Flowers— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be more natural and precise. Start with a direct topic sentence, then add one or two clear supporting details using linking words. Avoid vague phrases and grammatical errors (e.g. 'romantic ways', 'really cute to be looked at'). Use varied vocabulary (e.g. 'beautiful', 'symbolize love'). Keep to maximum 3–4 short sentences.

Exemplo: Yes, I love flowers. I find them beautiful and they often symbolize love and affection. For example, roses are a common gift on special occasions because they express romantic feelings.

Sugestão: Begin with a clear topic sentence. Fix grammar (e.g. 'I don't know anyone' → 'I do know someone'). Add specific details and use linking words to connect ideas. Avoid repetition and unnecessary fillers.

Exemplo: Yes, I do — my mother loves flowers. She spends time in our backyard every evening tending to roses and marigolds, and she enjoys watching them bloom and smelling their scent.

Sugestão: Answer directly and give specific examples and reasons. Correct grammar (e.g. 'there are many flowers' and 'because my mother loves them'). Use linking words like 'because' or 'for example'. Avoid fillers ('umm').

Exemplo: Yes, there are many flowers around my house because my mother grows them in our garden. For example, we have roses, lilies and marigolds that bloom from spring to autumn.

Sugestão: Provide a clear topic sentence and expand briefly with a reason using linking words. Correct grammatical mistakes and choice of words ('I prefer taking photos of food' rather than 'I more to taking'). Keep it concise and natural.

Exemplo: No, I don't usually photograph flowers. I prefer taking pictures of food because I enjoy food photography and find floral shots less interesting.

Sugestão: Make a direct statement then give clear examples and reasons using linking words like 'for example' or 'for instance'. Fix grammar ('people', 'to show love to someone', 'to comfort someone who is sad'). Use more precise vocabulary (e.g. 'express sympathy' instead of 'to cherish').

Exemplo: Yes, people often send flowers in my country. For example, they give roses for romantic occasions and bouquets to express sympathy or to comfort someone who is grieving.

× 'They symbolize the romantic ways and really cute to be looked at.'

✓ 'They symbolize romance and are really cute to look at.'

'the romantic ways' is an incorrect adjective phrase; use the noun 'romance'. 'really cute to be looked at' uses passive and awkward phrasing; use active adjective 'cute' with 'to look at' and include verb 'are' to link subject and adjective. Suggestion: use noun forms for abstract ideas and simple active constructions.'

× 'Yes, I don't know anyone who love flowers, which is my mom.'

✓ 'Yes, I know someone who loves flowers: my mom.'

'I don't know anyone' contradicts following clause; likely meant 'I know someone'. 'who love' is wrong agreement with 'someone' so should be 'who loves'. 'which' is wrong relative pronoun for people; use 'who' or rephrase. Suggestion: keep subject consistent and use 'who' for people.'

× 'She love flower very much and she really like to look at the flowers every evening at the at our house backyard.'

✓ 'She loves flowers very much and she really likes to look at the flowers in our backyard every evening.'

'She love' and 'she really like' are incorrect because third-person singular requires verb+s (loves, likes). 'flower' should be plural 'flowers'. Word order 'at the at our house backyard' is incorrect and redundant; use 'in our backyard.' Suggestion: add -s for third-person singular verbs and use correct preposition and word order.'

× 'Are there a lot of flowers where you live?'

✓ 'Are there a lot of flowers where you live?'

'Are there a lot of flowers where you live?' is grammatically correct as asked; no correction needed. Included here for completeness.'

× 'Yes, there's such a lot of flowers where I live since my mom very love flowers such as rose, umm and many more.'

✓ 'Yes, there are many flowers where I live because my mom really loves flowers, such as roses and many others.'

'there's' is contraction of 'there is' which does not agree with plural 'a lot of flowers'; use 'there are'. 'since' used for time is better replaced with 'because' to indicate reason. 'my mom very love' lacks adverb and correct verb form; use 'really loves'. 'rose' should be plural 'roses' and 'many more' better as 'many others.' Suggestion: match plurality, use 'because' for reason, add -s for third-person singular, pluralize nouns.'

× 'No I don't really like to take photos of flowers. I more to taking photos of food because I found it boring.'

✓ 'No, I don't really like taking photos of flowers. I prefer taking photos of food because I find flowers boring.'

'like to take' is acceptable but 'like taking' is more natural here; original 'I more to taking' is ungrammatical—use 'I prefer taking' or 'I tend to take'. 'I found it boring' mixes past tense with present preference; use present 'I find it boring.' Suggestion: use 'prefer' for comparisons and keep tense consistent.'

× 'Yes, I think peoples in my country often send flowers to others, such as when they want to show their love with the person that they love and to cherish someone who is sad.'

✓ 'Yes, I think people in my country often send flowers to others, for example when they want to show love to someone they care about or to comfort someone who is sad.'

'peoples' is incorrect plural of 'people'; use 'people'. 'show their love with the person that they love' is redundant and awkward; simplify to 'show love to someone they care about.' 'to cherish someone who is sad' is unnatural in this context; use 'to comfort someone who is sad.' Suggestion: use 'people', avoid redundancy, choose idiomatic verbs like 'show love to' and 'comfort.'