Name— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 先直接回答“对我来说不容易”，然后说明在短时间内认识很多人时更难，并给出派对或会议等具体场景。注意使用自然表达：说“remember people's names”，而不是“one's names”；说“in a short time”，而不是“in the quick time”。最后一句意思不清楚，可以改为“我会努力把名字和长相联系起来”。

Exemplo: No, I find it quite difficult to remember people's names. It's especially challenging when I meet several people in a short time, such as at a party or a conference. I try to connect each person's name with their face, but I don't always remember them.

Sugestão: 回答时先说明你的记忆方法，再用一个简短例子展开。当前回答有重复和停顿，例如“match their and match a person”，建议删去重复部分。描述外貌可用“appearance”，性格可用“personality”；“内向的人”应说“an introvert”或“introverted”。

Exemplo: I try to connect a person's name with a noticeable feature of their appearance or personality. For instance, I might remember someone as the tall, outgoing person I met at a party. This association makes it easier for me to recall their name later.

Sugestão: 回答内容切题，也解释了你为什么不介意。注意主谓一致：“someone doesn't remember”；“I'm quite understand”应改为“I understand”。“如果我不够引人注意”可以自然地说“if I haven't made a strong impression”。适当减少重复的“quite”，让表达更流畅。

Exemplo: I don't mind too much if someone forgets my name, partly because I sometimes forget other people's names too. I understand that it's difficult to remember everyone, especially if we don't meet often. So I don't take it personally.

Sugestão: 你给出了清楚的对比：常见的人比较容易记住，偶尔见面的人则容易忘记。建议开头先直接回答问题，并把“work association”改为“work together”或“have a connection through work”。注意主语一致，避免“someone I don't see each other”；“big big party”可简化为“a large party”。

Exemplo: Yes, I sometimes forget people's names, especially if I've only met them once or twice. I usually remember the names of people I see regularly or work with. At a large party, though, I may meet many people at once, so their names can be hard to remember.

× Well, I have to confess it's quite difficult for me to remember one's names.

✓ Well, I have to confess it's quite difficult for me to remember people's names.

这里谈的是“人们的名字”，应使用复数所有格 people's。one's 通常指泛指的“一个人”，与 names 复数形式不匹配。

× Um, I find it especially when I have to remember a lot of person's names in the quick time, such as in a party or at a meeting, at a conference.

✓ Um, I find it especially difficult when I have to remember a lot of people's names in a short time, such as at a party, a meeting, or a conference.

find it 后面需要补充形容词 difficult，才能构成完整表达；a lot of 后应接复数名词所有格 people's；表示“短时间内”应说 in a short time，而非 in the quick time；表示参加聚会通常用 at a party。

× I think it's quite difficult for, so I I just have to struggle a person's face.

✓ I think it's quite difficult for me, so I just have to struggle to remember a person's face.

for 后需要补出宾语 me；so 前后应连接完整的分句。struggle 后表达“努力做某事”通常用 struggle to do something，因此应说 struggle to remember。还应去掉重复的 I。

× I try to remember the characteristic of that person on both in their outlook or their personality.

✓ I try to remember that person's characteristics, both their appearance and their personality.

描述外貌不使用 on 或 in；这里应直接并列 appearance 和 personality。both 应与 and 搭配，不能与 or 连用。谈到一个人的多个特征时，characteristics 通常用复数。

× For example, and then I can match their and match a person with their name.

✓ For example, I can match a person with their name.

句首 For example 后不应直接用 and then 连接一个没有清楚前文的分句；their 单独放在 match 后也缺少对应的名词。删去多余部分后，句子结构更完整，且 their name 可指代前面的 a person。

× For example, I try to remember by a person by whether they are tall or short or whether this person is outgoing or introvert.

✓ For example, I try to remember a person by whether they are tall or short, or whether they are outgoing or introverted.

remember 后直接接人，不需要第一个 by；表示记住某人的特征时，可用 by 引出判断依据。outgoing 是形容词，因此对应的表达应为 introverted，而不是名词 introvert。

× Well, I'm quite fine if someone don't remember my name because I often forget other person's name.

✓ Well, I'm quite fine if someone doesn't remember my name because I often forget other people's names.

someone 是第三人称单数，因此一般现在时应使用 doesn't，而不是 don't。这里泛指其他人的名字，应使用复数所有格 other people's names。

× I'm quite understand that it's hard to remember one's name if we don't see each other quite often, or if I'm not quite standing out, so I don't take it personally.

✓ I quite understand that it's hard to remember someone's name if we don't see each other very often, or if I don't stand out, so I don't take it personally.

understand 是实义动词，前面不能加 am；应说 I quite understand。一般性地表达“不常见面”可用 very often。此处表达“不突出”用一般现在时 I don't stand out 更合适。

× If I see that person very often or I have some association with that person like work association, I won't forget their name, but if someone I don't see each other quite often or we just meet once or twice at a big big party, I yes, I will forget their names.

✓ If I see that person very often or have some association with them, such as a work-related association, I won't forget their name. But if it's someone I don't see very often, or if we just meet once or twice at a big party, I will forget their name.

原句后半部分 if someone I don't see each other 缺少完整的句子结构，而且 someone 与 each other 的指代搭配不当。可改成 if it's someone I don't see very often。句中的 I yes, I 结构不完整且重复，应删去多余的 I yes。big big 属于重复表达，保留一个 big 即可。