Name— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 질문에 직접 답한 점은 좋지만, ‘people’s name’은 ‘people’s names’, ‘remember ability’는 ‘memory’로 고쳐야 합니다. 같은 표현인 ‘remember people’s name’을 반복하지 말고, ‘It helps me build friendly relationships’처럼 자연스러운 표현을 사용하세요. 주제문 뒤에 구체적인 이유나 짧은 예시를 연결어와 함께 제시하면 더 효과적입니다.

Exemplo: No, I’m not very good at remembering people’s names because I don’t have a strong memory. However, I try to remember them because using someone’s name can help me build a friendly relationship.

Sugestão: 답변이 중간에 끝났고, ‘It depends on situation’과 ‘There are many reasons’는 질문에 대한 구체적인 방법을 제시하지 못합니다. ‘repeat repeat more lipids’는 의미가 불분명하므로 ‘repeat the name several times’ 또는 ‘associate it with the person’s appearance’처럼 정확한 표현을 사용해야 합니다. 한 가지 방법을 먼저 말하고, 그 방법의 결과를 설명하는 2~3문장 구조로 답하세요.

Exemplo: I usually repeat the person’s name several times after I meet them. I also try to associate the name with their appearance or personality. This helps me remember the name more easily.

Sugestão: ‘I don’t matter’가 아니라 감정을 표현하는 ‘I don’t mind’ 또는 ‘I’m not offended’를 사용해야 합니다. ‘some people doesn’t’는 ‘some people don’t’, ‘I doesn’t’는 ‘I don’t’로 고치세요. 같은 단어를 반복하지 말고, 자신의 경험과 연결해 자연스럽게 이유를 설명하면 좋습니다.

Exemplo: I don’t really mind when people forget my name because I sometimes forget names too. I usually just smile and say, “That’s okay.” However, I would feel slightly disappointed if it happened repeatedly.

Sugestão: 빈도에 직접 답했고 이유와 감정도 제시했지만, ‘people’s name’은 ‘people’s names’, ‘sometimes I forgot’은 현재 습관이므로 ‘sometimes I forget’으로 고쳐야 합니다. 이름을 잊었을 때 ‘sad and tired’보다는 상황에 맞는 ‘embarrassed’ 또는 ‘awkward’가 더 자연스럽습니다. ‘but’와 ‘when’을 활용해 반복을 줄이고, 이름을 기억하기 위해 하는 행동을 구체적으로 덧붙이세요.

Exemplo: Yes, I often forget people’s names because I don’t have a very strong memory. I sometimes feel embarrassed when this happens, so I try to repeat a person’s name after meeting them. That usually helps me remember it.

× To be honest, it is not easy to remember people's name because I think my remember ability is quite low.

✓ To be honest, it is not easy to remember people's names because I think my remember ability is quite low.

The plural noun people refers to more than one person, so the possessive noun name should also be plural: people's names.

× Remember name is a very great way to become friendly.

✓ Remembering names is a very great way to become friendly.

When a verb functions as the subject of a sentence, it should usually take the -ing form. Remembering is the gerund form of remember.

× Remember name is a very great way to become friendly.

✓ Remembering names is a very great way to become friendly.

The sentence refers to names in general, so the countable noun name should be plural: names.

× It is a great way to memorize people's name.

✓ It is a great way to memorize people's names.

People's refers to multiple people, so the noun name should be plural: people's names.

× So when I need some need to remember name, I use

✓ So when I need to remember a name, I use this method.

The original sentence contains repeated words and ends without a complete complement after use. A complete sentence needs a clear object or phrase after the verb use.

× I don't matter, I don't matter it because I also cannot remember the name.

✓ It does not matter to me because I also cannot remember people's names.

The expression meaning that something is unimportant is it does not matter to me, not I don't matter it. The pronoun it must be the subject of matter.

× So when when some people doesn't remember remember my name, I doesn't matter if I say that's okay.

✓ So when some people don't remember my name, it doesn't matter if I say, That's okay.

The plural subject people takes do not, or don't. In the second clause, it is singular, so it takes does not, or doesn't. The repeated words have also been removed to make the sentence grammatically complete.

× To be honest, I usually cannot remember people's name because my memory is not strong.

✓ To be honest, I usually cannot remember people's names because my memory is not strong.

People's refers to more than one person, so name should be plural: people's names.

× So I always try to remember the people's name, but sometimes I forgot people's name.

✓ So I always try to remember people's names, but sometimes I forget people's names.

The speaker is discussing people's names in general, so the countable noun name should be plural. The unnecessary definite article the has also been removed because no specific group has been mentioned.

× So I always try to remember the people's name, but sometimes I forgot people's name.

✓ So I always try to remember people's names, but sometimes I forget people's names.

The adverb sometimes describes a repeated or usual situation, so the present tense forget is more appropriate than the past tense forgot.

× When I forgot people's name, I feel very sad and tired.

✓ When I forget people's names, I feel very sad and tired.

This sentence describes a repeated situation, so both verbs should be in the present tense: forget and feel. The noun names should also be plural because the statement is general.