Flowers— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be more concise and use correct grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence (e.g. “Yes, I love flowers.”), then give one or two specific reasons with linking words. Avoid repetition and incorrect verb forms (use “they make a room look nice,” “I take care of them,” “they relax me”).

Exemplo: Yes, I love flowers. They make a room look bright and attractive, and I enjoy taking care of them because watering and pruning helps me relax.

Sugestão: Give a direct answer naming a person and explain briefly with a specific detail. Use linking words (for example, “for example” or “such as”), correct articles and verb forms, and avoid unclear phrases like “undergrowth.”

Exemplo: Yes, my mother loves flowers. For example, she tends a small garden at home and waters the plants every morning so they grow healthy.

Sugestão: Answer directly about quantity (yes/no/rare) and give clear reasons with linking words. Use correct sentence structure: subject + verb + object, and specific vocabulary like “parks,” “gardens,” or “arid.”

Exemplo: Not many — my area has few parks or gardens, so there are rarely flowers outside. Because the city is crowded and has little green space, most people only keep small potted plants at home.

Sugestão: Begin with a clear statement and give a specific frequency and purpose. Use linking words (for example, “because” or “so”) and correct prepositions (“on social media”). Avoid repetition and unclear clauses.

Exemplo: Yes, I often take photos of flowers, especially when I see a beautiful bloom. I usually post these pictures on social media to share them with friends and family.

Sugestão: Give a direct response about custom frequency and give specific examples (weddings, birthdays, funerals). Use correct vocabulary (“people often give/send flowers,” “as a sign of love or respect”) and avoid vague, repeated phrases.

Exemplo: Yes, people often give flowers on special occasions such as weddings, birthdays and funerals. Flowers are seen as a way to express love and respect, so many families send bouquets to celebrate or to offer condolences.

× Yes, I love my flowers because it's making a room is very nice and it is look nice, wait and look great so shiny and nice, nice by appearance.

✓ Yes, I love flowers because they make a room look nice and shiny.

Pronoun and subject issues: 'my flowers' is acceptable but unnatural here; 'it's making a room is very nice' mixes subjects and verbs incorrectly. Replace with plural subject 'they' to agree with 'flowers' and use simple present 'make' and 'look' for habitual fact. Remove redundancy and awkward phrases.

× Therefore I am always care take care of the flowers when I have it in my house and it's make me relaxing and comfortable when I try to show them.

✓ Therefore I always take care of the flowers when I have them in my house, and they make me feel relaxed and comfortable when I look at them.

Multiple errors: 'care take care' is redundant; correct verb phrase is 'take care of'. Pronoun 'it' is wrong for plural 'flowers' — use 'them'. Use present tense 'make' to describe habitual effect and use appropriate verb 'feel relaxed' rather than 'make me relaxing' (wrong participle). Also reorder clause for clarity.

× Ah yes all my friends are my family such as my mother.

✓ Ah yes, my family and friends love flowers, for example my mother.

Original sentence confuses roles: 'all my friends are my family' is incorrect. Clarify meaning: indicate both family and friends or 'my family, such as my mother'. Use commas for clarity.

× Just look it is love the flowers unless I have a small gardens and always I take care of the of the flowers when I have get them some of the water to increase undergrowth of that's it.

✓ I love flowers even though I only have a small garden, and I always water them to help them grow.

The original mixes many fragments and incorrect conjunctions ('unless' and 'that's it') and wrong verb forms ('have get'). Simplify to a clear structure: contrast with 'even though', use singular 'garden' or 'small garden', and use 'water them' and 'help them grow'.

× Actually it is not have flowers in my in my country and in my area special area because it is not have a big large area have a green green place.

✓ Actually there are not many flowers in my country or in my area because there are not large green spaces.

Use 'there are' to state existence and plural agreement for 'flowers' and 'green spaces'. Remove duplicated words and choose 'many' for countable plural. Use clear causal clause 'because' with correct noun phrase.

× Therefore there is no have more flowers just we can't using it in my home or any special places.

✓ Therefore there are not many flowers, and we cannot grow them in our homes or special places.

Use 'there are not many' for plural existence. 'Can't using it' is ungrammatical; use 'cannot grow them'. Pronoun 'it' wrong for plural 'flowers' — use 'them'. Adjust verb 'grow' to express ability to cultivate.

× And my daily love I always always take a photo of the flowers and when I say it I will take it if the flower of take it photo for the of to the flowers and share it in the on standing on the social media to show more comfortable with my friend and families.

✓ In my daily life I always take photos of flowers, and I share them on social media to show them to my friends and family.

The sentence uses incorrect phrases ('my daily love', 'when I say it I will take it') and redundant repetition. Use present simple 'always take photos' for habitual action. Use plural 'photos' and plural pronoun 'them' for 'flowers'. Use 'friends and family' not 'friend and families'.

× I used all my people listened to their flowers and to the other especially in the celebrated such as the special wedding or or birthday.

✓ Many people in my country send flowers to others, especially for celebrations such as weddings or birthdays.

Original mixes tenses and incorrect verbs ('used all my people listened'). Use present simple 'send' for common practice. Use 'celebrations' plural and correct nouns 'weddings or birthdays'.

× It is the the special way or a love way to appear a love with each other and care other carry them to the to each other.

✓ It is a special or loving way to show affection and care for each other.

Fix adjective choice: use 'loving' rather than 'a love way'. Remove duplicated 'the the' and unclear phrases 'care other carry them to the to each other'. Use 'show affection and care for each other' for natural expression.

× Therefore I love the same.

✓ Therefore I feel the same.

Use appropriate verb 'feel' to express agreement with previous statement. 'I love the same' is ungrammatical and unclear.