Name— Part 1 Relatório

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Part 1

Examinador

Is it easy for you to remember people's names?

Candidato

Yes, I can usually remember people's names because I have big memory and I focus on repeating the name when I first meet someone. For example, I often use simple tricks or connect the name with a visual image, which helps me recall it later

Examinador

How do you remember people's names?

Candidato

And usually I can repeat I try to repeat the synonym when I first meeting someone, and I can use some simple tricks and a connection to remember the name

Examinador

How do you feel when people can't remember your name?

Candidato

I don't mind when people can't remember my name because it's quite common. If it happens, I usually repeat my name politely or introduce my myself again.

Examinador

Do you often forget people's names?

Candidato

No, I don't I don't forget people's names when I first when I first meet meet him, because I have a good memory, because I have a strong memory. And also I can use some simple tricks to repeat it repeat it her name so

Avaliação

Total

Total: 5.0Fluência e coerência: 5.0Pronúncia: 5.0Gramática: 5.0Recurso lexical: 5.5

Part 1

Is it easy for you to remember people's names?

Pontuação: 75.0

Sugestão: 回答切题,也提供了具体的记忆方法。不过,“I have big memory”不自然,建议说“I have a good memory”。可以稍微精简,并在例子前使用清晰的连接方式;句末补上标点。

Exemplo: Yes, I can usually remember people's names because I have a good memory. When I meet someone, I repeat their name quietly to myself and sometimes connect it with a visual image. That makes it easier to recall later.

How do you remember people's names?

Pontuação: 48.0

Sugestão: 回答中有明显重复和语法错误,例如“repeat I try to repeat”和“when I first meeting someone”。“synonym”意为“同义词”,这里应表达“重复对方的名字”。建议先直接回答问题,再用一种具体方法补充说明,例如把名字与面孔或视觉形象联系起来。

Exemplo: I usually repeat a person's name shortly after I hear it. I also try to connect the name with their face or a visual image, which helps me remember it.

How do you feel when people can't remember your name?

Pontuação: 78.0

Sugestão: 回答直接、逻辑清楚,也说明了自己的应对方式。注意修正“introduce my myself”,应为“introduce myself”;也可以用“remind them of my name”让表达更自然。

Exemplo: I don't mind when people forget my name because it happens quite often. I just politely remind them of my name or introduce myself again.

Do you often forget people's names?

Pontuação: 42.0

Sugestão: 回答表达了明确立场,但重复和停顿较多,句子也没有完整结束。避免连续重复“I don't”和“because”;“meet him”应改为中性的“meet someone”,并明确说明你使用的记忆方法。建议控制在两到三句内。

Exemplo: No, I don't often forget people's names. I have a good memory, and I usually repeat someone's name when we first meet. If the name is difficult to remember, I connect it with a visual image.

Gramática

22: Article errors(冠词错误)

× Yes, I can usually remember people's names because I have big memory and I focus on repeating the name when I first meet someone.

✓ Yes, I can usually remember people's names because I have a good memory and I focus on repeating the name when I first meet someone.

这里的 memory 表示“记忆力”时,通常用 a good memory 这样的表达。big memory 前缺少冠词,而且 big memory 也不是表达“记忆力好”的自然说法。建议使用 have a good/strong memory。

8: Verb + -ing form(动词 -ing 形式错误)

× And usually I can repeat I try to repeat the synonym when I first meeting someone, and I can use some simple tricks and a connection to remember the name.

✓ Usually, I try to repeat the name when I first meet someone, and I can use some simple tricks or make an association to remember it.

when 引导的时间状语从句需要完整的主语和谓语。这里应使用一般现在时 meet,而不是 meeting。表达“第一次见到某人”时,可以说 when I first meet someone。

12: Incorrect use of pronouns(代词使用错误)

× If it happens, I usually repeat my name politely or introduce my myself again.

✓ If it happens, I usually repeat my name politely or introduce myself again.

my 是形容词性物主代词,不能和反身代词 myself 连用。这里 introduce 后应直接使用 myself,表示“介绍我自己”。

12: Incorrect use of pronouns(代词使用错误)

× No, I don't I don't forget people's names when I first when I first meet meet him, because I have a good memory, because I have a strong memory.

✓ No, I don't forget people's names when I first meet them, because I have a strong memory.

people's names 指许多人的名字,后面应用复数代词 them,而不是指单数男性的 him。建议让代词与前文所指的人在数和含义上保持一致。

12: Incorrect use of pronouns(代词使用错误)

× And also I can use some simple tricks to repeat it repeat it her name so.

✓ I can also use some simple tricks to repeat their names.

前文谈的是 people 的名字,因此这里用 their names 与复数含义保持一致。it 是单数代词,her 指特定女性,都不适合指代泛指的多个人。建议确认代词所指对象,并保持单复数一致。

Vocabulário

Big— Large; Elder; Important; Ambitious
Good— Fine; Virtuous; Well-behaved; Right; Capable
Simple— Straightforward; Clear; Plain; Candid
Strong— Powerful; Forceful; Secure; Durable; Forceful
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