Part 1
Examinador
Is it easy for you to remember people's names?
Candidato
Yeah, absolutely. I feel like one of my tenants is to remember people. I can easily correlate the name and face, so I make a lot of friends.
Examinador
How do you remember people's names?
Candidato
I don't know, uh, uh, you know, I'm, I'm Chinese. So our name is have seen her Ming, which means surname and, uh, name in English. So every words is easy for me to remember.
Examinador
How do you feel when people can't remember your name?
Candidato
That's OK. Umm, it's, it's really normal because every day we have to face so many information and, uh, solve problems. It's easy for a people can remember your name, especially in long time. No see.
Examinador
Do you often forget people's names?
Candidato
No, no, really, no. Right now, like I said, I'm really good at to remember people's names. So every time when I make, every time when I make people, I can call say name right now.
Is it easy for you to remember people's names?
Pontuação: 55.0Sugestão: 回答切题,也提供了原因和结果,但“one of my tenants”用词错误,可能想表达“one of my talents”;“correlate the name and face”不够自然。建议直接回答后,用具体方法说明自己如何把名字和脸联系起来,并避免不准确的因果关系。
Exemplo: Yes, I’m quite good at remembering people’s names. I usually connect a person’s name with their face or something distinctive about them. This also makes it easier for me to recognize them when we meet again.
How do you remember people's names?
Pontuação: 30.0Sugestão: 目前没有清楚回答“你如何记住名字”,且出现多处语法和表达问题,例如“our name is have…”和“every words”。可以说明一种具体记忆方法;如果要谈中文姓名,使用“a surname and a given name”,并解释它如何帮助你记忆。减少填充词,让回答更连贯。
Exemplo: I usually repeat the person’s name once or twice after I hear it. Since Chinese names often have a clear surname and given name, I sometimes pay attention to the meaning of the characters as well. That helps me remember the name more easily.
How do you feel when people can't remember your name?
Pontuação: 42.0Sugestão: 你表达了理解对方的态度,也尝试解释原因,但后半部分语法不清楚。“information”是不可数名词;“It's easy for a people can remember your name”应改为更自然的表达。建议直接说明自己的感受,再给出一个简短、合理的原因。
Exemplo: I don’t mind too much because it’s easy to forget a name when you meet many people. I might gently remind them of my name, especially if we haven’t seen each other for a long time. It’s not something I take personally.
Do you often forget people's names?
Pontuação: 40.0Sugestão: 回答的立场明确,但有重复和明显的搭配、语法错误:“good at”后应接动名词“remembering”;“make people”不能表示“认识别人”;“call say name”表达不清。建议用“meet people”和“call them by name”,并补充一个简短的记忆方法。
Exemplo: No, I rarely forget people’s names. I’m quite good at remembering them, especially when I use the person’s name during our conversation. If I’m unsure, I’ll politely ask them to remind me.
× So our name is have seen her Ming, which means surname and, uh, name in English.
✓ So our names have a surname and a given name.
原句中 “is have” 不能这样连用,句子结构不完整且不符合英语语序。可以用 “have” 表示“有”,并将 “name” 改为复数 “names” 来泛指中国人的姓名。
× So every words is easy for me to remember.
✓ So every word is easy for me to remember.
“every” 后面必须接单数可数名词,因此应将 “words” 改为 “word”。改成单数后,谓语 “is” 也与主语保持一致。
× Every day we have to face so many information and, uh, solve problems.
✓ Every day we have to face so much information and, uh, solve problems.
“information” 是不可数名词,不能用 “many” 修饰;应使用 “much”,也可以说 “a lot of information”。
× It's easy for a people can remember your name, especially in long time. No see.
✓ It's easy for people to remember your name, especially after not seeing you for a long time.
“people” 是复数形式,不能说 “a people”;这里应去掉 “a”。另外,“easy for someone” 后面应接 “to do”,不能接 “can do”。表示“很长时间没见”时,可用 “after not seeing you for a long time”。
× It's easy for a people can remember your name, especially in long time. No see.
✓ It's easy for people to remember your name, especially after not seeing you for a long time.
“It's easy for someone to do something” 是正确结构,因此应将 “can remember” 改成 “to remember”。“No see” 不是完整、正确的英语表达,可以改为 “not seeing you”。
× I'm really good at to remember people's names.
✓ I'm really good at remembering people's names.
介词 “at” 后面接动词时,动词应使用 -ing 形式,因此 “to remember” 应改为 “remembering”。
× So every time when I make, every time when I make people, I can call say name right now.
✓ So every time I meet someone, I can say their name right away.
原句中 “make people” 和 “call say name” 结构不完整,难以构成正确句子。表达“遇见某人”可用 “meet someone”,表达“说出他们的名字”可用 “say their name”。