Name— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 「It's obviously I'm oddly remembering...」は不自然で意味が伝わりにくいため、まず「Yes, I find it fairly easy to remember people's names.」のように直接答えましょう。「many a lot of people」のような重複表現は避け、「I talked to many people」にします。また、名前を顔と結びつける理由を、リンク語を使って明確に説明してください。

Exemplo: Yes, I find it fairly easy to remember people's names. I usually connect a person's name with their face, which helps me recall it later. For example, in high school, I spoke to many classmates and quickly remembered their names because I associated them with their faces.

Sugestão: 最初の答え方はよいですが、「linking their personality and characteristics together」はやや不自然なので、「associate a name with a person's personality or appearance」のように表現しましょう。「home university」は意味が不明確で、「high school and university」に直します。また、Instagramとの関係を具体的に説明し、「For instance」や「As a result」などのリンク語を使って論理を明確にしてください。

Exemplo: I usually remember people's names by associating them with their personality or appearance. For instance, I remember many of my high-school and university friends because I followed them on Instagram. Their photos and personal interests helped me connect each name with the right person.

Sugestão: 直接的な回答と対比を示す「However」は効果的で、内容も明確です。ただし、「lewd」は「わいせつな」という意味で、この文脈では不適切です。「rude」または「dismissive」を使いましょう。さらに、「I understand that names can be difficult to remember」のような理由を加えると、より自然で説得力のある回答になります。

Exemplo: I usually don't mind when people forget my name because it happens to everyone occasionally. However, it depends on how they react. If they politely ask me to remind them, I am fine with it, but I would feel annoyed if they were rude or dismissive.

Sugestão: 回答の構成は明確ですが、「Actually no」は「Actually, no, I don't...」と区切り、「a memoir detail」は不自然なので「a memorable detail」または「a personal detail」にします。「I am linking Anna」は現在進行形ではなく、「I associate Anna's name with her light-coloured glasses」のように言いましょう。眼鏡という具体例はよいので、適切な語彙と文法で表現してください。

Exemplo: Actually, no, I rarely forget people's names. I usually associate a name with the person's face or a memorable detail about them. For example, I remember my university friend Anna because I associate her name with her light-coloured glasses.

× It's obviously I'm oddly remembering people's names that's because I guess I love hearing other people talking.

✓ Obviously, I find it difficult to remember people's names because I enjoy hearing other people talk.

The original sentence combines several incomplete and incorrectly connected clauses. Use a clear subject and verb structure, such as I find it difficult. After enjoy, use a gerund, hearing, and after hearing, use the base form talk rather than talking.

× For example when I was in high school, I talked a lot to many a lot of people and linked them to faces.

✓ For example, when I was in high school, I talked to many people and associated their names with their faces.

Many and a lot of are both quantifying expressions, so they should not be used together in this way. Use either many people or a lot of people. Also, associated their names with their faces expresses the intended meaning more clearly.

× For example almost all my friends from high school and home university were connected with me also on Instagram apps.

✓ For example, almost all my friends from high school and university are also connected with me on Instagram.

This describes a present connection, so use the present tense are connected instead of the past tense were connected. The phrase home university is not appropriate here, and on Instagram is sufficient without apps.

× If they are lewd about it, I might feel annoyed.

✓ If they are rude about it, I might feel annoyed.

Lewd means sexually inappropriate or obscene. Rude is the correct adjective for someone who behaves disrespectfully or carelessly toward another person.

× I usually remember them by associating the name with their face or a memoir detail.

✓ I usually remember them by associating their names with their faces or with a memorable detail.

The pronoun them refers to multiple people, so the related nouns should normally be plural: their names and their faces. Memoir means a written account of someone's experiences; memorable detail is the appropriate expression here.

× For example, I am linking Anna, one of my university friends with her light glasses.

✓ For example, I associate Anna, one of my university friends, with her light-colored glasses.

This is a general method of remembering someone, so use the simple present associate rather than the present continuous am linking. Light-colored is clearer than light when describing the color of glasses. Commas are also needed around the nonessential phrase one of my university friends.