Name— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 回答直接、切题，但第二句重复了“remember people's names”，没有增加新的信息。可以补充一个具体原因或方法，并用连接词自然展开，例如说明你会把名字和初次见面的场景联系起来。

Exemplo: Yes, I’m usually quite good at remembering people’s names. I tend to remember them after hearing them a couple of times, especially if I’ve had a proper conversation with the person.

Sugestão: 你提到了把名字与声音、长相或衣服联系起来，这是相关的记忆方法。不过句子中“or their. Looking or shirts”不完整且不自然。建议整理成清晰的并列结构，并补充一个具体例子。

Exemplo: I usually associate a person’s name with something distinctive about them, such as their face, voice, or clothing. For example, if someone has a bright red jacket, I might connect that image with their name.

Sugestão: 你尝试根据彼此认识的时间来区分感受，思路是合理的，但表达中有重复和语法错误（如“just we just”），而且“upset if the latter”让意思不够清楚。建议明确说明两种情况分别对应什么感受，并用“if”句表达完整。

Exemplo: It depends on how well I know the person. If we’ve known each other for a long time, I feel a little hurt when they forget my name. But if we’ve only just met, I don’t really mind.

Sugestão: 你直接回答了问题，也补充了可能忘记名字的情况。不过“haven't keep in touch”应改为“haven't kept in touch”，“for over years”表达不自然；“record the name”也不适合表达“记住名字”。建议使用“remember”并说明长时间不联系会带来什么影响。

Exemplo: I don’t often forget people’s names. However, if I haven’t kept in touch with someone for several years, I might struggle to remember their name. Seeing them again usually helps me recall it.

× Well, I usually remember people's names by connecting their names with their voices or faces or their. Looking or shirts.

✓ Well, I usually remember people's names by connecting them with people's voices, faces, looks, or shirts.

原句中“or their. Looking or shirts”结构不完整，句子被错误地断开了。并列列举时应保持结构一致；这里可以把 names 用代词 them 指代，并用逗号分隔并列项目。

× Actually, it depends on whether we've met for a long time or just we just get to know each other.

✓ Actually, it depends on whether we've known each other for a long time or have just met.

“whether”后面连接的两个部分结构不平行，而且“just we just”重复。描述认识一段时间或刚认识，应使用平行结构“we've known ... or have just met”。

× So if it's the first case, it would be a little upset.

✓ So, if it's the first case, I would be a little upset.

“upset”描述人的感受，主语应是感到难过的人。原句中的“it”不能指代说话者，应改为“I”。

× Upset if the if it's the latter.

✓ I would be upset if it's the latter.

原句是缺少主语和谓语的句子片段，“if the”也造成结构错误。补上主语“I”和谓语“would be”，并删除多余的“the”，即可构成完整条件句。

× That's not the case for me, unless we haven't keep in touch for over years.

✓ That's not the case for me, unless we haven't kept in touch for over a year.

“haven't”后面需要接动词的过去分词，因此“keep”应改为“kept”。

× That's not the case for me, unless we haven't keep in touch for over years.

✓ That's not the case for me, unless we haven't kept in touch for over a year.

表示超过一年的时间时，应说“over a year”；“over years”不能用于这里。也可以说“for more than a year”。