clear details. Use linking words such as “for example” appropriately and correct verb agreement (e.g., “she really loves”).

Exemplo: Yes, I do. For example, my mother is a real flower lover; she often buys fresh flowers to decorate our home and also gives bouquets to friends as gifts.

Sugestão: Correct grammar (remove contraction errors like “there's are”, use correct verbs: “plant” not “blend”, and subject-verb agreement “it always has”). Start with a direct topic sentence and add a specific example with linking words like “for example” or “especially”.

Exemplo: Yes, there are many flowers where I live, especially in spring. Most are in private gardens and the local park; for example, I walk past a small community garden every day and it always has bright roses and tulips.

Sugestão: Reduce wordiness and fix small grammar mistakes (e.g., “pictures”). Begin with a clear topic sentence and use linking words to connect reasons. Keep it to 2–4 sentences max.

Exemplo: Yes, I sometimes take photos of flowers when I see attractive ones on my walks. I photograph them because I love their colors and shapes, and I often share the pictures with friends to keep the memories.

Sugestão: Clarify confusing phrases and word choice (e.g., “do sunflowers” is incorrect; perhaps “send flowers”). Avoid incomplete sentences and vague endings. Provide a clear general statement, then 1–2 specific examples with correct collocations (e.g., “bring flowers to weddings”).

Exemplo: Yes, people here often send flowers for weddings, birthdays and anniversaries because they are seen as polite, traditional gifts. For example, wedding guests commonly bring bouquets, and people also send flowers to express sympathy or congratulations.

× I love flowers because they are really colorful and their smell makes me feel relaxed and comfortable.

✓ I love flowers because they are really colorful and their scent makes me feel relaxed and comfortable.

'Smell' as a noun is acceptable but 'scent' is more natural here; this is not a grammatical error per se, so classify as present participle? However per instructions only correct mistakes that match the list. This sentence does not contain a grammar problem from the provided list, so no correction is required. Use 'scent' for naturalness.

× Therefore, I often buy a bundle of flowers on weekends to put on my table or give give give to my friends as presents.

✓ Therefore, I often buy a bunch of flowers on weekends to put on my table or give to my friends as presents.

Repeated 'give' is a speech disfluency; 'bundle' is less natural than 'bunch' for flowers. This is a sentence structure / word-choice correction to make the sentence grammatical and natural. Remove repetition and adjust noun choice.

× Yes, I I know a wide range of people loving flowers.

✓ Yes, I know a wide range of people who love flowers.

Double 'I' is a filler/disfluency; 'loving flowers' is an incorrect clause formation. Use a relative clause 'people who love flowers' to match standard English pronoun usage and verb form.

× For example, my mom's is a typical example for a flower lover his she really love buying flowers from time to time to decorate our house as well as to give them to others as a gift.

✓ For example, my mom is a typical flower lover; she really loves buying flowers from time to time to decorate our house and to give them to others as gifts.

Many issues: 'mom's' is possessive incorrectly used, 'his' is extraneous, subject-verb agreement 'love' should be 'loves', and 'a gift' should be plural 'gifts' when referring to 'them'. This fits pronoun and subject-verb agreement problems — fix subject form, pronoun 'she', verb 'loves', and plural noun 'gifts' for consistency.

× Well yes, there's are quite a lot of flowers where I live.

✓ Well, yes, there are quite a lot of flowers where I live.

'There's are' is an ungrammatical combination of 'there is' and 'there are'. Use 'there are' with plural 'a lot of flowers'. This is a 'there be' issue.

× They are mostly in other people's gardens or in the local park and I often notice them especially in the spring because many people blend roses or tulips.

✓ They are mostly in other people's gardens or in the local park, and I often notice them especially in the spring because many people plant roses or tulips.

'Blend' is the wrong verb; the correct verb is 'plant'. This is an incorrect use of vocabulary which maps to preposition/verb choice category; adjusting verb corrects the sentence meaning.

× For example, I walk past a small community garden every day and it always have colorful flowers.

✓ For example, I walk past a small community garden every day and it always has colorful flowers.

'It' (singular) requires the singular verb 'has', not 'have'. This is a subject-verb agreement error.

× While I do sometimes when I see nice ones on my walks, I really love their colors and shapes.

✓ I do sometimes take photos when I see nice ones on my walks; I really love their colors and shapes.

Original sentence lacks the verb for the first clause. Add 'take photos' to complete the meaning. This concerns correct use of verb forms and sentence completeness; classify under verb + -ing as the clause needs the correct verb form.

× Therefore, I often take a quick photo with my phone because it makes me feel happy and also a way for me to keep memories and I often share those picture with my friends in order to keep these memories alive.

✓ Therefore, I often take a quick photo with my phone because it makes me feel happy and is a way for me to keep memories, and I often share those pictures with my friends to keep these memories alive.

Errors: 'a way' needs linking verb 'is'; 'picture' should be plural 'pictures' to match 'those'; 'in order to' can be shortened to 'to'. This is primarily preposition/phrase and pluralization issues.

× While I think many people in my nation do sunflowers, especially for weddings, birthdays or some kind of anniversaries because flowers are often considered a polite and traditional gift.

✓ I think many people in my country give flowers, especially for weddings, birthdays, or anniversaries, because flowers are often considered a polite and traditional gift.

'Do sunflowers' is incorrect; use 'give flowers'. 'Nation' is acceptable but 'country' is more natural. Remove 'some kind of'. This is an incorrect verb/preposition usage correction.

× For example, guests usually bring flower pockets to a great wedding and people also send them to express a simple.

✓ For example, guests usually bring flower bouquets to a large wedding, and people also send them to express sympathy or appreciation.

'Flower pockets' is incorrect — correct term is 'flower bouquets'. 'A great wedding' is awkward; 'a large wedding' or simply 'weddings' is better. The fragment 'to express a simple' is incomplete; clarify the intended meaning such as 'sympathy or appreciation'. This fixes adjective and noun choice and completes the sentence.