Name— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 질문에 직접 답한 점은 좋지만, “people’s name”은 복수형인 “people’s names”로 고쳐야 합니다. 또한 “at the moment I hear it”은 다소 어색하므로 “as soon as I hear them”을 사용하는 것이 자연스럽습니다. 답변을 한 문장 더 확장하여 구체적인 이유나 경험을 덧붙이면 더 효과적입니다.

Exemplo: Yes, it’s quite easy for me to remember people’s names. I usually remember them as soon as I hear them, especially if I repeat the name during the conversation.

Sugestão: 의미는 전달되지만 두 문장을 연결하는 접속사가 없고 문장 구조가 불완전합니다. “There is no particular way to memorise them” 뒤에 “because”를 넣어 이유를 명확하게 연결하세요. “memorise”의 목적어로 “people’s names” 또는 “them”을 사용하고, 구체적인 예를 추가하면 좋습니다.

Exemplo: I don’t use any particular technique to memorise people’s names because I’m naturally quite good at remembering things. However, if a name is difficult, I repeat it a few times in my head.

Sugestão: 상대방을 이해하는 태도와 이유를 제시한 점은 좋습니다. 하지만 “a natural phenomenon”처럼 관사를 넣어야 하며, “is can be”는 문법적으로 틀렸으므로 “can be”로 고쳐야 합니다. “other people’s information”은 이 문맥에서 어색하므로 “someone else’s name”이라고 표현하는 것이 더 정확하고 자연스럽습니다.

Exemplo: I don’t feel particularly upset because I think it’s quite natural. Some people find it difficult to remember someone else’s name, especially when they meet many new people at once.

Sugestão: 첫 부분인 “I don’t really” 뒤에 동사가 없어 문장이 완성되지 않았습니다. “I don’t really forget people’s names”처럼 질문의 핵심 표현을 반복하여 직접 답하세요. 또한 “getting other people’s information”은 부자연스러우므로 “remembering people’s names”로 바꾸고, 빈도를 설명하는 짧은 이유를 추가하세요.

Exemplo: No, I don’t often forget people’s names. I’m generally good at remembering them, although I sometimes forget a name if I meet several new people at the same time.

× It's easy for me. I remember people's name at the moment I hear it.

✓ It's easy for me. I remember people's names at the moment I hear them.

The noun names refers to the names of multiple people, so it should be plural. Use names instead of name.

× It's easy for me. I remember people's name at the moment I hear it.

✓ It's easy for me. I remember people's names at the moment I hear them.

The pronoun them refers to people's names, which is plural. Therefore, them should be used instead of it.

× There is no particular way to memorise I am naturally good at memorising things.

✓ There is no particular way I memorize names; I am naturally good at memorizing things.

The original sentence incorrectly joins two independent clauses without suitable punctuation or a conjunction. Use a semicolon to connect the two complete ideas. Also, names specifies what is being memorized.

× I think it's really natural phenomenon because recalling other people's information is can be difficult for some people.

✓ I think it's a really natural phenomenon because recalling other people's information can be difficult for some people.

The singular countable noun phenomenon requires an article. Use a before really natural phenomenon.

× I think it's really natural phenomenon because recalling other people's information is can be difficult for some people.

✓ I think it's a really natural phenomenon because recalling other people's information can be difficult for some people.

Can is a modal verb and should be followed directly by the base form of the verb. The verb is cannot appear before can, so remove is.

× I don't really I am good at getting other people's information

✓ I don't really forget people's names; I am good at remembering them.

The original answer contains two clauses that are not grammatically connected, and the first clause is incomplete because forget is missing. Add forget people's names and use a semicolon to connect the two complete clauses.

× I don't really I am good at getting other people's information

✓ I don't really forget people's names; I am good at remembering them.

The pronoun them correctly refers to people's names, which is plural. It is more appropriate than using a singular pronoun for multiple names.